Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

[Dragonkof]

allright, dipshit.

1. Don't double post
2. There are threads saying how to upload your animations.


But. since you wish to spam up this thread, and being a dick while your at it, i might aswell say it nicely.

HARDEN THE **** UP


now. where was i.

ah yes.
Save the animation as a .gif, ok?
use these settings

Uncheck everything
Frame delay: 6
Shrink thingy: 2

then go to www.tinypic.com
upload it there. and grab the image code.

DUN DUN DUN DAAAAAAAH.

and i think you need 20 posts to post one.
k?

[Upps]

wow .

I mean yes yes, wut he said.

Also, I'm up for, mentoring.

[Dragonkof]

Cheese.
Aaaaamazing.

[Dante556]

U-t for god sakes please mentor meeee! :O

[Brian C]

allright, dipshit.

HARDEN THE **** UP

Jesus Christ, he just double posted saying some shit that didn't make sense, after a question. I used to do that too when I was here for only a few days. Go easy on the new members.

[Senor_Grunt]

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5536/punchga6.gif

Rate&&CC please. For serious, I need some brutally harsh criticism. PLEASE.

[RawGreen]

@senor grunt: the only part that's choppy is when the punching arm lowers. otherwise it's clean.

[Senor_Grunt]

Sweet. I'll make sure to work on that. I kinda noticed it moved a lot slower and choppier, but I didn't bother to fix it, too lazy... :3

[Dragonkof]

Ok.
Sorry Brian C.

[§lain]

Any good???

http://i38.tinypic.com/207nkso.jpg

http://i35.tinypic.com/qnr04p.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/16m28si.jpg

And yeah, I'm Irony from Droidz boards if anyone noticed. It's just that no one is responding to my thread over there and I wanna know my rank.

[Dragonkof]

medium beginner.
You're animations are quick stiff and choppy, and easing needs a big up aswell.
My favourite clip was the Walking.

Reminds me of my old style of walking.

[Dante556]

Yeah the walking animation was the best one

[§lain]

Alright, thanks guys.

[Arkehy]

Hey guys, I got bored so I made an animation. I tried to turn in into a test. Its a Back handspring thingy test.

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1586/backhandspringqg3.th.gif (http://img252.imageshack.us/my.php?image=backhandspringqg3.gif)http://img252.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

Please tell me what I need to improve on. Thanks.

[Dante556]

the legs are really spazzy when he does the wallflip backhand spring thing and it's choppy

[forneverdead]

this is my second pivot i ever made :D
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/ironman8r3a.gif

[Dragonkof]

wow.
that was very good for only a second pivot.

Try to work on easing, choppyness and spazzm's

[Zaku]

im not really new to pivot but i havent used it in a while so im just seeing if i should still post here...im trying to make this my avatar but it doesnt move...:Nooooooo:

also,i only spent like 5 min on this (its teh Carmelledansan dance =) )

[Dante556]

lol and to use as Avatar u have to save as GIF and upload on imageshack

[Zaku]

oh! thanks ill try it later,i need a photobucket account first

[Dante556]

lol Kk and i might do an animation soon

[Zaku]

heres one im currently working on...tellz me if i need to be here in the begginer thread or move on

[RawGreen]

oh! thanks ill try it later,i need a photobucket account first

upload it on http://www.Filecram.com

it's much easier

[Dante556]

Easing test!
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/7371/creativeox4.gifyou like it? =D

[RawGreen]

that's horrible easing
.

EDIT: not horrible, it's fair, not horrible.

[Dante556]

:O my mentor said to try something more creative to ease so i did and i got that

[Wooly]

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff165/juniorgurley/FirstBeamtest.gif, My first beam test. How's it look?

[Zaku]

he doesnt move enough...theres no 'feel' to it...as for the beam u should go to Droidz.org and find some stks there.

[Zaku]

here is one im currently working on
tell me if i should still post here in the begginer thread or not plz

http://www.filecram.com/files/my return.gifhttp://www.filecram.com/files/my return.gif

[Dante556]

Zaku it's really stiff... like when he kicks the wu into the ground he should come down sorta kneeling due to gravity

[Zaku]

you know...this alwas happens...i look at an anim. and dont notice the flaws but when i see a comment about one,i spot the flaw and its alwas realy big...i haddent noticed the stiffness and choppyness...like the handstand...that was horrible...oh well. so should i stay here?

[megaanims]

yup it's kinda uneased and a bit choppy but kinda cool effects especially the blood and dante can our pm be more like a gunfight anim matrix style

you don't to leave the forum you're just at the early stage of animating
I suggest you go to this site also you dante
http://secretstickgroup.proboards.com/index.cgi

[Zaku]

yup it's kinda uneased and a bit choppy but kinda cool effects especially the blood and dante can our pm be more like a gunfight anim matrix style

you don't to leave the forum you're just at the early stage of animating
I suggest you go to this site also you dante
http://secretstickgroup.proboards.com/index.cgi


no i didnt mean leave the site...i meant should i stay in the begginer thread...


also the anim in your sig. is awsome!

[Dante556]

lol your only saying that cause your moderater and liam is Admin

[LongArm]

lol your only saying that cause your moderater and liam is Admin

dante you will be a moderator , Yay the STAFF TEAM IS COMPLETE !!

[Zsdery]

this is my second pivot i ever made :D
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/ironman8r3a.gif
dudez ur pretty awesome...very good for second pivot i liek the flying effects!!!they were beasty!
good very good you'll be a great animator
that is probably med begginner

[BluGil]

Here i just made this. what do you think?

