View Full Version : Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
megaanims
09-18-2008, 05:17 AM
I've seen your tut rabstar thnx a lot it helped me and a lot of animators
hey guys is this easing
http://i34.tinypic.com/2gxpbnb.gif
Rabstar
09-18-2008, 06:00 AM
much much better...
but u see that big fidget? try to take it out..
the spacing
u did this
ii-i--i--i--i-ii
there is easing, but the spacing, which is in the middle is wrong, try moving it faster when u did the first few frames!
megaanims
09-18-2008, 06:04 AM
ok i'll try another one it's hard to use easing cuz wen i tried it looked chopy and slow
I tried easing in a stupid run even though it's not better than run in my sig
http://i38.tinypic.com/22b0a8.gif
Rabstar
09-18-2008, 06:11 AM
mega anims
copy my animation...then show us, then if we say good, try one by urself...but if ur still unsure, copy it again!
XD
megaanims
09-18-2008, 07:05 AM
what anim?
an easing anim yehey don't mind the last part
http://i36.tinypic.com/ng819i.gif
Rabstar
09-18-2008, 07:07 AM
beginning was good, then it got worse..
dont try to 'spice ur ur anims' yet man...just work on tests, then, try making cool exciting animations!
yer by the way taking the time to renew my "vows" with pivot and spp, u can now kiss the website and animation program?
Rabstar
09-18-2008, 07:13 AM
o yea, edward0, u shud know that Pf0 has quit...
make a new thread for ur anim...call it rust?
Dante556
09-18-2008, 07:16 AM
MegaAnims nice easing but it got worse when the stick appeared like Rabstar Said
Rabstar
09-18-2008, 07:17 AM
uh...well..i didnt really mean to say that...
as soon as the ball hit the wall, it got bad...but be4 that, i give a thumbs up!
Dante556
09-18-2008, 07:21 AM
llol kk i havent made a anim in awhile... :heh:
megaanims
09-18-2008, 07:38 AM
guys i'm gonna post a anim of flips sometime tomorrow so get ready
Stormwalker
09-18-2008, 01:49 PM
Best tutorial/advice for beginners ever! Experiment , you don't need a tutorial to get good , if you follow a tutorial you will learn it in that specific way but no style/technique development , neither will it advance for further levels , and movements will be harder to figure out. If you experiment you will find your ways to do stuff.
megaanims
09-18-2008, 05:16 PM
hey dante can you tell me about your sig I don't joke there and for the PW you're gonna post first
Dante556
09-18-2008, 06:41 PM
just a base stk from any pack is fine
corprlfish
09-19-2008, 02:17 AM
lol yes meganims im a naruto fan
im a naruto fan too :)
Senor_Grunt
09-19-2008, 04:47 AM
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/9397/firstyq5.gif
lolwut? Comment. Rate if you'd like.
Rabstar
09-19-2008, 05:01 AM
wel...quite good for a new animator!
just work on Spacing...then it will be way better...and try a bit more easing
silvershift
09-19-2008, 08:50 PM
PLZ COMMENT
i haven't been animating for a long time and i haven't been animating recently
most of these r old.
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pivot_anims_39/blades.gif
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pivot_anims_39/b-ballgame-1.gif
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pivot_anims_39/skate.gif
adding more soon
Jutsu
09-19-2008, 09:45 PM
http://z10.invisionfree.com/Pivot_Stories/index.php?act=idx
Hey all beginners I have a place were you wont get flamed or yelled at and its a nice place join it seriously spp doesn't want anymore nubs.
I am masamune in this forum.
send me a pm.
megaanims
09-19-2008, 09:47 PM
good anims but work on the easing a bit more but good 5/5
rabstar is this easing enough?
http://i37.tinypic.com/2zehut4.gif
megaanims
09-19-2008, 10:54 PM
this is megaanims with ground-breaking news as seen in this anim GODZILLA IS ATTACKING SPP RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!!
http://i34.tinypic.com/bhwv3b.gif
guy's does anyone of you live in the phillipines
megaanims
09-20-2008, 07:58 AM
anyone there???
thanks to rabstar's tut thread I made a flip anim
http://i34.tinypic.com/63r62q.gif
OhComeOn
09-20-2008, 08:08 AM
Don't triple-post.
EDIT THOSE POSTS!
NAOW!!
Rabstar
09-20-2008, 08:16 AM
its very fidgety..
the one on the last page, at the end...lol
megaanims
09-20-2008, 08:50 AM
sorry for triple posting it's because nobody's been posting for a while and rabstar
which anim are you talking about?
silvershift
09-20-2008, 09:01 AM
heres some more anims. they're old though.
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pivot_anims_39/midgetwars.gif
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/pivot_anims_39/narutopplz.gif
Rabstar
09-20-2008, 11:23 AM
i like the effects and stuff, silver, but u need to ease.....thats what wrong in ur anims, they are uneased....
BTW, Megaanims, did u do that eztoon thing in ur sig?! ITS AWSOME!
silvershift
09-20-2008, 01:03 PM
how do i put an avatar up?
WatchMen
09-20-2008, 01:08 PM
Megaanims definately did not make the anim in his sig. I have seen it on a variety of sites, so if he claims its his i will bitchslap him.
Shnorkel
09-20-2008, 02:32 PM
Trying to practice some basics, with known parkour moves c:
http://i36.tinypic.com/kd7ec3.gif
band_it
09-20-2008, 06:28 PM
my walking in pivot
htt p://img295.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkingaz0.gif
wwestar11
09-20-2008, 06:44 PM
This is mine:Smile: :Spiderman: http://img131.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bamloltf2.gif
wwestar11
09-20-2008, 06:46 PM
This is mine :Phew: :Phew: :Phew: http://http://img131.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bamloltf2.gif
wwestar11
09-20-2008, 06:49 PM
This is mine :Undercover: :Sweating: :Cold: http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/4639/bamloltf2.gif
band_it
09-20-2008, 06:53 PM
another anims
htt p://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=26199651qx6.gif
and
htt p://img300.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2ndtryendsp0.gif
D0wnW1thTh3S1ckn3ss
09-20-2008, 08:22 PM
wwestar, 1st double post:Oh No!:, and second that sucked.
megaanims
09-20-2008, 08:30 PM
um rabstar I did not make that sig my friend sent it to my phone it looked cool so I thought using it as a sig and can someone comment on my flip anim
Pnuts
09-20-2008, 10:48 PM
I just got pivot this recent friday, and I haven't worked on it much, maybe 20 crappy animations and one "ok" one, and besides that I have no priar animating experiance, but I have high hopes for my nooby little thing, not that it seems anyone will notice it here.
