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SRC
05-28-2008, 10:51 AM
@ masterdmw, make the screen smaller animations don't need to be so big. Read some tutorials and make your animations more realistic.
@ crazy flasher 27, host the .gif on an image hosting site such as imageshack (imageshack.us) because we can't see your animation otherwise

Zsdery
05-28-2008, 02:35 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7527/jcollabsr5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

C&C it's for the jungle fight collab ****ing ever
sumone plz c&c...
SRY there's no blood
creditz to pivcrazeh and some other guy from droidz
i've been waiting for ****ing ever sumone
C&C plz...

Tronika
05-28-2008, 03:26 PM
There is a thread at the top of the 'Pivot' section, I think.

Here is one of mine:

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2853/ne0nburstdy2.gif

It's my first try at a blast. I call it 'Ne0n Burst'. ^_^

i like your beam its look border line

Zsdery
05-28-2008, 03:37 PM
hey that was on the first page he won't read it...
C&C mine u where just being unfair u c&ced his and he's on the first page
but i'm a post above u and u don't C&C mine...
U NUB!!11!111!!1!!!!!11!!

kurisuliku
05-28-2008, 06:07 PM
how the hell do i post my thread

die321
05-28-2008, 06:16 PM
To be honest i've been away from animating for so long i don't know if i'm even good enough to post out of the beginners section anymore, so i'm gawna put this here
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/2706/assasinationcb1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
The only reason i thought to post here, is cause the running blows, and i wasn't sure if i'd get flamed or not . . . so . . . there


lol he runs into the wall and gets thrown back at the end btw

stare
05-28-2008, 07:15 PM
Yes, lol just thought I'd try a pivot

http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll24/Kaownage/StickFight.gif

And yes I, already know the running/walking or what ever the hell it is sucks,
and photobucket screwed the speed....sigh

Zsdery
05-28-2008, 08:22 PM
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7527/jcollabsr5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

C&C it's for the jungle fight collab
SRY there's no blood
creditz to pivcrazeh and some other guy from droidz
SUMONE C&C DAMNIT i'll c&c you
Die:high beg all i gots to say(cuz it was good)
stare:low beg it wasn't good at all (i can see photo****its back)

crazy flasher27
05-28-2008, 08:25 PM
can anyone tell me how to post pivot animations here i already tried it but it wont animate... plz help!:Nooooooo: :Happy:

stare
05-28-2008, 10:13 PM
I like it Zsedery, kinda twitchy when he dodged the bullet tho.

And Crazy go to a help thread, not the beginners post your ANIMATIONS HERE thread.

masterdmw
05-28-2008, 10:16 PM
how do I make anims smaller?
crazy, save ur anim as a gif and upload it somewhere (I use photobucket) and get the [img] url and put it on here :)
How do i add blur effect?
and is there a way to have mult backgrounds?

masterdmw
05-28-2008, 10:57 PM
xpect the unexpected lolz
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg1/masterdmw/thebloodbath.gif

crazy flasher27
05-29-2008, 03:33 AM
........lol............

bustastks
05-29-2008, 04:52 AM
only a few words for you masterdmw. Get some help, Maybe tuts. Before you post again

Zsdery
05-29-2008, 06:31 AM
Thank you stare...
agrees with bustastks

froststick
05-29-2008, 07:10 AM
how do you get a back ground with 3 beta?

mactwok
05-29-2008, 07:45 AM
Okay, I wasn't sure about posting this outside the begginers section, so I need you guys to comment on this.
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/random.gif

Please give C&C. Also say if I shoyld post outside or not.

die321
05-29-2008, 08:10 AM
it looks pretty flawless, but it could be just a bit more eased, and the legs look stiff when he's sliding.

crazy flasher27
05-29-2008, 08:34 AM
how do you post animations????:Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating:

mactwok
05-29-2008, 08:52 AM
Okay thanx. Other than that can I post outside?

die321
05-29-2008, 08:59 AM
not so sure yet, considering it's just a small anim, make something a little longer than that and i'll tell you what i think


anyway, i need moar cc pl0x
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3681/assasinationci7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
i tried to fix the running, it looked shitty before
btw the gif raped it, those bright colors in the corner and for the light blend pretty nicely in the .piv

infoto
05-29-2008, 10:19 AM
dude i think that you should still work more on your running

youre tryin at least

die321
05-29-2008, 12:02 PM
To be honest, i'm usually pretty good at it, but i had to animate without an onion skin so i kinda f**ked it up

Naglfar
05-29-2008, 12:24 PM
That's great without onion skin.
WB d321..
I think you improved. =P
I liked the sniper scene.

@ Crazy Flasher

Step 1:
Save your .piv into .gif
Uncheck merge
Set frame delay to 6~7 for normal frame rate.
Shrink the frames by 1/2 or it will be too big.

Step 2:
Go to either www.imageshack.us ,www.pivothost.org , or www.filecram.com
I recommend one of them.
Upload your work there.
If you choose imageshack, I'd recommend you to download the toolbar, so it's easier and faster to upload.