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=27320

[Zsdery]

you got a good idea on how to animate
that was ok

[Dante556]

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8563/kkko1.gifi have improved ( except for the legs lol)

[FoShizzle]

the back leg is really stiff.
Maybe a good tip is to make him actually take a small step then punch, like this:

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6379/punchto3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[LongArm]

Another walking test

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Walkingtest-1.gif

and an easing test
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Easingtest.gif
c and c all you want..

[Rabstar]

Liam man, I know u can do batter....
Better..sorry! lololol
But the reason the ball test looks bad, is that, it shud be gaining speed, if u want to do an easing test, do it right and lerft, not up and down.!

[LongArm]

Sorry, I was in a hurry making the easing test. because my brother wants the computer. I'll try making another one later..

[Rabstar]

Oh okay! ^^'
No worries...

[77xett]

The walk had him kicking his leg up too much and the punch before that was good it just needed that step.


Here's an animation I did for a zombie collab.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/zombieanimation.gif


The end was really fast because there was a 30 second limit and I was reaching it. Please C&C.

[Dante556]

pretty nice and where's the zombie collab at?

[Zaku]

man...i cant find any girl stks for pivot...any one know were some are (plz dont say droidz)

[77xett]

The collab hasn't been finished yet. I just wanted to see if my animation is up to par. The maker needs more entries and if you want to join go to youtube and search "starting pivot collab" (without quotes). You have to be approved by him (med beginner or up). It probably won't be done for awhile because there are only two entries complete.


Also, how do you determine a boy stick froma girl stick?

[Arkehy]

Hey guys. Yet again I want to test out physics. Here's an animation test, the ending is crappy, I know. But I got bored, and I didn't want him to end lying on the floor. Please tell me your thoughts.

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/4080/physicsfz1.th.gif (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=physicsfz1.gif)http://img413.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

[BluGil]

@ Arkehy

that sorta made no sense. what the hell happened?

[Arkehy]

Well, I "tried" to make it look like he was being pushed back by massive wind force. Then the ending... well. I just added that because I was bored.

[77xett]

A bit strange, but pretty good none the less. Although, the explosion wasn't so good.




I know it's late, but I was bored so here's some tests.


regular fps punch and kick tests.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/regularfpspunchtest.gif
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/regularfpskicktest.gif


Some 21 fps kick and punch tests

http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/fps21punchtest.gif
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/21fpskicktest.gif






I like how raising the fps to 21 made the animation smoother with the same amount of effort and time. Hope you like. Time for bed.

[megaanims]

hey guys new anim
http://i37.tinypic.com/9fv9eu.gif

[pivot_dude213]

hey guys what's my rank
http ://i34.tinypic.com/30selhc.jpg

[poppetje3D]

hey guys what's my rank
http ://i34.tinypic.com/30selhc.jpg

http://i34.tinypic.com/30selhc.jpg

Np.

I liked the Fx very much

[pivot_dude]

thanks man so what's my rank

[costeshow]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7933/catapultadw0.gif (http://imageshack.us)http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/catapultadw0.gif/1/w505.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img408/catapultadw0.gif/1/)

[poppetje3D]

thanks man so what's my rank

i Cant rank U.
Rank suck ...
but hell.
that animation was low beg.

[RawGreen]

thanks man so what's my rank

animation-low-beginner
not much to comment or rate on this about.


effects-.....

you know, I really can't rate this, not many pivot animators use effects similar to these until they're rookie and up.

I'm going to just say "nice" and walk away.

[Dark]

C&C MASSIVE POST

A bit strange, but pretty good none the less. Although, the explosion wasn't so good.




I know it's late, but I was bored so here's some tests.


regular fps punch and kick tests.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/regularfpspunchtest.gif
You have the basic gist of a punch, and you are implying it has force using a tremor, which is a good effect. However, he's delivering the punch standing straight up, which isn't a good position. If you want to make a powerful punch, animate him putting his body into the punch. Your punch will look stronger and better. Oh, and while he was bringing up his arm to punch, I saw his hand up for a split second, and then he punches down. You don't have to bring up the arm that high if you're trying to do a straight punch.

http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/regularfpskicktest.gif
This has stiffness, choppyness, less than decent easing, and the physics aren't the best either. Stiffness and choppyness I assume you have to fix, so I won't touch that. With the easing, the leg stops too sudden. If someone is kicking like that, the leg shouldn't just stop, you would probably sprain something. As for the physics, people shouldn't stop in midair to unfold their leg some more, the falling should be a constant motion. If you were trying to double frame, it was a bad attempt. Also, the leg shouldn't slide.


Some 21 fps kick and punch tests

http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/fps21punchtest.gif
Same C&C as the above punch test. It's just that this one is choppier, and the foot slides, and his back foot goes through the floor.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/21fpskicktest.gif
This kick is much better, but again, double framing was pretty bad. Try to stay away from double framing and work on making an attack a constant motion.




I like how raising the fps to 21 made the animation smoother with the same amount of effort and time. Hope you like. Time for bed.
C&C in bold.

hey guys new anim
http://i37.tinypic.com/9fv9eu.gif
Eh...It has the basic stiffness, choppyness, and uneased qualities that most beginners have. Physics were definitely off as well, considering the fact that the guy stopped in mid-air, changed direction, then fell. If a stick is jumping and falling, it should always be a constant motion, no pauses. And if you do another Chidori attack animation, have the attacking arm thrust towards the body, so that it could look more powerful. The reaction from the victim is extremely choppy and stiff. And from the angle the arm is coming in, it looked like it would've hit him partially in the face.
C&C also in bold.

thanks man so what's my rank
Not enough movements and too many effects to actually give a "rank."