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/5740/pnutsdemoon5.th.gif (http://img206.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pnutsdemoon5.gif)http://img206.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
P.S. I could've used tremor, but I accidently got rid of the dots for the ground, so I couldn't move/center it at all.
The flashs turned out just plain terrible however, and I noticed my "mini Pnuts" didn't even have to kick the first ball, it just flew off.
I also have another animation I would show, but my image hosting thing is skrewy. I almost had a seizure from the damn flashs, how can I get the invert, where black is white, etc?
megaanims
09-21-2008, 12:52 AM
it's kinda good for a first but work on the your basics and make it smooth, eased
read some tuts also
Pnuts
09-21-2008, 01:01 AM
I read some tuts.... they were just the same things over and over, maybe a good running tut, or a good punch.
The rest weren't worth reading.
Right now I will probably spend a lot of time on blood before I animate actual fights. Oh and one of the reasons it sucks is becuase it wasn't untill I finished that I realized the poor guy was basically a big headed defualt, so he didn't have all the necisary joints.
Shnorkel
09-21-2008, 06:33 AM
Trying to practice some basics, with known parkour moves c:
http://i36.tinypic.com/kd7ec3.gif
Can someone critic that please?
zawmbee
09-21-2008, 06:47 AM
This is mine :Phew: :Phew: :Phew: http://http://img131.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bamloltf2.gif
gtfo out of NTG's avatar.
Pnuts
09-21-2008, 12:10 PM
I say it's ok, the first jump looks like he didn't do much though, you can clearly see a bounce on th second one, but he just leans back and lifts his leg on the first one.
psykofr33k
09-21-2008, 08:59 PM
I was bored. Physics kind of suck. Completely random.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/Bleh-2.gif
wassup7210
09-21-2008, 09:30 PM
LOL nice 1 O-0!!!!!!
wassup7210
09-21-2008, 09:37 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZjF6y3wh0w, this is my first animation ever using pivot and movie maker =D, its called Hunter
Pnuts
09-21-2008, 10:22 PM
I made a xiao xiao type animation, it is ok, but imageshack is skrewy and I can't show it. XD
wwestar11
09-21-2008, 11:20 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/229/dontmesswithhulkuf3.gif
band_it
09-22-2008, 04:17 AM
another anims
htt p://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=26199651qx6.gif
and
htt p://img300.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2ndtryendsp0.gif
can anyone give C&C please?
poppetje3D
09-22-2008, 09:17 AM
I was bored. Physics kind of suck. Completely random.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/Bleh-2.gif
Smooth :o
Its cuwll
Pnuts
09-22-2008, 08:00 PM
Curse these uploading websites.
Edit.
Got it finally.
My nooby animation.
Woot.
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Pnuts/The_Xiao_Xiao8hmg.gif
If you don't like it, you might as well kill yourself now, for I am going to make more.
BTW, band it, I liked them, but you could'a looped the first one.
Lol, but what do I know?
NeCrOdE
09-22-2008, 10:30 PM
Curse these uploading websites.
Edit.
Got it finally.
My nooby animation.
Woot.
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Pnuts/The_Xiao_Xiao8hmg.gif
If you don't like it, you might as well kill yourself now, for I am going to make more.
BTW, band it, I liked them, but you could'a looped the first one.
Lol, but what do I know?
good job, i liked the boss fight and good use of tremors.
aside from what you can say about every begginer animation (practice, ease, practice, read tuts, practice) there is a technical issue.
when the guys fade out and blur they shouldnt be grey if they are green orange brown and blue...use lighter shades of those colours instead (define custom colours option)
band_it
09-23-2008, 08:25 AM
can anyone give C&C please?
why there is no one that give me comments?
Pnuts
09-23-2008, 03:56 PM
NeCrOdE, that is a lazyness issue, not a technical issue. XP
But I see what you mean, I hacked into my school system today and got past the block, and showed mah friends this, and they didn't believe I made it. XD
I'll take it as a complement.
Thanks or the C&C.
Pnuts
09-23-2008, 03:58 PM
I say it's ok, the first jump looks like he didn't do much though, you can clearly see a bounce on th second one, but he just leans back and lifts his leg on the first one.
Edit* Overall I liked it a lot XP.
Band it...
Oh and, it was smooth looking to me, way smoother than mine.
Like, yours is as smooth as the wind, and mine is as choppy as a lumberjack.
Sorry for double post.
Edit* I redid the ending of the boss fight on mine, for the third time actually. (explanation for the puase in mid-battle.) This time the ending is a little better, but I got tired of making the black one run, so I faded him out.
Also, on the editted part, I took NeCrOdE's advice and changed his...stuff, but now it looks out of place, becuase the rest is still Blue>gray>light gray.
Oh well. http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Pnuts/The_Xiao_Xiao5i56.gif
Oh! And NeCrOde, the original reason of the fade outs wasn't to get rid of the bodies, but gray was meant to mean dying, and light gray means dead, I will use that from now on, but the shurikens killed them way too fast to use it properly here.
Last thing, there is no "brown one" he is "burgandy". Get it straight. But I guess I would have let "firebrick" go.
NeCrOdE
09-23-2008, 08:45 PM
Band it...
Oh and, it was smooth looking to me, way smoother than mine.
Like, yours is as smooth as the wind, and mine is as choppy as a lumberjack.
Sorry for double post.
Edit* I redid the ending of the boss fight on mine, for the third time actually. (explanation for the puase in mid-battle.) This time the ending is a little better, but I got tired of making the black one run, so I faded him out.
Also, on the editted part, I took NeCrOdE's advice and changed his...stuff, but now it looks out of place, becuase the rest is still Blue>gray>light gray.
Oh well. http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Pnuts/The_Xiao_Xiao5i56.gif
Oh! And NeCrOde, the original reason of the fade outs wasn't to get rid of the bodies, but gray was meant to mean dying, and light gray means dead, I will use that from now on, but the shurikens killed them way too fast to use it properly here.
Last thing, there is no "brown one" he is "burgandy". Get it straight. But I guess I would have let "firebrick" go.
Ok it's an improvement. i guess the technical issues aren't that important; it's more important to keep practicing your movements. It's not important right now but here is a list of common ways to convey death:
-graphic violence (doesn't have to be over the top like decapitation or ripping off limbs; a few blood spurts or a cinder block will do)
-disintegration (via energy beam or explosion) you can also use fire, enviromental hazourds (like pools of acid), or giant fans, it goes without saying that the first two are the most humane however....