Step 3:
For Pivothost you should see a link already, copy and paste it here for the URL
For Imageshack you should see a heck lot of links in there with a first-frame-pic of your animation.
Scroll down the page till you see a link labeled with "Direct link". Copy it, and paste it here, it's your URL.
If you want to post it into image form, which you will need when you don't have 20 posts yet:
Type in *Paste your URL(Direct) Link here*
For Filecram just copy the Second code(BB link) for the direct link, First link HTML code for download.

There , you're done, Hope this helped.
Credz to Cezar for the Filecram add-on.
Naglfar

Zsdery
05-29-2008, 05:43 PM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2375/jmfzm1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
C&C PLZ
best anim so far

xninja
05-29-2008, 07:07 PM
hey. i think your best anime was the one you sent me. u should put that up if you already haven't. but that was pretty rockin. i dont really get why the big skinny guy's arms are stickin up but whatever. the only thing i have to say is the big stick guy's landing in the begginning seemed to be missing a few frames. i dunno just what im thinking is that his legs should bend more. but thats really all i can think of.

Zsdery
05-29-2008, 07:09 PM
Thx i made a thread for it though..
thx anyway
u are right about the landing

crazy flasher27
05-29-2008, 08:31 PM
:Happy: :Happy: :Happy: http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/1438/runningey3.gif (http://imageshack.us) my very first animations... plz comment..http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/9049/lightsaberjj6.gif (http://imageshack.us)http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2103/onedayaj3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Saha
05-30-2008, 01:39 AM
Well um,Heres my first anim and I decided to make something simple before making something a little more difficult.Its a animation based on smoothness http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/9210/smoothnesstestnb5.gif

Blot
05-30-2008, 02:19 AM
well its quite choppy, but it was very good for a first animation, im sure if u read some tutorials on choppyness u will turn out to be a great animator.... great first try though

crazy flasher27
05-30-2008, 05:22 AM
:Happy: :heh: lol my first punch animation....needs more work...right????:Sweating: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/469/puncchtestonett5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Saha
05-30-2008, 05:25 AM
Raise the frames per second to 20 and don't make his hand fall.

pdeathz
05-30-2008, 05:33 AM
for a first try its pretty good

crazy flasher27
05-30-2008, 05:34 AM
better now??????????????????????:Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating: http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9616/punchtesttwoil5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Saha
05-30-2008, 05:42 AM
You consideredly spammed -.- No difference..

crazy flasher27
05-30-2008, 05:55 AM
final punch test atlast! Sweating: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/103/punchtestthreenk9.gif (http://imageshack.us)ight????

pdeathz
05-30-2008, 07:36 AM
its alot better but it still doesn't look right

smish
05-30-2008, 09:53 AM
http://upd.animatorhost.com/smish/yawnyt12.piv
lol.

NeCrOdE
05-30-2008, 02:45 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wallflpgq4.gif

just a test

Zsdery
05-30-2008, 02:46 PM
alittle choopeh (i mean in the smallest way possible)
i liek the run
med-med beg

Saha
05-31-2008, 12:02 AM
Ok necrode.There were a few weird parts.Consideredly,After he jumped off the wall,He was sopose to slip.Because hes body was facing forward.Good easing.It was a little choppy when he jumped.And I just found out.I know its a loop but after he lands.He somehow slides.Good work.Keep it up.

xninja
06-01-2008, 01:10 AM
so i made a blood test and i was hoping you guys could critique it. i made all the blood in it. (the main test was the circles that hit the floor because i draw like that sometimes but have never pivoted it.) please tell me what you think http://i28.tinypic.com/20uu2yd.jpg

froststick
06-01-2008, 02:06 AM
the blood on the wall looks a little fake because you don't see the blood flying to the wall i put sword in ya the blood isen't on the wall instantly either but the blood that falls to the ground is nice

RedShadow
06-01-2008, 04:07 AM
Sorry, but how do i post pivot animations, i did it but the link didnt work.:Nooooooo:

MoD
06-01-2008, 04:10 AM
Oh dear god.
Save the pivot as a GIF, with the dimensions of Frame shrunk 2, Frame slow 6, and unclick merge, as I have found on several tutorials telling me this is the correct thing to do, now go to a GIF hosting site such as Imageshack, which I would suggest, or Filecram.

RedShadow
06-01-2008, 04:15 AM
It says upload error!
Arrrrgggghhhh!!!!!

MoD
06-01-2008, 04:21 AM
No Pivot ( .piv ), Only GIF files, ( .gif ), understood?

Sherbet
06-01-2008, 05:29 AM
A quick test.

the was i quick test of choppy vs.... ummm.... not so choppy.
the not so choppy dude is a test of all of my recent tests in one.

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.th.gif (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif)


parts i like: punch letter fading.

constructive c&c please?

invertin
06-01-2008, 06:25 AM
My unfinished really rubbish animation.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x297/Stikanimations/Megaman1.gif
Made because I don't have a PSP but I really want Megaman Powered up.

I realize the robot masters could have put up more of a fight, but I didn't really choreograph the fights, I just made it up as it went along.