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7933/catapultadw0.gif (http://imageshack.us)http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/catapultadw0.gif/1/w505.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img408/catapultadw0.gif/1/)
All of the basics were not visible in the animation. Physics were ok, but easing was not good. The catapult should have more easing, and a protip: The base of a catapult should stay still, not bounce. The force of the arm doesn't really look like it could make the thing bounce. And to make the animation look at least semi-realistic, have the stick bounce, while moving forward, and have him dragging along the ground a bit.
C&C also in bold.

GIANT C&C POST IS DONE

[emogoth]

i need help 2 doin that

[Dark]

i need help 2 doin that

Elaborate .

[RawGreen]

I'm more bored than you guys, I have animators block:

http://www.filecram.com/files/dumdumdumduuuuum.gif

c&c on the lame stuff.

[Arkehy]

I like the colors :heh:
Anyway, I made an animation testing out guns and blood (Mostly blood considering he only fires one shot). Tell me what you think.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6613/gunandbloodtestrs4.th.gif (http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunandbloodtestrs4.gif)http://img253.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

[Automaton]

Is I reddy for t3h Owts1de w0r1d y3t?

http://i35.tinypic.com/2131b8y.gif

[Dark]

I'm more bored than you guys, I have animators block:

http://www.filecram.com/files/dumdumdumduuuuum.gif

c&c on the lame stuff.
Nothing to really C&C on, but it looks pretty cool as an avatar.

I like the colors :heh:
Anyway, I made an animation testing out guns and blood (Mostly blood considering he only fires one shot). Tell me what you think.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6613/gunandbloodtestrs4.th.gif (http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunandbloodtestrs4.gif)http://img253.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
The way the rifle is held is inaccurate, because of the fact that he's not putting his shoulder up to the stock/butt of the gun. He wouldn't be able to handle recoil very well, which would result in bad aim. I recommend that you make a new base .stk with proportions that are easier to work with.

The blood looks like droidz blood, so I won't say anything else other than make your own blood .stks.


@Flux: Gtfo the beginner's section >=(

[Arkehy]

Thanks for the C&C. Also, I made that blood by myself with many tiny stks.

[megaanims]

guys I reposted this again cuz no one gave me c&c
http://i38.tinypic.com/2mpjxi9.gif

[poppetje3D]

they did
butt hell it still chopy an crap.
continue ur work.

[megaanims]

ok thanks poppetje and here's a new anim
http://i38.tinypic.com/whz5a8.gif

[Dark]

Thanks for the C&C. Also, I made that blood by myself with many tiny stks.
No problem. Just making sure.

guys I reposted this again cuz no one gave me c&c
http://i38.tinypic.com/2mpjxi9.gif
Pay attention, I made a giant post with C&C on the last page. Read it.

[nettox]

Hi guys i just create this "kick test"
what do u think about it?
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4387/kicky2pg7.gif

[poppetje3D]

nettox , its 2 slow.

[nettox]

Ok, And how about now?
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/6484/gifkick3rs1.gif

[Arkehy]

I don't see that much difference. Work on the physics of that guy falling, and the other basics easing, ect...

I also want to post one of my own animations. Please C&C.

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/863/kickhu5.th.gif (http://img530.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kickhu5.gif)http://img530.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

[forneverdead]

Hey look its an ZoMG fight test because i suck at em

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17730000/ngbbs48f9f5a9cea3f.gif

[cloud wolf]

Hey its been a while since ive animated so heres a couple of "come back anims
C&C Please!
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/9651/lolpe3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/lolpe3.gif/1/w253.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img507/lolpe3.gif/1/)

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/4893/punchslapdp6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/punchslapdp6.gif/1/w253.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img388/punchslapdp6.gif/1/)

http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/5517/getbacknp5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/getbacknp5.gif/1/w253.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img388/getbacknp5.gif/1/)

Thanks!

[Automaton]

owt of teh beginners section for you maytey :)

[Gyohdon]

CLoud Wolf!

From that box collab, rite?!

[noble crusader]

Here's one :Happy:

[noble crusader]

Hmmm it didn't work

[noble crusader]

How do you upload them so they work

[poppetje3D]

upload ur gifs on photobucket.com or imagesack.us

[noble crusader]

I cant post urls yet ><

[noble crusader]

Ill just spam till i can! XD

[Automaton]

eh... no you won't :/

[noble crusader]

Yes I will!!!


Dam!!... you got me

[noble crusader]

I wont spam promise

[noble crusader]

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/Stickdeatharena.gif
there we go

It really, really sucks i know

[noble crusader]

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/NINJA.gif

[noble crusader]

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/FightinDirty.gif

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/Cliff.gif

[megaanims]

hey fornever where do you get the blurs

[Arkehy]

Hey guys, I'm reposting this, someone please give me C&C. Thanks.

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/863/kickhu5.gif (http://imageshack.us)http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/kickhu5.gif/1/w252.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img530/kickhu5.gif/1/)

[megaanims]

the beginning was awesome but at the end it sucked and crusader just edit your last post because all your anims suck
and please gice c&c
on this anim
http://i38.tinypic.com/whz5a8.jpg

[LongArm]

I will not ****ing stop until I master walking

Here is my third walking test..

GIVE C AND C FOR THE LOVE OF GOD !

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Walkingtest22.gif

[noble crusader]

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/BazookaBlast.gif

Thanks for the C&C I increased frame rate and the number of frames
This one is my try at a blast and probably my best ever. It's called Bazooka Blast.

Thats pretty good Liam better than i've done in the past
I'll try to get more for now thats all

[stalion82]

here is my beginner animation

take away the spaces



http: //img519.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bouncycs2.gif


http: //img507.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jumpfm8.gif

[LongArm]

Oh my god..