-a situation that removes the doomed from the field of view (falling off a cliff, run over by a tank. etc. etc.)
-creative/cartoony effects. (i have no examples for this)
as long as you are always patient and take your time animating you can think of lots of ways to make an animation more entertaining (it doesn't have to be violent though).
edit: even if you didn't use the correct colours for the fade outs you should of used it for the blurs (when the boss is moving). i know it's annoying going back and editing but that is why we make tests.
megaanims
09-24-2008, 07:05 AM
I haven't been posting and animating for a while so heres my comeback anim it may suck so tips and advice are accepted
http://i34.tinypic.com/907kn8.gif
and another one
http://i36.tinypic.com/2dujxg6.gif
Pnuts
09-24-2008, 05:08 PM
Thanks for the great advice NeCrOdE. XP
I have been doing tests on blood, I mad mayb ten or so animations focusing on it, next animation I post will be more life-like. If they are just un-concious there is a chance I could decide to make them get back up, so I probably won't get rid of some of the bodies.
Megaanims, I thought they were really smooth and nice. On the punch th only thing I can say about it is that is looks like he is stepping with his heels, he has feet but he isn't moivng them, just his legs.
I have tried walking around on my heels with my toes pointed up before, and it was uncomfortable. Also... is his arm straight at the immediate end of the punch? I loved them both besides those two things.
NeCrOdE
09-24-2008, 08:19 PM
@ megaanims
you know how to do basic movements but they were very choppy and i see some figets. just work on easing and get to know which body parts move at the right time. (like when he is doing the backflip put him standing relitively straight, crouch legs bend back and then make arms swing with the motion and back arch as he lifts up.)
megaanims
09-25-2008, 07:54 AM
what this one guys took me a hour
http://i37.tinypic.com/nl7tky.gif
Rabstar
09-25-2008, 07:55 AM
well...
sorry, not sooo gooood...sorry
but i love the end...
A N I M S..
^^
CodeRed
09-25-2008, 04:24 PM
lawl look at what I just made cuz i was bored
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/wechat/runner.gif
i rly dont know what the point of it is but i just wanted to finish it someway lol
wassup7210
09-26-2008, 05:17 PM
lawl look at what I just made cuz i was bored
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/wechat/runner.gif
i rly dont know what the point of it is but i just wanted to finish it someway lol
lol funneh and creative:Happy:
reynaldog
09-26-2008, 07:04 PM
Trying to get back into animating.
http://i38.tinypic.com/2cokj2v.jpg
Arkehy
09-26-2008, 08:08 PM
i made this one today (started a couple a days ago)
i suck i know but i need to know what i should do further to get better
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b187/mombog/bigagainsthesmall.gif
A little too fast, and work on the physics and easing a bit.
megaanims
09-27-2008, 07:28 AM
guys what about this one
http://i38.tinypic.com/2ztfxug.gif
Rabstar
09-27-2008, 07:55 AM
Trying to get back into animating.
http://i38.tinypic.com/2cokj2v.jpg
Nice job.
the kick, it loooooked weak...try a bit faster?
CenaSlayer
09-27-2008, 09:09 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5220/minionrunzt9.gif
freekinbeast101
09-27-2008, 10:32 AM
thats prty cool meganims
supernightvision
09-27-2008, 01:20 PM
http://img90.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headboomwq3.gif Please commit..I know i messed up the punch but I was bored..oh btw Can you plz tell me how to put the movie on the forum like others...you know without putting a link to follow. ty :3
pivotman500
09-27-2008, 04:17 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2841/1manarmyuz5.th.gif (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1manarmyuz5.gif) here it is :D
*sladerx*
09-27-2008, 06:22 PM
http://www.filecram.com/files/773Getting-crazy.gif
not dat my latest and greatest. new 2 stickpageportal. not pivot
Arkehy
09-27-2008, 08:09 PM
guys what about this one
http://i38.tinypic.com/2ztfxug.gif
Pretty cool Anims, but why does the foot dribble up and down after he slams the ground?
megaanims
09-27-2008, 08:13 PM
new anim
http://i33.tinypic.com/qyhc35.gif
@arkehy
well nothing at all I just made foot dribble out boredom
Arkehy
09-27-2008, 08:28 PM
The beam looks great, but the guy looks a little choppy to me.
singh100
09-27-2008, 08:42 PM
hay hay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
singh100
09-27-2008, 08:42 PM
hay hay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Trizzle
09-28-2008, 03:46 AM
This is my first ever animation... I didn't go well atall.
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m207/deatheater1057/1stanimation.gif
megaanims
09-28-2008, 03:50 AM
not bad just work more on the smoothness and easing
Trizzle
09-28-2008, 03:54 AM
Mmm, Yeh Thank you.
I need a mentor do you know were I can get one of those ?
I really would like to get into this stick art.
Arkehy
09-28-2008, 07:57 AM
I've made pivot animations before, but those are not good. So I used some of my time to put more effort in this one. Please tell me what I need to improve on.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2263/walkthroughtheparklr3.th.gif (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkthroughtheparklr3.gif)http://img228.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
Credits go to Droidz for the guns and Blood.
LongArm
09-28-2008, 08:03 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2841/1manarmyuz5.th.gif (http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1manarmyuz5.gif) here it is :D
Your idea was quite cool, but it was total disaster, you will have to work on many things on animation easing,physics, etc...
*sladerx*
09-28-2008, 08:05 AM
http://www.filecram.com/files/773Getting-crazy.gif
not dat my latest and greatest. new 2 stickpageportal. not pivot
well, bump. it already was left in da last page and i dont really thank any1 will look dere.
dont post in beginner thread slader
Rabstar
09-28-2008, 10:45 AM
yeh...it is goood, get outta the beginner's section and start making threads! ^.^
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 12:06 PM
OKay i made my first animation pivot itsp retty good but i dont know how to post it and i wanted to know how to draw things on there likes bullets blood.... ETc...
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 12:12 PM
anyone to help?!? :(
Rabstar
09-28-2008, 12:13 PM
I dont seee it!
clone26
09-28-2008, 12:17 PM
he said he doesnt know how to post it...
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 12:39 PM
he said he doesnt know how to post it...
So can you hel;p or someone ?? or atleast tell me how to get the embbedded code for pivot so i can Just post the code...:heh:
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 12:47 PM
WOW sorry that didnt work........ Well can anyone help?
Vincent
09-28-2008, 01:05 PM
...you have to host you're animated .gif on http://photobucket.com/ . Create an account, select upload image, click on you're animated .gif, copy the link, paste it in you're post... HOLY SHIT IT WORKED O_O...