Oh. and it has about 100 frames of menu. Sorry about that.

EDIT: GAH. PIVOTSPEEDRAPE.

Damnit. Oh well.

pdeathz
06-01-2008, 10:02 AM
that wasn't so bad there were some prety smooth parts

xninja
06-01-2008, 02:43 PM
A quick test.

the was i quick test of choppy vs.... ummm.... not so choppy.
the not so choppy dude is a test of all of my recent tests in one.

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.th.gif (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif)


parts i like: punch letter fading.

constructive c&c please?

well uhh i think the punch and the flailing of the ghosts arms are pretty smooth but you need to work on the fall. and to smooth out the hat guy just a bit more and that would be a good animation.

xninja
06-01-2008, 03:52 PM
sorry for double posting but i wanted to put this up before i forget. please tell me what you think

http://i30.tinypic.com/kef5vp.jpg

Zsdery
06-01-2008, 05:17 PM
nice rope effect (u eased it good)
but well...
low-med begginner

Nukem
06-01-2008, 05:26 PM
A quick test.

the was i quick test of choppy vs.... ummm.... not so choppy.
the not so choppy dude is a test of all of my recent tests in one.

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7330/choppyvsunchoppypv5.th.gif (http://img261.imageshack.us/my.php?image=choppyvsunchoppypv5.gif)


parts i like: punch letter fading.

constructive c&c please?
Needs a floor, more easing and physics. work on that and you should be awesome!

My unfinished really rubbish animation.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x297/Stikanimations/Megaman1.gif
Made because I don't have a PSP but I really want Megaman Powered up.

I realize the robot masters could have put up more of a fight, but I didn't really choreograph the fights, I just made it up as it went along.

Oh. and it has about 100 frames of menu. Sorry about that.

EDIT: GAH. PIVOTSPEEDRAPE.

Damnit. Oh well.
without the speed rape, it would look dandy. make more anims!

sorry for double posting but i wanted to put this up before i forget. please tell me what you think

http://i30.tinypic.com/kef5vp.jpg
the rope kinda lagged a bit. the anim was a hair below average. keep it goin! (I'd suggest looking at every frame to make sure the sticks are goin were they need to be)

masterdmw
06-01-2008, 10:09 PM
here's a little something i did...
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg1/masterdmw/gunshot.gif

vietcoc
06-02-2008, 04:33 AM
May be you should take a quick look at the tutorial. The guy with the gun was a bit lagged.

froststick
06-02-2008, 09:08 AM
and when he hits the arm you should make it longer we want to see blood muhahahahahahaha so when ya do that gimme a hug

dr.sassy
06-02-2008, 10:10 AM
and when he hits the arm you should make it longer we want to see blood muhahahahahahaha so when ya do that gimme a hug
Agreed. More blood would be awesome!

Rabstar
06-02-2008, 10:42 AM
gd job...
But how do u put the animations on like THAT????
Also, how many frames did they take, my one was aboout 150 frames and it wasnt smooth at all!

masterdmw
06-02-2008, 12:06 PM
what about this? I had the blood frame mult. by like 5:
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg1/masterdmw/giv.gif

Rabstar
06-02-2008, 12:21 PM
http:// img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/%3CIMG%3Ehttp://img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif%3C/IMG%3E
Try this, (not so good)
This is my first anim so i hope u guys like it!http://img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif

chriisck
06-02-2008, 03:26 PM
http:// img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/%3CIMG%3Ehttp://img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif%3C/IMG%3E
Try this, (not so good)
This is my first anim so i hope u guys like it!http://img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fightingkilerkc8.gif

That was pretty good. It was mostly smooth and the running was good.
I would say if a practiced a little bit more on some things you could move out of the begginers section such as the guy getting jumped on and the guy flying down to punch the other guy.

dr.sassy
06-02-2008, 06:13 PM
Im still learning but your suppose to imagine someone you hate as the victim hehehe.

Rabstar
06-03-2008, 08:33 AM
Sorry for spamming... but i need to have 20 posts so i can post a URL to my anim

i wont spam unless some1 allows me (admin)

Thats good.... I have 2 questions for u
how do u get the image like that???
How do u quote?
The last bit is a bit of critiscm (sorry)
When the gives the victim the uppercut it looks like hes grabbing him and throwing him up... the first punch is awsome!

My 2nd anim
it took 2 secs
hope u guys like it!
:)
ht tp://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7330/randomballthingzi0.gif

NeCrOdE
06-03-2008, 01:50 PM
My 2nd anim
it took 2 secs
hope u guys like it!
:)
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7330/randomballthingzi0.gif

doesnt look like the guys are running. read some tutorials on running (their arms should be moving while they run, its not easy to pull off "the ninja run" so stick to the basics right now) also its uneased, interesting idea though.

My punch and kick test:

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7070/punchkicktestob1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7070/punchkicktestob1.0accdf3067.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=236&i=punchkicktestob1.gif)

acerocks
06-03-2008, 05:41 PM
wtf its open again

stick[]smash
06-03-2008, 09:11 PM
Yes, I have been gone very long but I have a new animation.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5756/basketballyg1.gif
BASKETBALL!