That was good man, It was not stiff , physics are good , quite eased you should work on that and quite choppy..

but good work my friend..

[Dragonkof]

That was still stiff, uneased and choppy.
Physics were off.

Try to work on those. Everyone.

[noble crusader]

Here is another one when i showed my friends they nearly died

http://i435.photobucket.com/albums/qq74/NobleCrusader/X-gamesgonewrong.gif

lol try it

[costeshow]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2930/gfhhgr5.gif (http://imageshack.us)http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/gfhhgr5.gif/1/w505.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img80/gfhhgr5.gif/1/)

[poppetje3D]

Thats still chopy and uneased.

Try again.

[noble crusader]

Thats still chopy and uneased.

Try again.

I don't understand what i'm doing wrong can anyone help???!!!:Nooooooo:

[nettox]

noble crusader:
try more move your stickmans :P when he drive on skateboard he don't move even bit, this is not realistic :P

This is my new animation :Undercover: can somebody C&C this? I know is short but it's kind of effects test
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7343/breaktime2rz7.gif

And This is kick, punch, blood test :P
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/8079/wtfbloodjm8.gif

[forneverdead]

hmmm lets see well the effects are good and i like that all the colors of the explosion are different. I also like the cracks in the walls, and the bullets hole in the head.

MAJOR PROBLEMS are that they're shaky, very choppy, and are very slow, and the physics in the second one are off because u fall alot faster when u get shot,and u dont go that far either (well depending on watt gun u r using) Also ur walking needs work. Oh one thing with ur stick make his arms shorter than his legs.

here look at my wacky movements and limbs for some ideas ;)
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17741000/ngbbs48fba26538496.gif

Btw with this i judge myself as high beginner!! what do u guys think??

[poppetje3D]

forneverdead : Dude , ur almost outa the beginners section :3 Keep it up!

nettox : It still chopy and uneased.
I didn't Liked the beam.
u read tuts?

[Brandondapro]

ummm can somone tell me how to make smooth pivs? or direct me to a GOOD tutorial. I will post some of my animations once i learn how to. Please reply

[forneverdead]

ummm can somone tell me how to make smooth pivs? or direct me to a GOOD tutorial. I will post some of my animations once i learn how to. Please reply

hmmmm i can send u the .piv file for my ani (the ani below). it'll help u with joints and wall impact. Also if u watch it a 7-10 fps ull see how to make it look like the guy is turning
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17744000/ngbbs48fbf547a581f.gif

[noble crusader]

Nettox and foreverdead how do make the anims appear on the actual thread???

[nettox]

ImageShack -> Upload Gif -> clik + Show Advanced Linking -> copy link -> Post Reply -> insert image -> paste your link -> OK

[nettox]

u read tuts?

well.. ummm.. well.. hmm.. yea.. i mean.. no :Oh No!: :Sweating:


OK!
I read tuts... and this's my easing test
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7379/nubwp7.gif

[poppetje3D]

Nettox : its good to read tuts , i do it.
I liked the start of ur animation , the rest was kinda..
less :3
Keep it up!

[nettox]

And how about now ?:P
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8604/hitcombotj8.gif
I try to do ani with easing. THIS IS EASING!!??
I won't do any super stickmans becouse it's waste of time when i want just test

[poppetje3D]

WTf O_O
This is good!
get outa the begginners section!
NOW.

[nettox]

OMG! o_o I don't know how i do something thats poppetje3D think is good!!?? OMG!! I Hope is not just luck that i do ani like that

but better.. i will stay in begginer section :P if i still gonna do good ani then i will do my own thread

[nettox]

BTW I create ani with more complicated stickmans
I Hope U Will Like It :Happy:
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/7658/combosbc3ht4.gif
I found thats stickmans on some website but i don't like them :P I just want them to be more "cool" :Undercover:

BTW2 TUTS ARE COOL!!

[Rabstar]

I would say work on stiffness, otherwise, awsome.
The thing he did with his legs was awsome. just, the fall, was off...

Ur avatar ronkls man, awsome.

Keep it up!

PS: Do not post in this section anymore, you can make ur own threads, i reckon ur good enough...



PSSS: wanna joint, maybe? sometime?

[nettox]

I don't create my avatar :P but thx for good C&C if everybody say it i will do my own thread
I do ani from yesterday that I think should be good as my first own thread ani :P

[forneverdead]

Hey guys i got alot of pms about wanting my .piv file for my wacky joints animation or as i like to call it Stoopid invisible walls :3 so here's an update. and if u want the .piv file thts there too, use the file to see my style of smoothing and easing :3 and enjoy it
http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/apetest2wb96.gif
u can get the file here upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/apetestk1xk.piv

[stickshorts]

How do you post your pivot animation onto it?

[forneverdead]

How do you post your pivot animation onto it?

you upload ur gif to animatorhost.com or any other pic uploader site than click on the image button and enter the url... like so
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/90000/90819_apetest2.gif

[forneverdead]

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/16572000/ngbbs4851c7c61430b.gif
my intermediate attempt yea i kno its really fast my saving window spazzed -_-

[Arkehy]

Very nice, it looked choppy though :/
Anyway, I liked the blood a lot.

[LongArm]

A punch test..

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Fighttest-1.gif

[band_it]

my newest anim after a long time
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7968/fightiq4.gif

[Rabstar]

Nice, just somewhere, it is off...
Dunt know where, but somewhere..lol

I think the pivot section is coming alive?

[band_it]

Nice, just somewhere, it is off...
Dunt know where, but somewhere..lol

I think the pivot section is coming alive?
do you comment on me or the man above me?