Example:
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee192/Dark_nesss_2007/DBZ%20Avatars/Nice/Nice.gif
Deathwish
09-28-2008, 01:05 PM
Check the pivot tutorials section, there should be a tutorial on how to post them there.
*sladerx*
09-28-2008, 01:37 PM
man, ive been rated high begg in msn. and they helped me do all this stuff.
so i trust them. and i stll think im begg.
(as uv 4 nao, i have dat ani as my sig)
poppetje3D
09-28-2008, 01:39 PM
Example:
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee192/Dark_nesss_2007/DBZ%20Avatars/Nice/Nice.gif
There are sum kids on stickpage , so please quit it.
Deathwish
09-28-2008, 02:14 PM
man, ive been rated high begg in msn. and they helped me do all this stuff.
so i trust them. and i stll think im begg.
(as uv 4 nao, i have dat ani as my sig)
Who ever ranked you that was lieing.
You're anims are very stiff and choppy and the movements suck.
Keep practising, stay in beginners please.
madness8791
09-28-2008, 02:42 PM
...you have to host you're animated .gif on http://photobucket.com/ . Create an account, select upload image, click on you're animated .gif, copy the link, paste it in you're post... HOLY SHIT IT WORKED O_O...
Example:
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee192/Dark_nesss_2007/DBZ%20Avatars/Nice/Nice.gif
Stop being so immature, nobody gives a shit about animated boobs, if you're gonna post pictures post them of actual hot girls.
freekinbeast101
09-28-2008, 02:49 PM
Hey everyone heres a bunch of my anims, hey and dont go easy on my critique, i wanna know how to improve
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/Cool_string_move27s4.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/Sliding1fgf.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/running_pwnagezgo8.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/reverserde_pwnagekwt3.gif
Gavel
09-28-2008, 02:51 PM
There are sum kids on stickpage , so please quit it.
They shouldn't be on this site anyway, momma's boy.
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 02:59 PM
They shouldn't be on this site anyway, momma's boy.
And whys that?.............................
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 02:59 PM
They shouldn't be on this site anyway, momma's boy.
And whys that?.............................
freekinbeast101
09-28-2008, 03:00 PM
Ya seriously, btw could someone critiuqe my animations
Arkehy
09-28-2008, 05:25 PM
I've made pivot animations before, but those are not good. So I used some of my time to put more effort in this one. Please tell me what I need to improve on.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2263/walkthroughtheparklr3.th.gif (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkthroughtheparklr3.gif)http://img228.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
Credits go to Droidz for the guns and Blood.
Bump. Could somone please tell me what I need to improve on?
RawGreen
09-28-2008, 05:25 PM
Ya seriously, btw could someone critiuqe my animations
work on easing and physics .
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:25 PM
Bump. Could somone please tell me what I need to improve on?
I rather enjoyed it but howd you do it with Pivet i cant make my guys look that thick ... Or make them go from one screen to the next but i could possibly still be a nub....:Spiderman:
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:26 PM
work on easing and physics .
Where is your Anime post them and ill critique....
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:40 PM
Hey everyone heres a bunch of my anims, hey and dont go easy on my critique, i wanna know how to improve
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/Cool_string_move27s4.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/Sliding1fgf.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/running_pwnagezgo8.gif
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/phantom101/reverserde_pwnagekwt3.gif
:Happy: Very good and funny Runs very smooth also
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:42 PM
Ya seriously, btw could someone critiuqe my animations
ill critique if you post it lol....
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:47 PM
<a target='_blank' title='ImageShack - Image And Video Hosting' href='http://imageshack.us/'><img src='http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6640/yosupermaneb2.gif' border='0'/></a> ANy good?
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 06:49 PM
Sorry bout last one wrong forumn link or somethign im not sure accually lolz
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 07:23 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2220/armoredmagicjokerkickasbw7.th.gif (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=armoredmagicjokerkickasbw7.gif)
Any good? The end is dumb my brother messed it up when i went to get lunch
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 07:30 PM
heres some more from me
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2930/yosupermanrk6.th.gif (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yosupermanrk6.gif)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5218/lolaballll9.th.gif (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lolaballll9.gif)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/6471/firstanimationevervq8.th.gif (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstanimationevervq8.gif)
And any advise on how to make grabs/kicks/punchs look better ? i didnt do any cus i wasnt sure how to make it look good
RawGreen
09-28-2008, 07:54 PM
Where is your Anime post them and ill critique....
gee.... you insist?.... well okay:
back handspring:
http://www.filecram.com/files/317Back handspring01.gif
rag-doll test:
http://www.filecram.com/files/623ragdoll01.gif
Mega smashez:
http://fwup.net/file/wyb63qvvuy.gif
also found here: http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=93472
or direct link to the project(if you are impatient): http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250908/27848_mega_smashez.php
heres some more from me
And any advise on how to make grabs/kicks/punchs look better ? i didnt do any cus i wasnt sure how to make it look good
well... start with simple motion of like jumping and running, walking, ducking, and stuff. there's also something called gravity....
EDIT: this is my most recent, made it just now in ten minutes:
http://fwup.net/file/j02sa4sus9.gif
Arkehy
09-28-2008, 08:38 PM
I've been trying to improve a bit on physics and here is a physics test animation. Please tell me what I need to improve more on.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5678/physicsandfiretestze7.th.gif (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=physicsandfiretestze7.gif)http://img402.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
RawGreen
09-28-2008, 08:55 PM
I've been trying to improve a bit on physics and here is a physics test animation. Please tell me what I need to improve more on.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5678/physicsandfiretestze7.th.gif (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=physicsandfiretestze7.gif)http://img402.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
that was an awesome job, wow. all that seems to be missing is some realities.
when he whips the guy away with the sword it should be faster...... well, maybe you should try making it faster?
Arkehy
09-28-2008, 09:19 PM
@ Rawgreen
I'll try and tweak it a bit and post it again. And thanks for the tips.
melkere
09-28-2008, 09:21 PM
umm i would add one but i need more posts...
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 09:26 PM
@ Rawgreen
I'll try and tweak it a bit and post it again. And thanks for the tips.
What version of pivot are you using ? and great anime i loved it
reynaldog
09-28-2008, 10:10 PM
New unfinished animation
http://i36.tinypic.com/2jg5es4.jpg
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 10:20 PM
New unfinished animation
http://i36.tinypic.com/2jg5es4.jpg
look awesome.....................................
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 10:22 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6316/medidtatingintheairvy1.th.gif (http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=medidtatingintheairvy1.gif)
Look okay?