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 04:00 AM
Hi again!
Ive got a new animation.

ht tp://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2078/latereactionxe9.gif

I dont know how to show the blast bit or the smoke when the guy falls...
could some1 help me?

Ns-2
06-04-2008, 04:07 AM
Hi again!
Ive got a new animation.

ht tp://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2078/latereactionxe9.gif

I dont know how to show the blast bit or the smoke when the guy falls...
could some1 help me?

Not this stuff again you don't need 20 posts just put the Image tags on it aka direct link to gif Link here of course removeing the spaces and star unless they changed it you can still post images.

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 06:06 AM
OK ill try......
I have 1 more question.
How do u get such a COOL signature???

It didnt work....
i pressed prewiew post and i didnt get a pic

Dragonkof
06-04-2008, 07:17 AM
OK ill try......
I have 1 more question.
How do u get such a COOL signature???

Photoshop.
Try it.

Mantha
06-04-2008, 07:24 AM
Rabstar ... spamming is forbidden, read the forum rules please. Try to get 20 posts without spamming, okay?

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 07:28 AM
ok :)
Nice pic
^^
How do i add an avatar (link please)

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 07:36 AM
Soz forgot the link (this is not trying to get 20 posts i just forgot)

ht tp://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3963/tallvssmallsf3.gif

Dragonkof
06-04-2008, 07:39 AM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3963/tallvssmallsf3.gif

Babapadaple
06-04-2008, 08:48 AM
I made an explosion, please rate.

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/3507/usuckhh1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 08:59 AM
Nice
8.5/10!
very good
How do u do an avatar?????!!!

Babapadaple
06-04-2008, 09:05 AM
Go to user cp and add one.

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 09:08 AM
what do u mean??????????????????
i just added one but its a still pic
could u tell me in steps
thx

Automaton
06-04-2008, 02:13 PM
Rabstar - read a tut.

Babapadaple - the explosion was meh. it wasnt good but it wasn't horrible. i think the main reason is it's just an outline of an explosion in black. a good explosion needs fills and colours and doesn't break off into little lines. anyway, you should only start animating explosions when you're intermediate.

NeCrOdE
06-04-2008, 02:13 PM
smash;1251064']Yes, I have been gone very long but I have a new animation.
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5756/basketballyg1.gif
BASKETBALL!





very choppy. try easing it and reading tuts.

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 02:56 PM
DUDE STOP UR GONNA GET BANNED!!!!!
ur not allowed to spam like that!

Rabstar
06-04-2008, 03:25 PM
OMG UR SPAMMING
DUDE STOP!!!!!
UR GONNA GET BANNED!!!!!!!!!!
I KNOW IT SAYS u have to do 20 posts BUT STILLL!!!
JUST PUT A SPACE BETWEEN THE HTTP THING LIKE THIS!
ht tp://
THERE YA GO JUST DO THAT!!!!!

Automaton
06-04-2008, 04:15 PM
someone ban him please. im getting a mod.

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 04:19 PM
awesome...http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7411/fgwq7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
new ani i posted a topic for my tests but i'm postin this one here
got lazy with the arms
OML NO MODZ ONLINE
CONTACTED: ZuLu

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 04:58 PM
ok i can see you almost got your wish...
lets hope ZuLu can forgive u
ohh BTW it's called the edit button USE IT!!!!!!
550th post WOOHOO!!!!

xxxskidxxx
06-04-2008, 04:59 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7538/almostsmootheq6.th.gif (http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=almostsmootheq6.gif)
This is just a punch test i through together. I'm kinda new and young (12) so it took like 6 min.:Oh No!:

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 05:02 PM
Realy choppy but it was ok how it started out
I'm 11 and i didn't spam when i started LOLz Xp

xxxskidxxx
06-04-2008, 05:04 PM
Can i see some of your animations?PLEASE

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 05:12 PM
u mean liek the piv...

xxxskidxxx
06-04-2008, 05:16 PM
Ya in pivot, Im making one rihgt now about a guy getting beat up by a ball:Phew:

Gunned.Stick.
06-04-2008, 05:23 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6607/squarego3.gif

I haven't posted in while,I missed you people.

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 05:24 PM
EDIT BUTTON PLZ!!!!!
...look at my avi then
(WTF why would you ask for sumones anim if they're no good)
EDIT:DAMNIT i hate it when sumone posts before you
BTW W(ho)TF did you miss!!!!

xxxskidxxx
06-04-2008, 05:28 PM
You never said u were no good

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 05:30 PM
...
Guns.@ good phsics... not much else to C&C
W(ho)TF did you miss

xxxskidxxx
06-04-2008, 05:35 PM
I'm no good? Thats what you think, i just wanted to see your animations(you cuss at 11) unbelievable!