[poppetje3D]

band it u can come outa the beginners section

[almanxxx]

look at it and tell me what you think

[forneverdead]

i'm redoing my sword anime here it is slowed down a little
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17757000/ngbbs48fe928f8d153.gif

[LongArm]

PUnch test c and c...

[Jason Fett]

Hey! here is my animation -----> http://i393.photobucket.com/albums/pp18/JasonFett/f.gif

[nettox]

Jason Fett, I see is your first animation :P If u want do good ani, read some tuts... then try do animation with easing, good physics etc. Do some punch ,kick ,blood test, and everytime you will see your animations are better and better post them here ^^

[LongArm]

Hey nettox can you give c and c on my last punch test..

Here's my newest punch test..
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Punchtest.gif

Whats the coolest one, the first or this new one...

Here is the first..

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Fighttest-1.gif

[megaanims]

I'd say you work more on the movements liam especially the reactio0ns

[LongArm]

Yay first c and c on my punch test, I'll try working on that. Thanks for the c and c..

[Rabstar]

do you comment on me or the man above me?

yes u! :P ^^

It is good, for that much rust.

[LongArm]

give C and c on the man above him...

[nettox]

liam213... I like that stickman in 1st ani (right side) becouse I use similar.
work on easing.. a lot of work on it. And what the hell was happend to his leggs when he was punching!? Generally, work on leggs moves, easing, physics etc. like everybody in Begginer section...(everythink for 1st ani in your post :P)

BTW your first punch test was better then second

[break]

Hi Everyone! I'm new on this forum and I animated in Pivot two week
in my first post i want to show you my blood test
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2995/testkrewmh5.gif
Can somebody C&C ?? :Embarrassed:

[Rabstar]

Whoa, 2 weeks, not bad...

blood test, okay, for 2 weeker.

Reaction, bad, make it eased, try my tut, if you need help with it, or PM me! ^^



Ps, Welcome to SPP!

[break]

"easing is |-|--|---|--|-|..."
WTF is | and - ?? xD

BTW I try do some realistic ani
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/7692/actioncp2.gif
Can u C&C Rabstar? or someone else?

[Rabstar]

I sed PM if you finding it hard!
lol
l is clikcing the next frame button
- is how many pixls (approximately) ur supposed to move it...

That anim, was stiff, but the flip, seemneed okay..

But I cant really tell, cause...It needs higher FPS!

[noble crusader]

Seriously i need a mentor!!!!!!! I dunno what im doing wrong!!!! :Nooooooo:

[break]

Hi Again! I have just create 2 new easing and movement tests!
can someone be soo good and C&C this ??^^
Walk test
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/5830/chodzeniedq6.gif
back-kick test xD
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/301/malecomboli5.gif

[Arkehy]

@ Break

The first is okay, but still a little bit choppy.
For the seconed one, I'll also say it okay, considering that its still a tiny bit choppy (For me). Also because I can't really see the motion of his arms when he pushes off of the ground.
__________________________________________________ _______________


Away from that, I want to post one of my own animations. I put a lot of time and effort in this animation, its 456 frames, way more than my usual animations. Please C&C.

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/162/battledl8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/battledl8.gif/1/w252.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img206/battledl8.gif/1/)


PS: I know some parts of the animation are iffy, but I got tired at the moment and continued animating even though I was tired of it.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

What do u guys use to upload your images i cant find a website that doesnt require registration

[Brandondapro]

hmmmm i can send u the .piv file for my ani (the ani below). it'll help u with joints and wall impact. Also if u watch it a 7-10 fps ull see how to make it look like the guy is turning
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17744000/ngbbs48fbf547a581f.gif

okay. my email is bwclark97@yahoo.com please please help!

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9760/swordsmangetskilledbyspkz8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/swordsmangetskilledbyspkz8.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img508/swordsmangetskilledbyspkz8.gif/1/)


http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2091/sniperkilledog9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/sniperkilledog9.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img508/sniperkilledog9.gif/1/)


Are they choppy?

[Limp.]

Alright. Uh, this is my first animation in two years. Don't laugh.

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3065/firstxs3.gif
-LINK- htt p://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstxs3.gif

So C & C?

[sewellfool]

http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo56/sewellfool/sewellfool.gif
This is my new animation.
Just says my name.

[forneverdead]

working on new skate anime :DDD its way kooler than ur :Undercover: :P

http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91274_skate.gif

[forneverdead]

okay. my email is bwclark97@yahoo.com please please help!

here click the link http://upd.animatorhost.com/DoKt0rZhAd0ws/apetestk1xk.piv

[band_it]

Alright. Uh, this is my first animation in two years. Don't laugh.

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3065/firstxs3.gif
-LINK- htt p://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstxs3.gif

So C & C?

that's ver very smooth, but I think the movement a little bit weird

[band_it]

Alright. Uh, this is my first animation in two years. Don't laugh.

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3065/firstxs3.gif
-LINK- htt p://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstxs3.gif

So C & C?

that's ver very smooth, but I think the movement a little bit weird

band it u can come outa the beginners section
what? yayy I get outa beginner section, btw now what am I?
med beginner, high beginner, or low interz?

sorry for double post, I don't mean to do that.

[megaanims]

band it its kinda ezy if you were med or high beginner they wouldn't say you can go out of the beginner's thread you're low-med interz anyway

wher can you get blurs for pivot

[Rabstar]

Megaanims, he aint interz...
I think, he is...
med-high, maybe high beginner..
But sure, make ur own threds..

[forneverdead]

what? yayy I get outa beginner section, btw now what am I?
med beginner, high beginner, or low interz?

sorry for double post, I don't mean to do that.

no stay in here tht fight where he said u could come out isnt long enough for an inter attempt and i would say ur a med beginer cuz im a high

btw new skate anime
http://newsimg.ngfiles.com/91000/91280_skate.gif

[band_it]

so?
Should I stay here?