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 10:26 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7971/samurijumperui7.th.gif (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=samurijumperui7.gif)
Um his running looks mental or is it just me?!?
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 10:30 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/9596/boxervboxervgunmanjt5.th.gif (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=boxervboxervgunmanjt5.gif)
Another one.....
Vincent
09-28-2008, 11:20 PM
Way to quadruple post...
Just edit you're last recent post instead of (god forbid >_>) quadruple posting...
Cooookie_Monster_
09-28-2008, 11:23 PM
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/7403/zombiebrainssniperia1.th.gif (http://img409.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zombiebrainssniperia1.gif)
ZOMBIES BRAINS SNIPER ... fun
Vacuum
09-29-2008, 10:27 AM
Hya guys, haven't made ANY of pivots for about 4 or 3 months, but i got better! There ya go! Particle and... kinda... fading test, i think: http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm303/eimyz/whahahaha.gif
RawGreen
09-29-2008, 11:58 AM
@ cookie monster: spend more time studying and spend more time making one animation that's really good instead of pushing out as many as you can.
@eimyz: hey, I haven't seen very many posts from you lately, nice animation :)
Rabstar
09-29-2008, 12:03 PM
Lol, rawgreen, he has only got 48 posts, what do yyou expect!? xD
nice anim, well eased!
Vacuum
09-29-2008, 02:19 PM
Thanks a bunch, guys :) Ur the best!
shadowklaww
09-29-2008, 03:49 PM
here they are there not great
shadowklaww
09-29-2008, 04:44 PM
5905 here u go is it good
thejackler
09-29-2008, 05:22 PM
I haven't made any animations for a long time, but I've just decided to make a madness style animation using sprites.
http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=madnessuz8.gif
Arkehy
09-29-2008, 06:03 PM
Hey guys, I've been spending my time with another animation. I know its not "Spectacular", but it took me two hours. Tell me your thoughts
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5279/remakeofanaveragedayap1.th.gif (http://img523.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remakeofanaveragedayap1.gif)http://img523.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
Cooookie_Monster_
09-29-2008, 07:28 PM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/9688/sniperaxemanspearaccideeb5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
another duh duh duh
Cooookie_Monster_
09-29-2008, 08:58 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1031/cookiemonsteranimeuv8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Da da da....
dragger5656
09-29-2008, 10:13 PM
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
LongArm
09-30-2008, 02:58 AM
Hey guys !
This is my newest animation, which sucks, because my Index finger has a burn, so I cannot animate very well, I think it will heal for one month..
C and C will be accepted, even its bad (I don't care anyway)
And Cookie , stop spamming the beginner's thread , you can edit your post...
Here it is :
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Thebloodeningshit.gif
Rabstar
09-30-2008, 03:11 AM
Um...err...
Liam! i know u can do beter than that! the walking, the foot slid! XD
nice gun thing though..
i wouldnt recommend blood at youre level, but it is up to u!
if u are going to do blood, try to do this, u get ur lines and stuff, and then, just reduce the size, do not movce them, just reduce the size...
that is what i understood from baha's tut!
LongArm
09-30-2008, 03:28 AM
Um...err...
Liam! i know u can do beter than that! the walking, the foot slid! XD
nice gun thing though..
i wouldnt recommend blood at youre level, but it is up to u!
if u are going to do blood, try to do this, u get ur lines and stuff, and then, just reduce the size, do not movce them, just reduce the size...
that is what i understood from baha's tut!
Yeah, I have noticed the foot glitch in the animation, That make me LOL'ed , hahahah, Thank you for the c and c , and I will try to fasten the healing of the burn , So I can make great animations again, Thanks for the c and c again..
Rabstar
09-30-2008, 03:29 AM
^^
no problem!
if u need any more help, just PM me!
CenaSlayer
09-30-2008, 01:12 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5220/minionrunzt9.gif
Replies anyone ?
Stormwalker
09-30-2008, 01:28 PM
Well to be honest lian I dont think your much better than that , and excuses are for pussies , I'm not being mean , but who cares if its bad , you don't have to use excuses , because most elder member will just see trough that , well I'm not saying your lying , what I am saying is it doesn't matter , Because if you can move those limbs with the mouse , if you were usually good that wont bother you , its not like you need to redraw them or anything. Well the animation isnt good , but just keep practicing most of the basics , theres nothing specific to point out.
thejackler
09-30-2008, 03:01 PM
My link didnt work so im reposting my animation
http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=madnessuz8.gif
i didnt want to edit because it was a page back. comments please.
CenaSlayer, i like your running, but it got quite stiff as soon as he jumped.
Arkehy
09-30-2008, 06:32 PM
Hey guys, please tell me your thoughts on this animation.
I had it on the page before but I don't think anyone will reply.
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/866/remakeofanaveragedayii6.th.gif (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=remakeofanaveragedayii6.gif)
megaanims
09-30-2008, 07:45 PM
hey guys a few anims here
http://i35.tinypic.com/ig9kkx.gif
an easing test
http://i33.tinypic.com/sy137n.gif
walking test
http://i36.tinypic.com/rlayxc.gif
LongArm
09-30-2008, 08:59 PM
Well stormwalker , you got me, I don't have a burn, I know thats a lame excuse, that animation is another made by my bored ness, I know that all of my animation are quite lame, but I am willing to make it better...
megaanims
09-30-2008, 10:05 PM
helloooooooooo anyone there
Stormwalker
09-30-2008, 11:25 PM
Well stormwalker , you got me, I don't have a burn, I know thats a lame excuse, that animation is another made by my bored ness, I know that all of my animation are quite lame, but I am willing to make it better...
Thats the spirit , keep practicing you will get good , pivot is a thing anyone can get good at so don't worry. And please dont tripple post.
LongArm
10-01-2008, 04:01 AM
Thats the spirit , keep practicing you will get good , pivot is a thing anyone can get good at so don't worry. And please dont tripple post.
I did not tripple post...
megaanims
10-01-2008, 04:23 AM
whats the rating for my anims
LongArm
10-01-2008, 05:00 AM
Well megaanims,
The first one was quite stiff, you should work on that..
The beam was cool, but the fall was quite uneased ...
A beam make's a thing explode, put that on your mind
but If that's your style, Its okay..
---------------------------
Second anim
The easing one was not quite eased..
but nice effort though..
You are improving..
-------------------------
Nice walking test
You should send me a tutorial
of that
lol..
----------------------
My newest animation..
It's lame I know, Nothing good here, I just made this , because I don't want to die from boredness, Feel free to C and C, and I will be glad to hear from all of you..
Here it is :
It's called (The scent of death)..
Sorry for the blood ...