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 05:51 PM
(you cuss at 11) unbelievable!
TOTALY SIGNED!!!
look at my avi it's my only realy good one
theres a thead for it...
yep kids these days i know alot more about stuff then you think i'd know!!!

quake
06-04-2008, 06:03 PM
(you cuss at 11) unbelievable!

Yep, kids at age 11+ are having sex, driving, and cussing. Man, get with the scene.

If you take this post seriously your a dumb-ass.

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 06:04 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7411/fgwq7.gif (http://imageshack.us)

ok lets get back on topic C&C my anim plz?

quake
06-04-2008, 06:09 PM
Choppy, wobbly, whats with the movement of him after he stands up. And he just slides up?

Zsdery
06-04-2008, 06:11 PM
it was random...
he floats up using phsicic powers...
legs where ment to wobble
MOAR

Gunned.Stick.
06-04-2008, 07:17 PM
...
Guns.@ good phsics... not much else to C&C
W(ho)TF did you miss

Bassicly everyone I haven't seen anyone here in 2 months.

Upps
06-04-2008, 08:14 PM
Hey..

Zsdery, your jungle collab entery was way better.
and that's not how psychic powers are preformed.
And......NO, thats called jerky, it's not an effect and if you were actually doing it on purpose then DON'T.

Gunned.Stick.
06-04-2008, 09:39 PM
What do I need to improve about that animation?

dr.sassy
06-04-2008, 10:32 PM
This i hope is somewhat better.

Some kids getting in a fight. :heh:

ht tp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6298/pissedjw2.gif

kush
06-05-2008, 03:38 AM
this any good for a starter


http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/5290/beamzv9.gif

quake
06-05-2008, 03:41 AM
this any good for a starter


http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/5290/beamzv9.gif

Meh, Work on more movements, Don't try effects yet. Look at some tutorials and work on smoothing.

Mantha
06-05-2008, 10:19 AM
Rabstar, I'm going to kill you!

Preview your signature:
1. When you are making it, click "preview signature".
2. Or you can click your own name to see your profile.

You can delete or edit your own posts by clicking the edit button.

Despite of my warning, you still keep double, triple-posting. My patience has limits too. Next time I see youdoing that, you're banned. Need any more answers, PM me.

Oh, and that guy's posts have been deleted and he's infractioned.

Just because this is a beginners section, it doesn't mean you're all immune. Read the goddamn official rules of the forum.

Good day.

fatality
06-05-2008, 12:27 PM
Um how do i make guns and such in pivot. and ground lol.

:Cry: Um how do i make guns and such in pivot. and ground lol.

quake
06-05-2008, 02:28 PM
Go to Droidz (http://www.droidz.org/).
Download sticks.
Start up pivot.
Click File and Load figure type.
Find your sticks.
After that to add a new one just click add figure.

PivotAncient
06-05-2008, 03:23 PM
Heres mine that I made in 40 minutes.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/bigvssmall-1.gif

Courtesy?

Gunned.Stick.
06-05-2008, 03:36 PM
Low-Beginner.
Also your walk/movents are too fast,what FPS do you use?

PivotAncient
06-05-2008, 03:56 PM
Posting the Gif speeded it up, I don't really know what fps I chose.

fatality
06-05-2008, 07:20 PM
anyways can anyone give me any tips and such... i know its bad but i dont know what alot of things do and i wanted to test it out, its choppy slow uneven and it needs alot of work and a backround lol. which i need to learn to do.



http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4329/okhereitisjd0.gif

quake
06-05-2008, 07:26 PM
Click This (http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662) Or Better yet, Click this. (http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662)

fatality
06-05-2008, 07:36 PM
how bad is my movie though lol

Zsdery
06-05-2008, 07:39 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5417/93379472bj6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Roll is very smexy ;D
C&C
it's my new avi so i guess C&C that LOLZ

fatality
06-05-2008, 08:58 PM
i have another movie, really bad still but a little better *gay movement -_-"* walking and i guess skipp running lol cause i messed up ha...

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6551/jumpandfallkr0.gif

Sian890_of_WKP
06-05-2008, 09:35 PM
Okay It's sucky but it's my first.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm211/Sian890/attemptpivotkill.gif

awsaludares
06-06-2008, 12:50 AM
Look! cool isnt it:Sweating:

Rabstar
06-06-2008, 01:19 AM
Its a bit too small....
i cant see it properly otherwise i would have strain my eyes
OK
Straining, COOL!
did u make it?

๖ۣۜMomo22901
06-06-2008, 03:38 AM
wow its to tine to see whats happening...

superbenjis
06-06-2008, 09:40 AM
Look! cool isnt it:Sweating:

We odnt see anything :Bricked:
How did u save this animation ?

superbenjis
06-06-2008, 09:40 AM
Look! cool isnt it:Sweating:

We dont see anything :Bricked:
ow much did u resized it ?

fatality
06-06-2008, 10:43 AM
lol no one likes mine xD

Automaton
06-06-2008, 11:06 AM
nope .

fatality
06-06-2008, 11:07 AM
omg i got a good walk hurray!

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/6636/goodwalkingattemptvy3.gif

can someone just let me know if theres something i can do to make it less stiff ect.