[forneverdead]

so?
Should I stay here?

yes but u r pretty close to high beginner. Trust me work on some easing and smoothing and don't start with fighting right away. Start with something a bit easier

[Rabstar]

Band it. U can makee your own threads...
Trust me, I know.

[forneverdead]

need some C&C for this or just some ratings :D and ideas for what he does after the handstand
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17766000/ngbbs4900c3c56d998.gif

[Arkehy]

@ Forneverdead

It's really smooth, good job on that. I can't really find anything else thats bad.
He could maybe do a flip from the handstand onto the board? Would that be good?
__________________________________________________ ____________________

Here's a punch test, please C&C

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3606/punchtestdz7.gif (http://img520.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtestdz7.gif)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/punchtestdz7.gif/1/w252.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img520/punchtestdz7.gif/1/)

[stickshorts]

Thank You so much forneverdead!

[forneverdead]

Thank You so much forneverdead!

seriously no problem at all.

And yea i could make him flip onto the board again or something crazy could happen lol

[Cooookie_Monster_]

Hey is this Okay ? please someone tell me if im doing good? 1 Out of 10 or something 10 being PRo 1 Being Horrible

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6597/suicideizh6.gif (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suicideizh6.gif)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/suicideizh6.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img505/suicideizh6.gif/1/)

[Solid]

Sorry this is a repost delete it please the real post is the next to this. thank you

[Solid]

Hello! this is mi first pivot (in really is the first complete anim i make) i didn't tutorials or anything so that's the why of a shity blood effect and a shitty walking at the start but i think is good (better the edited with sound but... i don't wanna make you download) so here is:

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1687/sniperkillerfb3.gif

PD: maybe someone over here has the berts crap pack? i would like to get so if someone can send it to me or post it on download i will be be grathefull

Mi MSN: martin_caceres_9@hotmail.com (sorry for bad english i'm from argentina)

[Cooookie_Monster_]

Hello! this is mi first pivot (in really is the first complete anim i make) i didn't tutorials or anything so that's the why of a shity blood effect and a shitty walking at the start but i think is good (better the edited with sound but... i don't wanna make you download) so here is:

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1687/sniperkillerfb3.gif

PD: maybe someone over here has the berts crap pack? i would like to get so if someone can send it to me or post it on download i will be be grathefull

Mi MSN: martin_caceres_9@hotmail.com (sorry for bad english i'm from argentina)

Its a little Choppy but still good I liked it Work on walking unless u want it to look like hes dragging his feet? And gernade needs to move faster as in spred it out further movement wise Per Frame...

[Solid]

yeah the problem is... i don't got te origianl piv file xD!...
PD: i'm still looking of berts crap pack

[Cooookie_Monster_]

yeah the problem is... i don't got te origianl piv file xD!...
PD: i'm still looking of berts crap pack

Go to DROIDZ.ORG

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6597/suicideizh6.gif (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suicideizh6.gif)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/suicideizh6.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img505/suicideizh6.gif/1/)


IS THIS OKAY?

[Rabstar]

It is very very very choppy, and the physics were off...

Try my tut?

[Cooookie_Monster_]

It is very very very choppy, and the physics were off...

Try my tut?

Where You talking about mine??

[Solid]

Go to DROIDZ.ORG

it was deleted from doridz :Nooooooo:

[Cooookie_Monster_]

it was deleted from doridz :Nooooooo:


Alright hold on ill find It And send it to you and give u a link

[Rabstar]

Where You talking about mine??
Yes . you . ^^;

[Cooookie_Monster_]

Yes . you . ^^;


Really? dang it looked pretty nice and how do i Find ur Tut?

[band_it]

band it u can come outa the beginners section

Band it. U can makee your own threads...
Trust me, I know.

sorry, I think it's better if I stay here lol,
and what could I make for practice beside fight?

[Rabstar]

Jumps?
walks?
Runs?

[band_it]

okay than, I tried run and jump practice but it messed up in the end, please c&c
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/848/runrunrn7.gif (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runrunrn7.gif)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/runrunrn7.gif/1/w253.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img207/runrunrn7.gif/1/)
http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runrunrn7.gif

[Rabstar]

Dont see anything....

[band_it]

Dont see anything....
how 'bout it
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/848/runrunrn7.gif (http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runrunrn7.gif)
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/runrunrn7.gif/1/w253.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img207/runrunrn7.gif/1/)
http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runrunrn7.gif

[megaanims]

Guyys I thinking of quitting pivot

[Rabstar]

Nice job, the particles are good...

just the running looked funny...

Edit: MEGA, WHY!?!?!

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/5350/randomiuf8.gif (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randomiuf8.gif)
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/randomiuf8.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img505/randomiuf8.gif/1/)


<<<<<<<<<<<<RANDOMNESS >>>>>>>>>

[Rabstar]

Hehe, Cookie monster, I would like to spend a day in ur mind, aye? :P

It was too fast, and extremely random..
LOL, the chaisaw scene was funny as hellL!

[band_it]

Nice job, the particles are good...

just the running looked funny...

Edit: MEGA, WHY!?!?!

what the particles are good?
'cause I think it's weird, is he(megaanims) is serious?

[Rabstar]

I think so, but I hope he doesnt quit! It would be a shame.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

Hehe, Cookie monster, I would like to spend a day in ur mind, aye? :P

It was too fast, and extremely random..
LOL, the chaisaw scene was funny as hellL!


