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Old 11-06-2009, 09:27 AM   #1
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Default Canvas (Song Lyrics)

Polychrome - Canvas | Lyrics

You stare against the sun,
another mirror's breaking.
This heart has long been gone
in all the turns your taking.
Don't look into the light,
you only feel it shade you.
I see your empty eyes,
I know your hollow life.

(You lived,
you learned.) x2

You're made out of canvas,
you'll never be free.
But I know you like this.
**** all your pink lies,
your serenity.
I'd do anything to break you in.

You're buying your own lies
and you embrace them within.
Your tears are just diguise,
your heart is only skin.

(You lived,)
You learned.

You're made out of canvas,
you'll never be free.
But I know you love this.
**** all your pink lies,
your serenity.
I'd do anything to break you in.

You're not yourself,
'cause you don't feel.
You're just a picture,
you ain't real.
You lived, you learned,
the tide has turned.
And I can see you're just a shell.

You're made out of canvas,
you'll never be free.
But I know you love this.
**** all your pink lies,
your serenity.
I'd do anything to break you in.
You're made out of canvas,
you'll never be free.
But I know you'll hate this.
**** all your pink lies,
your serenity.
I'd do anything to break you in.
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Old 11-07-2009, 04:36 AM   #2
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It's ok... but what's the rhythm/tune?
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Well, that's a little hard to get across now. Just go by the words.
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Sing it> record it> post it.
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I don't have a mic. And anyway, jesus, just regard the content.
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The first part was sex, I feel like that she repeated more in the song.

The chorus part, this part
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You're made out of canvas,
you'll never be free.
But I know you love this.
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**** all your pink lies,
your serenity.
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I'd do anything to break you in.
Like, I can see how the rest of it flows and stuff, or how it could possibly flow, but I can't get this part. It sounds awkward and choppy to me. The ---- is where I can't figure out how to transition between lines.

I thoroughly like every part besides that. However it seems kind of short to be a song, but I don't know anything about songs besides that I can't write one. :/

Also, is this about sex? Probably not, but all songs have to be about sex, that's something else I know.
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I COMMENTED ON THIS AND I EXPECT REPLIES OH MY JESUs
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Old 11-14-2009, 06:47 AM   #8
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The first part was sex, I feel like that she repeated more in the song.

The chorus part, this part


Like, I can see how the rest of it flows and stuff, or how it could possibly flow, but I can't get this part. It sounds awkward and choppy to me. The ---- is where I can't figure out how to transition between lines.

I thoroughly like every part besides that. However it seems kind of short to be a song, but I don't know anything about songs besides that I can't write one. :/

Also, is this about sex? Probably not, but all songs have to be about sex, that's something else I know.

Thanks for the comment :D
"You're made out of canvas, you'll never be free." and "**** all your pink lies, your serenity" are the two main parts of the chorus. The two remaining lines are kindof leading in and out of the main parts.
what, that sounds confusing.
The music that is already composed to accompany this is 3:46 long.

And nah, it's not about sex. It's about lying to yourself and living a life centered around a construct of lies. Well, yeah.
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Thanks for the comment :D
"You're made out of canvas, you'll never be free." and "**** all your pink lies, your serenity" are the two main parts of the chorus. The two remaining lines are kindof leading in and out of the main parts.
what, that sounds confusing.
The music that is already composed to accompany this is 3:46 long.

And nah, it's not about sex. It's about lying to yourself and living a life centered around a construct of lies. Well, yeah.
Men like you make me wish I was gay ;)
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