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Thedeath.gif
Enjoy ^_^
depclayhalo
10-01-2008, 10:55 AM
this is my 1 stick animation.
http://fc48.deviantart.com/fs37/f/2008/274/e/0/my_first_stick_animation_by_depclayhalo.gif
sahasta
10-01-2008, 11:23 AM
my first pivot i only downloaded the skate pack
http://img524.imageshack.us/my.php?image=skate3kc9.gif
poppetje3D
10-01-2008, 12:25 PM
my first pivot i only downloaded the skate pack
http://img524.imageshack.us/my.php?image=skate3kc9.gif
If this is Ur very first piv. , it's good.
But ok.
Its all still stiff So try 2 move every body part in every frame.
LongArm
10-01-2008, 08:07 PM
Anyone wanna C and C ?
My newest animation...
Sorry for the blood effects..
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Thedeath.gif
thejackler
10-02-2008, 01:22 PM
I'm reposting this again. Can I Have Some C&C please.
http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=madness1pf0.gif
Arkehy
10-02-2008, 05:38 PM
Hey guys, I wanted to test my walking so I made a walking test loop... hehe... Anyway, please C&C it.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9261/walkingtestge4.th.gif (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkingtestge4.gif)http://img402.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
PS: I know there is a fidget near the end of the loop. I was too lazy to fix it.
zerfish
10-02-2008, 06:47 PM
i made a walk.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6483/factorytv6.gif
(yes i know it looks like crap its because of lag.)
Usoccera
10-02-2008, 11:01 PM
This is my first animation with pivot and I know its not that good but just tell me everything I can improve on. Thanks!
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo349/Usoccera/DeathExplosionFight-1.gif
LongArm
10-03-2008, 02:22 AM
A walking test
I need tips and some comments...
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk81/liam213/Walkingtest.gif
LN3uq
10-03-2008, 02:32 AM
Don't kick up the legs as much, and he looks like he's staring at the ground the whole time.
You're going to need more frames
On the first step, the back foot slides backward a ton. Unless this guy's walking on ice, I can't see that happening
LongArm
10-03-2008, 02:35 AM
Yeah , I'll try working on that..
Thanks for the tips and the comments anyway..
and finally
SOMEONE NOTICED THE ANIMATION ON THE BS...
This is my first animation with pivot and I know its not that good but just tell me everything I can improve on. Thanks!
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo349/Usoccera/DeathExplosionFight-1.gif
Thats pretty swell for a first. You seem to have potential.
megaanims
10-03-2008, 03:02 AM
try to follow this walk liam
:)
http://i38.tinypic.com/20049cp.gif
guys I have a question which run test is better
http://i38.tinypic.com/28bs8d0.gif
or this one
http://i38.tinypic.com/jq56wg.gif
LongArm
10-03-2008, 03:04 AM
Thanks megaanims, I'll try that later...I'm doing something right now..
megaanims
10-03-2008, 03:22 AM
how about the run which is better
new anim assassination attempt
http://i36.tinypic.com/vnhwtl.gif
That sucked.. No offense but.. you should do better than that, guys.
Ok.. heres a link
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662
that should get yall making much more better animations.
megaanims
10-03-2008, 09:04 PM
what should I improve then saha
a punch loop
http://i35.tinypic.com/nb3lom.gif
anyone there?someone rate my anim
topmatthew
10-04-2008, 07:11 AM
i will post my matrix anime animation once i get 20 posts:Happy:
megaanims
10-04-2008, 09:51 AM
guys a uppercut anim
http://i37.tinypic.com/nmbvxy.gif
crazy flasher272
10-04-2008, 09:55 AM
lol hello again ppl its me crazy flasher27:Happy: My first stick battle animation.:Happy: <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9536/stickbattlexo3
guys a uppercut anim
http://i37.tinypic.com/nmbvxy.gif
Try doing it 2 times or more.
Then try to do it by yourself.
Plutarch IV
10-04-2008, 12:19 PM
Hrmm... I tried to upload my first animation, but Imageshack and PB, etc., etc... Will not let me upload pivot animations. Can anybody help me out here?
Usoccera
10-04-2008, 01:17 PM
Ok so this is my second and third animation. I tried to add the backflip and a push up. The backflip could have been a lot smoother but I made this pretty quick. My second one is just tring a slash. I have a lot to work on to make that one better. Please tell me what i can do better. These two aren't as good as my first one. Reply and help me get better.
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo349/Usoccera/BackflipKick.gif
Second Animation
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo349/Usoccera/StaffSlash.gif
Third Animation
RawGreen
10-04-2008, 02:04 PM
@ coookiemonster , you've improved some. If you want to become better faster, I suggest you study it like there's a knowledge quest going on. I've got a link here for you(as for anyone who wants to learn more):
http://anipedia.thebackalleys.com/index.php/Main_Page
reynaldog
10-04-2008, 02:42 PM
I added to my previous animation. It lags a bit.
http://i38.tinypic.com/aw2p8i.jpg
nettox
10-04-2008, 03:01 PM
I Have just done this animation ^^
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/8657/terazdojasnejciasnejzu3.gif
SHARINGAN xD
Any Comments ?:P
poppetje3D
10-04-2008, 03:08 PM
Coowl camra effect nettox.
But the first part could be smoother and the last part is a little weird
nettox
10-04-2008, 03:10 PM
That's how sharingan should work... weird xD
you think that was weird? check this out :P
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/3828/sharingangifvj2.gif
fartman803
10-04-2008, 05:52 PM
nice animation the blood effects are really good
RawGreen
10-04-2008, 06:28 PM
@ raynaldog, the thick guy shakes when that thick stick gets beamed back.
@ nettox, the eye's are a little bit too high to be anatomically correct... otherwise, nice job, I like it :p
This is one of my animations http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walldeformtesthq3.gif it took awhile. Im just gona upload the link... ok working
poppetje3D
10-05-2008, 03:46 AM
Hrmm... I tried to upload my first animation, but Imageshack and PB, etc., etc... Will not let me upload pivot animations. Can anybody help me out here?
mby it cuzz u upload piv. files. try gif. files.
megaanims
10-05-2008, 05:28 AM
yup I see nothing pure blank
Dante556
10-05-2008, 11:04 AM
Yep nothin, btw im baaaaack! :P
Gyohdon
10-05-2008, 11:19 AM
You're here for 2 months, you couldn't even be away.
REYNALDOG GET YOUR ASS OUT OF THIS SECTION!
nettox
10-05-2008, 01:50 PM
Hey, I just creata that animation :P I called it: ,,WTF MAN?"