Haha Ya thanks lol well Theres more of that .... maybe slower?? Im good at suicides for some reason

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/9373/shootingtestpm7.gif (http://img389.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shootingtestpm7.gif)
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/shootingtestpm7.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img389/shootingtestpm7.gif/1/)

Just FINALY finished this any good?

[Automaton]

haha no... that isnt yours, ive seen that before. If you have to pretend to be that good instead of trying, you don't deserve to use pivot. I'm sorry but thats just the way it is.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

haha no... that isnt yours, ive seen that before. If you have to pretend to be that good instead of trying, you don't deserve to use pivot. I'm sorry but thats just the way it is.


What are you talking about ..... Seeing shit before and sorry no i had that on a link that my Pivot was on Soooooo ill post mine hold on...

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3571/lolaballzg8.gif (http://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lolaballzg8.gif)
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/lolaballzg8.gif/1/w500.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img440/lolaballzg8.gif/1/)


There it is lol sorryz about that

[naxai]

http://i37.tinypic.com/mifmdt.jpg"]http://i37.tinypic.com/mifmdt.jpg

yes, its stiff, he runs f-ed up, but i atleast tried, my first time thougt :P :Happy:
any1 have any hints for me, if i shall easy out somewhere or anything.
i have read some tuts but i dont do them as good as other guys do..
so.. rate and give me some tips ;) thank you

[naxai]

lol now i see huge mistake, when he bows his head down to dodge bullet its very stiff, sry bout that :p

[Arkehy]

Yeah, that guys run is F-ed up, work on easing, physics, and stiffness. But overall, pretty nice for a first animation.
__________________________________________________ ___________

I'm going to Repost this, someone please give C&C

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/153/punchtestuu0.gif (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtestuu0.gif)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/punchtestuu0.gif/1/w252.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img261/punchtestuu0.gif/1/)

[sewellfool]

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t110/TxSandman/evilball.gif
This took forever. I call it Evil Ball. I like it. C&C?

[sewellfool]

Sorry for the double post... but I like it, Arkehy.

[Arkehy]

I love the idea. You just need to work on easing, the physics were fine (For me). But when the sticks the climb up the stairs looked kind of weird, same with the walking and running.

[sewellfool]

Thank you. =]]]]

[forneverdead]

hey this is my new anime hope u like it.... btw its not done and when its done it will be my boader/inter attempt :D. btw C&C!!
http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/17776000/ngbbs4902879c867a9.gif

[Rabstar]

The running, either the floor is ice, or he has ice on the bottom of his feet! lol, the reaction was bad, but the flip was nice.
THe camera dynamics is also nice, but remember, that needs easing too! ^^

[sewellfool]

forneverdead... that was my background! Ha ha... kidding.
Nice anim.
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo56/sewellfool/pc.gif
How`s this?

[Senor_Grunt]

Developing a walking style with my new stk.

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6351/walkba0.gif

[forneverdead]

The running, either the floor is ice, or he has ice on the bottom of his feet! lol, the reaction was bad, but the flip was nice.
THe camera dynamics is also nice, but remember, that needs easing too! ^^
thnx for the C&C and yea i need to work on the running ik lol and the reaction u cant see that well but it needs work too and i think my easing got a little better

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6749/suicideiigi4.gif (http://img260.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suicideiigi4.gif)
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/suicideiigi4.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img260/suicideiigi4.gif/1/)


Hows this YES ANOTHER SUICIDE BY ME lol Just Eased a lil more Tell me how i did C&C plz

[poppetje3D]

sewell :It is still chopy and uneasy , focus on that next time.
Senor :It's okay , try to more every oint in every frame
Cookie :Why the **** so fast :P
Like Sewell u need to focus on chopyness and easing.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

sewell :It is still chopy and uneasy , focus on that next time.
Senor :It's okay , try to more every oint in every frame
Cookie :Why the **** so fast :P
Like Sewell u need to focus on chopyness and easing.

Pop Thanks for responding Other then it being to fast WAS IT GOOD??? like No problems??
And If i slowed it down it would make the arms look there just poking the guys instead of stabbing him lolz

[Cooookie_Monster_]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/727/swordsmangetskilledbyspsn9.gif (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=swordsmangetskilledbyspsn9.gif)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/swordsmangetskilledbyspsn9.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img249/swordsmangetskilledbyspsn9.gif/1/)


Okay last one then im gonna start spending more time on my animations C&C plz

[Gyohdon]

Developing a walking style with my new stk.

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6351/walkba0.gif

GET THE HELL...... OUT OF THIS SECTION!


kthxbai

[Senor_Grunt]

GET THE HELL...... OUT OF THIS SECTION!


kthxbai

K.
o w8. Why? Did I do something wrong? :Nooooooo:

[Cooookie_Monster_]

K.
o w8. Why? Did I do something wrong? :Nooooooo:


No cus ur to goood for begginers sections lol SO OUT ur making me look bad....

[Senor_Grunt]

:P If you guys insist.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

heres one http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5701/pistolswordhj2.gif (http://img243.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pistolswordhj2.gif)
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/pistolswordhj2.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img243/pistolswordhj2.gif/1/)

[Senor_Grunt]

You have good ideas, (lolfights), but you don't have the basics down. I'll try to find a good tut for you too get you started out. Also, don't think that just because you set the FPS to 30 it'll make it smooth, it takes more frames and easing.

[Cooookie_Monster_]

You have good ideas, (lolfights), but you don't have the basics down. I'll try to find a good tut for you too get you started out. Also, don't think that just because you set the FPS to 30 it'll make it smooth, it takes more frames and easing.