Zsdery
06-06-2008, 12:13 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5417/93379472bj6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Roll is very smexy ;D
C&C
it's my new avi so i guess C&C that LOLZ
C&C......... ;D

Automaton
06-06-2008, 12:50 PM
zsdery - same as last time, stiff jerky and uneased.

fatality - your feet dont slide across the floor, and work on easing, stiffness and choppyness.

PivotAncient
06-06-2008, 04:15 PM
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/CliffDeath-1.gif
My cliff death animation attack final.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/Assassinepisode1-1.gif
The start of my assassin series.

C&C and mabey Courtesy?

Sherbet
06-06-2008, 04:21 PM
my newest anim

things i was testing: default rotation
location fading

things i didnt care about: physics
terrible punch

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/487/torturedadefault2ea0.gif

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/487/torturedadefault2ea0.th.gif (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=torturedadefault2ea0.gif)

PivotAncient
06-06-2008, 07:24 PM
Very choppy and no easing. The punch was ok, but it was kind of choppy.
Physics are important dude, that guy flying was unrealistic and in my opinion, it sucked.

Low beginner

Feed back for mine?

dr.sassy
06-06-2008, 10:15 PM
...Any Suggestions so i can add onto it or improve it would help

ht tp://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5364/wearedasupaman2ym0.gif

smish
06-07-2008, 03:36 AM
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5364/wearedasupaman2ym0.gif

smish
06-07-2008, 03:53 AM
http://upd.animatorhost.com/smish/yawnyt12.piv
lol.

Sorry for double posting but can I have some comments on this?

PivotOwnageAW
06-07-2008, 04:58 AM
hey im a begginer i will put up a pivot soon

smish
06-07-2008, 07:24 AM
http://antiup.net/file/gnsayt135s_help.gif
C&C please

Rabstar
06-07-2008, 07:32 AM
? 2 questions
whats C&C?
whats he supposed to be doing??
lol

power fuse0
06-07-2008, 08:29 AM
command and conquer.
However, he means CC, which is constructive critisism

>.>

Zsdery
06-07-2008, 08:49 AM
zsdery - same as last time, stiff jerky and uneased.
H(ow)TF Can i fix this...your not helping me improve your just tellin me whats wrong with it

power fuse0
06-07-2008, 08:50 AM
H(ow)TF Can i fix this...your not helping me improve your just tellin me whats wrong with it

look at tutorials that work on that

Zsdery
06-07-2008, 08:52 AM
that doesn't help me though cuz i still don't understand...
my avi isn't even jerky i don't get it!!!
AND i can't find a tut liek that

Wounded
06-07-2008, 02:40 PM
omg i got a good walk hurray!

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/6636/goodwalkingattemptvy3.gif

can someone just let me know if theres something i can do to make it less stiff ect.
Fatality , take a mirror and walk side ways and look at yourself, some it will help because you should notice that when you step you aren't sliding , your leg is pushing you forward. If you need a example or help pm me.:Happy:




C&C......... ;D

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/CliffDeath-1.gif
My cliff death animation attack final.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/Assassinepisode1-1.gif
The start of my assassin series.

C&C and mabey Courtesy?


I loved the first one , the shotgun reloading i thought was pretty cool :)
Your animations can use some easing though , no worries alot of people useally do, if you need a example pm me and i can give you one to work off of.

my newest anim

things i was testing: default rotation
location fading

things i didnt care about: physics
terrible punch

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/487/torturedadefault2ea0.gif

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/487/torturedadefault2ea0.th.gif (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=torturedadefault2ea0.gif)

I suggest going to droidz and getting the teleport effect stk. helps alot with that stuff , also please "do work on your punch and physics :D" it makes it all the better any tips you want for animating just pm me.

...Any Suggestions so i can add onto it or improve it would help

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5364/wearedasupaman2ym0.gif

I saw your animation and you have to know that the body parts move certain ways, look in the mirror and do the movements before animating them , also work on easing so it looks more realistic if you need help or such just pm me.

Sorry for double posting but can I have some comments on this?






http://antiup.net/file/gnsayt135s_help.gif
C&C please

Smish , If you like pm me and i can help you with easing your animation to make it look smoother. It was alright , looks like you could be a good animation if you learn the basics..

You make the guy freeze when he pulls up , and when he swings its just choopy , But it was pretty good , hope you keep at at :)


WOoo typing errors!

battle-scar
06-07-2008, 07:55 PM
wounded try working on making it just a bit smoother. u have great potential!


cant wait to post my ani's

Wounded
06-07-2008, 08:37 PM
wounded try working on making it just a bit smoother. u have great potential!


cant wait to post my ani's
Hmm... those are not mine , read the names under the qoutes...

fatality
06-07-2008, 08:48 PM
My walking videos are supposed to be slower, and ive made like 3 more and they are getting better.

smish
06-08-2008, 08:14 AM
And.....................?

Kraniz
06-08-2008, 08:38 AM
Hey guys, I'm new here!