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6152/gifwtfcn2.gif
I not created it to be super cool... just to be funny :heh:
But u can comment ofc. if u like it ^^
RawGreen
10-05-2008, 01:57 PM
This is one of my animations http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walldeformtesthq3.gif it took awhile. Im just gona upload the link... ok working
he punches the wall out of anger?
it's a fair job, you need to smooth things out a bit. There's not much that I can see for physics, so I can't comment on that.... besides smoothing, you need to mix that with easing.
something about this is a little bit better than the usual on this thread. You're around med-beginner.
Hey, I just creata that animation :P I called it: ,,WTF MAN?"
I not created it to be super cool... just to be funny :heh:
It is pretty cool though, don't see much like "THAT" anymore, lawl.
Dante556
10-05-2008, 03:43 PM
lol try Easing Nettox look up some tutorials on it, but it's funny =D
EDIT: even though the only real movement was the guy dying and him shooting, xD
and i can be back cause i havent animated in like 30 posts and i havent been posting for 27 pages or so :P
Arkehy
10-06-2008, 08:02 PM
Hey guys, I just wanted to post my latest animation. Its not that long, somone please C&C.
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8700/gunanimationau5.th.gif (http://img526.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunanimationau5.gif)
Dante556
10-06-2008, 08:06 PM
stiff at the parts where he crouchs and the bullets are way..... too thick.
megaanims
10-07-2008, 05:17 AM
cool dante is back you post first
Dante556
10-07-2008, 06:25 AM
sure lol my cut is scabby now xD
megaanims
10-07-2008, 08:20 AM
owWW don't care I'm waiting for your pw post
This is my 2nd attempt at a close range fight...
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/5426/fightnz9.gif
Dante556
10-07-2008, 02:48 PM
owWW I do care take your time with your PW post
=D SPOILER(if you dont read manga and havent seen teh episode)Asuma died in the New Naruto shipuuden episode
pivot_art_man
10-08-2008, 05:51 AM
http://b.imagehost.org/0862/fight_pt1.gif
a fast pace action move i'm gonna continue after midterms
LongArm
10-08-2008, 05:56 AM
This is my 2nd attempt at a close range fight...
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/5426/fightnz9.gif
kinda stiff,Physics are screwed up, work on easing,you will have to work on many things man, but nice try though..
Pnuts
10-08-2008, 01:23 PM
JJA0, I thought it was good, but it was a tad bit choppy.
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Pnuts/The_Xiao_Xiaotgyf.gif
kartman568
10-08-2008, 06:36 PM
it was a good job but the boss needed to get a hit on the player:Spiderman:
billster-knight
10-08-2008, 07:32 PM
here is one i made for a contest
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/blood2.gif
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/hardestoneyet-1.gif
megaanims
10-09-2008, 04:58 AM
nice anim dude but you have to work on your movements it kinda looked weird
LongArm
10-09-2008, 05:05 AM
here is one i made for a contest
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/blood2.gif
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/hardestoneyet-1.gif
The two animations are :
1. Too stiff, Try moving all of the body parts ..
2.Physics were bad, Try some tutorials on youtube or in the pivot tut section..
3.Uneased...
4.Weird movements, just like megaanims said.The running was totally out of control..
That's my c and c...
megaanims
10-09-2008, 07:15 AM
hey guys what do you think
http://i37.tinypic.com/m79641.gif
77xett
10-09-2008, 08:28 AM
Here's two quick tests I made to see how good I am after stopping for the summer (I started animating about a year ago, but just joined this site).
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/Kicktest1.gifhttp://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/Swordtest1.gif
I know there both really choppy. That's because putting them into GIFs and photobucket slowed them down. If anyone knows a better site (I tried imageshack and it didn't work) then please tell me.
Without choppiness in mind please rate and comment!
megaanims
10-09-2008, 08:36 AM
nice anims effects kinda cool the tremor and half bodies cool but yes choppy
77xett
10-09-2008, 10:27 AM
Thanks for the comment megssanims. Here's a longer anim. I used a different hosting site, but it's not less choppy. I still want to know how to make my animations show just as fast as they would on the program.[edit] I fixed the problem. Here's the regular speed version.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/fastfight.gif
Also here is my youtube page.
youtube.com/user/77xet
I didn't add the www because I haven't made 20 posts yet, but if you copy and paste it, it should work.
Dante556
10-09-2008, 11:16 AM
Pretty smooth but really stiff
Zsdery
10-09-2008, 03:58 PM
MAAAAAAN i can't even remember the lat time i was on here
i knew i'd come back though
did power fuse quit or go to flahs or sumthing
klassen
10-09-2008, 05:04 PM
some parts of its were really smooth then others not so much
the begining was good but it semed to get worse from there
kinto
10-09-2008, 05:07 PM
You should have kept your old account.
77xett
10-09-2008, 05:24 PM
Pretty smooth but really stiff
some parts of its were really smooth then others not so much
the begining was good but it semed to get worse from there
Thanks for the comments. I did this is about an hour or two and as I tried the effects it got hard to keep the easing affect. I'll work on it, but right now I'm looking into starting flash animations.
Here's another try because I was bored:
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/smoothtest.gif
wr3stl3r
10-09-2008, 07:32 PM
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/r...smoothtest.gif
Senor_Grunt
10-10-2008, 12:51 AM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9599/seizurerundc9.gif
hay dewdz, I decided to follow a tut, and this is the result. Well, the colors were not part of the tut, but it's a nice touch, don't ya think? Don't comment on the floor, this was originally going to be a point of origin animation, but I just incorporated the tut with point of origin, and the floor got all fuxx'd up because its my first point of origin (PoO lawl).
Rate&&Comment. Do it, do it nao.
okai gaiz, qwit lerking, i kno ur out thar. postpostpost!!!one!!!11!!!!Q!!!!
megaanims
10-10-2008, 06:35 AM
whoa way cool but he's more like stooping than running but nice color effects and nice run just work on the stance
Zsdery
10-10-2008, 09:08 AM
is this ur 1,2,3 animation or something?
poppetje3D
10-10-2008, 09:16 AM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9599/seizurerundc9.gif
hay dewdz, I decided to follow a tut, and this is the result. Well, the colors were not part of the tut, but it's a nice touch, don't ya think? Don't comment on the floor, this was originally going to be a point of origin animation, but I just incorporated the tut with point of origin, and the floor got all fuxx'd up because its my first point of origin (PoO lawl).
Rate&&Comment. Do it, do it nao.
okai gaiz, qwit lerking, i kno ur out thar. postpostpost!!!one!!!11!!!!Q!!!!
its still a little slow.