Thanks for the help let me know if u find me a good tut and Thanks for the Info bout the Fps

[Senor_Grunt]

Fraz's Walking Tutorial. (http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202042067)|Another style of walking. (http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1210533611)|Fraz's Easing and Stiffness tut. (http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1202041872)

[poppetje3D]

I did not like the middle one....

[Senor_Grunt]

Meh, I tried. The other two are good enough for basic movement.

[poppetje3D]

thats true , true....
how long are u animating?

[Senor_Grunt]

Check your PM's poppetje3D. So, I don't need to stay in the Beginners thread anymore?

[lord loss210]

I'm new can any1 tell me how 2 put on my pivs?

[lord loss210]

Ok, i can now show them. This is my ist real 1, so be nice, but plz do be honest and tell me wat you thinkkkkk!!! http://s483.photobucket.com/albums/rr197/Lordloss210/

[poppetje3D]

not so good...
follow sum tuts.

[kabbb]

hi i like pivot so much but i need help with it can someone help me:Happy: how do you post pivots

[band_it]

my anim for Rabstar

I call it walk test lol^^
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1978/walktestbg2.gif
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1978/walktestbg2.gif

hi i like pivot so much but i need help with it can someone help me how do you post pivots

save it in gif form, upload it into some of the image hosting site, post the url here, easy right? lol
and isn't it has been posted in one of the help or tut thread?

[hacker11]

I call it my first skateboard animation!
http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp314/brandon12/PopShuvIT.gif


You can Say I suck all you want, because i know i do.

[Rabstar]

@hacker11:

Started of well.
But the air part..lololol, U messed it up, thehn, nearing to the, it improved again!

@Band_it:

Improving a lot. Just a bit more, maybe 1 more really hard worked test, and ur there! ^^

[Dark]

my anim for Rabstar

I call it walk test lol^^
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1978/walktestbg2.gif
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1978/walktestbg2.gif
one step is not considered a walk test

try doing a loop, or have the stick walk across the screen

I call it my first skateboard animation!
http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp314/brandon12/PopShuvIT.gif


You can Say I suck all you want, because i know i do.

the syncing of the skateboard and the stick's foot is not right, and neither are the physics

[RMF]

I made these a few years ago... How bad are they?

Walk/run.
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/walkruntest.gif

Another one I made:
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/attemptn2.gif

And the last one:
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/jumpfall.gif

[lord loss210]

not so good...
follow sum tuts.

KK ty :Undercover:

[lord loss210]

I also made this at the same time as a test:. Please say wat u think
http://i483.photobucket.com/albums/rr197/Lordloss210/back.gif
My other one, its above, but ill put it here too:
http://s483.photobucket.com/albums/rr197/Lordloss210/
I made this years ago. I put it on, so u can point and lagh and say wat a noob lol:
http://i483.photobucket.com/albums/rr197/Lordloss210/Droc.gif

And how do you put an animation as your sig, or on the side of da screen under ur name?

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Hi guys! I have just create this animation
Combo + walk test
C&C pls
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/4434/tescikmadafakayv2.gif

[hacker11]

http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp314/brandon12/Ollietonose-2.gif


Took me a while, What do you think?

[Automaton]

when he jumps on the first one, it zooms a bit too quickly to the peak of the jump, then suddenly slows when he goes down to land. Maybe just add a couple more frames to when he's nearing the peak of his jump.

[Gyohdon]

Hi guys! I have just create this animation
Combo + walk test
C&C pls
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/4434/tescikmadafakayv2.gif

Great, now gtfo and smell freedom.... young grasshopper

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WoW thats mean I can go out from begginer section ?? o.o

[Arkehy]

Here's a run loop test, please C&C

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3188/runloopjb2.gif (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runloopjb2.gif)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/runloopjb2.gif/1/w252.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img261/runloopjb2.gif/1/)

[megaanims]

well the look like they're bumping each other then it stops for frame and your run looks like a brisk walkk
a run should look like this
http://i33.tinypic.com/11s194g.gif
or this
http://i38.tinypic.com/2u8l9qr.gif

[mmp12]

Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions

[band_it]

Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions

Just do the basic first, like easing, walking, running etc

[connor307]

my first animation

[connor307]

http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp314/brandon12/Ollietonose-2.gif


Took me a while, What do you think?


cool check connor307 animation

[connor307]

check connor307 file

[Gyohdon]

well the look like they're bumping each other then it stops for frame and your run looks like a brisk walkk
a run should look like this
<Dumb>
or this
<Dumb>

Actually, his look better.
Yours are total crap. The only thing is that he probably double-framed it on accident making it look weird.

[lord loss210]

Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions

U like skateboarding then? lol. ncie work, u got the jumpsa working well.:Happy:

[RMF]

How bad are they ? (again :P)
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/walkruntest.gif
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/attemptn2.gif
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee118/RMF_Stiker/jumpfall.gif

Thanks for your time :)

[Arkehy]

@ RMF

1st : During the walking part, his legs move way to fast and why does his forearm just move back a little? Try to make his legs move slower and try to judge how fast he should move while walking.
While he ran his arms were kinda weird to me, but the run was okay. Try to make his spine move up and down rhythmically while he runs.

2nd : A little stiff. When he fell the physics were okay as well, but when he hits the ground you should make his head, legs and arms bounce up slightly, then back down.
The run for that one guy was good, but also use easing when he falls and when he slows down to fall.

3rd : When he punched it was good, but try to use easing when he starts and ends.
The backflip (to me) was amazing, I could never do a decent backflip. Very nice.
When he jumped forward and landed on the ground, why does his back hit, then the legs just flop down? Shouldn't his upper body bend a bit forward since he was moving forward?

Hope this helps you xD

[RMF]

Thanks very much Arkehy! :)