There is my animation
htt//img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifffkn6.gif

C&C plz

Rabstar
06-08-2008, 10:11 AM
This is my first combo so i hope u guys like it
Sorry for double posting (i might have posted twice soz)!:Phew::Sweating::Happy:

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4442/mycombopp8.gif

Rabstar
06-08-2008, 10:14 AM
Hey guys, I'm new here!

There is my animation
htt//img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifffkn6.gif

C&C plz
Ummm it wont work...
i added the p at the end
:)
but it still wouldnt work
:(

poppetje3D
06-08-2008, 10:27 AM
Heres my animation. :Happy:
hope u like it.


h ttp://s302.photobucket.com/albums/nn82/poppetje3D/?action=view&current=Poppetje3D1Random.flv

Rabstar
06-08-2008, 11:12 AM
Its good
But i dont understand whats heppening
lol
if i did, i think it would be about 9/10
it also needs to be a bit longer

Edit:Also, heres my new anim, :0. hope u like it!!!
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7914/cooloa9.gif

battle-scar
06-08-2008, 05:10 PM
Hmm... those are not mine , read the names under the qoutes...

oops...


:Sweating:

speeder290
06-08-2008, 06:00 PM
how to you show your pivot from the program pivot???

speeder290
06-08-2008, 09:01 PM
you guys have kinda good ones some are really good

speeder290
06-08-2008, 09:29 PM
this is my first animation
http://s288.photobucket.com/albums/ll171/speeder290/?action=view&current=3scenesofevil1.gif
plz comment on it

stickmanlax
06-08-2008, 11:23 PM
not only first post but also first pivot, im better at drawing stick scenes than animating them, for a heads up... http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/6218/firstjq8.gif

speeder290
06-08-2008, 11:30 PM
i hope you enjoy this one for me it barely showed up but i hope it works for you guys tell me if it doesnt
http://s288.photobucket.com/albums/ll171/speeder290/?action=view&current=thedeadlyweapon.gif

piv0t_n4rb
06-09-2008, 06:33 AM
~So I'll just post a simple run that I've been working on

Blot
06-09-2008, 07:06 AM
speeder that was quite bad, no easing, no physics, choppy, sticks were bad, used the default....... look at some tuts....

pivot n4rb that doesnt look to good, move the backbone it looks stiff

luckyjoe
06-09-2008, 02:58 PM
That was a pretty cool run loop, nice stick figure as well

japanstickninja
06-09-2008, 02:59 PM
This is my animation.I is not really that good since I have not used pivot for along time.

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg190/matt123145/test.gif

speeder290
06-09-2008, 10:31 PM
heres another of mine its probally not that good cause i was in a hurry
http://s288.photobucket.com/albums/ll171/speeder290/?action=view&current=basketball.gif
o and by the way its about basketball

dr.sassy
06-10-2008, 01:19 AM
This is a stickman doing some practice.

ht tp://img78.imageshack.us/img78/294/practice2en5.gif

poppetje3D
06-10-2008, 01:22 PM
This is a stickman doing some practice.

ht tp://img78.imageshack.us/img78/294/practice2en5.gif

Well for a beginner it's ok :Happy:

poppetje3D
06-10-2008, 01:24 PM
~So I'll just post a simple run that I've been working on

Awsome
I Cant make a run :Nooooooo:

invertin
06-10-2008, 04:33 PM
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x297/Stikanimations/Kungfu.gif
GAHPIVOTSPEEDRAPEAGAIN

Oh well. Me watching too much Kung Fu Panda (and then missing most of it D:)

I remember when I was allowed to post outside the beginner section.. That was great..

Stickittoya
06-10-2008, 09:43 PM
Please tell me what you think of this. This is very old though...



__________________________________________________ ______
I think I'm an intermediate??? Tell me when i post my new stuff.
__________________________________________________ ______
:Sweating:
http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?p=pivot+rescue&n=21&ei=utf-8&js=1&fr=yfp-t-501&tnr=20&vid=1586328

Blot
06-10-2008, 10:44 PM
dr. sassy look at some tuts on basic stuff....... and try animating with a floor..... i f u want a floor just pm me

die321
06-10-2008, 11:00 PM
Please tell me what you think of this. This is very old though...



__________________________________________________ ______
I think I'm an intermediate??? Tell me when i post my new stuff.
__________________________________________________ ______
:Sweating:
http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?p=pivot+rescue&n=21&ei=utf-8&js=1&fr=yfp-t-501&tnr=20&vid=1586328

Sorry, that's absolutely out of the question, EVERYTHING needs help . . . check out this (http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662) tut at DarkDemon.org

Blot
06-10-2008, 11:43 PM
Please tell me what you think of this. This is very old though...



__________________________________________________ ______
I think I'm an intermediate??? Tell me when i post my new stuff.
__________________________________________________ ______
:Sweating:
http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?p=pivot+rescue&n=21&ei=utf-8&js=1&fr=yfp-t-501&tnr=20&vid=1586328


im sorry but there is no way u r intermediate.... sorry but i would say low beginner, lucky u posted in beg section and just look at the tut tht die gave u i usually suggest that tu but he got in befiore me >:(

Bengo11
06-11-2008, 03:59 AM
my first movie (since about a year or two)

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2981/snipese9.gif

2nd times smoother but usually alot smoother

Rabstar
06-11-2008, 08:44 AM
Its amazing (for first post)
but a bit choppy
and stiff
for ur post, 10/10
:)
how did u get the sniper scope look in it??