Senor_Grunt
10-10-2008, 12:09 PM
is this ur 1,2,3 animation or something?
wut?
@poppetje3D, Yeah, I know. :/ By slow do you mean the FR or the run itself?
Zsdery
10-10-2008, 03:26 PM
is it your 1st animation or 2 or something?????
Senor_Grunt
10-10-2008, 03:59 PM
Nahh, I've done a lot before this. Then I stopped for like 2 months. :P
Arkehy
10-10-2008, 06:25 PM
Hey guys, I made this animation out of complete Boredom...
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3603/randomnesszf3.th.gif (http://img529.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randomnesszf3.gif)http://img529.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)
There ya go.
megaanims
10-10-2008, 06:38 PM
kinda cool but ease it more
77xett
10-10-2008, 08:26 PM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9599/seizurerundc9.gif
hay dewdz, I decided to follow a tut, and this is the result. Well, the colors were not part of the tut, but it's a nice touch, don't ya think? Don't comment on the floor, this was originally going to be a point of origin animation, but I just incorporated the tut with point of origin, and the floor got all fuxx'd up because its my first point of origin (PoO lawl).
Rate&&Comment. Do it, do it nao.
okai gaiz, qwit lerking, i kno ur out thar. postpostpost!!!one!!!11!!!!Q!!!!
Pretty good. I like the colors, but he is stooping a bit low. I like the rule that the faster he's going the further he stoops down. So in a super fast running affect he is completely stooped down and when jogging his body is only slanted a bit.
Senor_Grunt
10-10-2008, 08:45 PM
Thanks 77xett, I'll remember that rule next time I'm doing a run.
Here's my newest;
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5536/punchga6.gif
Rate, C&C.
megaanims
10-10-2008, 09:21 PM
nice one but what's with the smilie
billster-knight
10-10-2008, 09:42 PM
The two animations are :
1. Too stiff, Try moving all of the body parts ..
2.Physics were bad, Try some tutorials on youtube or in the pivot tut section..
3.Uneased...
4.Weird movements, just like megaanims said.The running was totally out of control..
That's my c and c...
yea i know =[=[=[=[ thats why i joined here to improve
megaanims
10-10-2008, 10:19 PM
hey guys pls give me c&c on this anims
http://i34.tinypic.com/or1640.gif
http://i33.tinypic.com/2v2zb7t.gif
http://i36.tinypic.com/2rfgahu.gif
newest anim
http://i37.tinypic.com/do2ix3.gif
Senor_Grunt
10-11-2008, 12:48 AM
nice one but what's with the smilie
I thought it was a nice touch. :P
As for your animations, don't try with those big effects and guns and flips. Start out with the basic movements, walking, punching, running, etc. Then move on to effects. You need to work on basically everything else too(physics, easing, etc.). But keep on going, you'll get there with practice. :]
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/448/spikeatackxy8.gifHere's a new animation i did (please ignore the crappy spikes)
Rabstar
10-11-2008, 07:27 AM
@ Mega:
The 1st one, okay, but could be improved
the 2nd one, the best outta the 3, but the legs are STIFFFFF lol
The 3rd one, made me smile, But c'mon mate, I KNOW u can do better! ^^
@JJA0:
Needs easing, but nice idea! ^^
If you need any help, check out mine and saha's tut, it will be on the tutorial section (lol, like that isnt obvious) xD
killerpenguin
10-11-2008, 07:35 AM
i made a pivot i think its pretty good for my first try.... but i cant get it to speed up can sum1 help me with this?? id really appreciate it:Smile:
http://s404.photobucket.com/albums/pp124/killerpenguin_2008/ looks horrible cuz its slow and kinda small :(
is there a way i can fill in there head :-P if so tell me
Rabstar
10-11-2008, 07:47 AM
Post the Img URL? If it is from Imageshack?
megaanims
10-11-2008, 09:54 AM
kinda chopy but nice idea
megaanims
10-11-2008, 10:31 AM
rabstar what about the fourth one
77xett
10-11-2008, 12:24 PM
Here's a quick fight I made. I tried to make a throw, but it came out a bit choppy at the end. I thought the idea was good though.
http://i468.photobucket.com/albums/rr46/77xett/fightthrow.gif
megaanims
10-11-2008, 06:27 PM
nice work dude moar
billster-knight
10-11-2008, 08:46 PM
testing =]
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/test.gif
billster-knight
10-11-2008, 08:47 PM
its kinda fast :|
notywq
10-11-2008, 09:18 PM
Hi guys,Im Notywq,really new to the forums,and will post later lol
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/8262/yeytc5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
There.
Please give it all the constructive comments you can give,coz im aiming for improvement :P
megaanims
10-11-2008, 09:50 PM
whoa dude that rocked it was smooth and eased but back was stiff
new anim
http://i33.tinypic.com/2ufu9p1.gif
notywq
10-11-2008, 11:31 PM
Yeah the back was stiff,coz the stk file didn't have a back joint xD
Ahh,well,I created this one from random ideas :D (And the stick has a back now :P)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/3870/awesomeideaskm5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
megaanims
10-12-2008, 01:22 AM
now that's better keep going
costeshow
10-12-2008, 07:08 AM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/1244/gauraneagradi2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
stickdude96
10-12-2008, 11:20 AM
horse_revenge tell me if this works:Happy:
the drawer
10-12-2008, 03:26 PM
no it did not work.
get an account on photobucket it works well.
@costeshow- it really needs to be eased, work on movements and such.
Random
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t221/The_Drawer/fall.gif
i haven't posted here in forever... :'(
Jutsu
10-12-2008, 03:45 PM
Yeah the back was stiff,coz the stk file didn't have a back joint xD
Ahh,well,I created this one from random ideas :D (And the stick has a back now :P)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/3870/awesomeideaskm5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
High beginner keep going, it had some major flaws non the less very good for your second post.
Just work on spacing and placement.
Movements as well.
Dante556
10-12-2008, 04:57 PM
Im back from my 3 day vacation, i was visiting my aunt.
Mega i cant get the PW done anytime soon.. ^.^ im rusting, haven't been animating in a couple weeks.
Anyways...
MegaAnims your new anim was very stiff and it looks like it lacked easing, and the walk was really choppeh... but your getting better! :Phew:
Im Not A Beginer but i dont knwo how to post pivot anamays!
:Spiderman: :Spiderman: :heh: :Nooooooo: :Nooooooo: :Nooooooo: :Oh No!: :Nooooooo: :Smile: Im Not A Beginer but i dont knwo how to post pivot anamays!
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