Rabstar
06-11-2008, 08:50 AM
Japanstickninja, quite good
HOW DO U GET IT LIKE A PIC?

zawmbee
06-11-2008, 10:23 AM
i r back!
tests can **** themselves and i have returnedededed from my slumber, lol.
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1622/acornkickmz4.gif
ive lost the game.
rust + gif rape = zombpiv

Stickittoya
06-11-2008, 11:42 AM
Tell me how I'm doing I've been working with pivot for a long amount of time.
I can do better animations but I never finish them and/or i don't remember to finish them.
______________________

How am I doing you tell me!
______________________


http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randomtestgifzf7.gif

quake
06-11-2008, 01:46 PM
Its reeeely stiff, and when he lands it shows no signs that he even left the ground. He should bend his legs when he lands.

Stickittoya
06-11-2008, 05:07 PM
I'll never be good at pivot...:Cry:
I want to be great at animating but i just suck...I'm a loser!!! A loser!!!!!!!:Nooooooo:

Just for fun watch this animation

http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bluevsredgy0.gif"]http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bluevsredgy0.gif

Zsdery
06-11-2008, 05:14 PM
i r back!
tests can **** themselves and i have returnedededed from my slumber, lol.
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1622/acornkickmz4.gif
ive lost the game.
rust + gif rape = zombpiv
you should finish that liek so he actualy finishes kicking it...
med inter =D
BTW it looks liek a hump jump (pun intended)
it looks mildy (really mildy!!!) liek flahs
BTW stickittoya thats the way i felt on my 300th post a long time ago
but i was better than u at animating (no offense)

Stickittoya
06-11-2008, 09:58 PM
So what do you think of it I'm still a beginner remember that. I just made this its fresh out of the program.

__________________________________
H8ing is not a emotion...Its a way of Life

http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ownagezr8.gif

Blot
06-12-2008, 02:34 AM
hold the camera on what i think was bullet for longer, cos as u can see it is hard to tell what it is....... what frame speed r u using stickittoya?

Bengo11
06-12-2008, 02:49 AM
I get most of my figures off droidz

Upps
06-12-2008, 03:28 AM
i r back!
tests can **** themselves and i have returnedededed from my slumber, lol.
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/1622/acornkickmz4.gif
ive lost the game.
rust + gif rape = zombpiv


you've been officially IGNORED.
Nice sig, but your avatar is old...

Bengo11
06-12-2008, 04:29 AM
Heres my 2nd animation
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8720/ninjapv9.gif
its still usually smoother

Blot
06-12-2008, 04:32 AM
please look at some tuts on:
easing
physics
realistics movements
blood
walking

i suggest bahas tut on dark demon

japanstickninja
06-12-2008, 12:11 PM
My second animation ever posted on this website.


http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg190/matt123145/forPD.gif

It is very short.
It may go very fast also.

TheGecko
06-12-2008, 12:27 PM
http://www.filecram.com/files/548black%20son.gif

ok so i realise that what i just posted is f*cken fail, i have been trying this thing for a week nao, its my gazilionest try, and i think i got a little better than when i started ^^
oh and the speed got ****ed up for some reason :/

skysniper
06-12-2008, 06:56 PM
its bad i know :3 just felt like makeing a bad piv :3 http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/7276/itscrapra5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Stickittoya
06-12-2008, 09:57 PM
Heres a new animation I made. Hope you like it :)


Here: http://img78.imageshack.us/my.php?image=smoothonegn4.gif

Zsdery
06-13-2008, 03:24 PM
you've been officially IGNORED.
Nice sig, but your avatar is old...
WTF i rated it to

Squeegy
06-13-2008, 07:46 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Stick%20Arena/stickarena1.gif

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Stick%20Arena/stickarena2.gif

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Stick%20Arena/stickarena3b-1.gif




http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/chase.gif

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/headrip.gif

Spartan1105
06-13-2008, 09:10 PM
punch test...commnt?

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2489/punchoj0.gif
srry its so big...i tried resizing it, but it kept going back to the original size

die321
06-13-2008, 09:12 PM
:U . . .

^^^^
NEEDZ HELPZORZ . . .

look at alot of tuts and make em smaller god damnit :3

basically everything that can possibly be wrong with them is lol
EDIT: DAMNIT DUDE lol some guy posted right before me, this it to squeegy :D

HXC-Kobra
06-13-2008, 09:22 PM
First ever animation. Just a shooting test. :?
http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=minigunzorqk1.gif

Squeegy
06-13-2008, 09:24 PM
:U . . .

^^^^
NEEDZ HELPZORZ . . .

look at alot of tuts and make em smaller god damnit :3

basically everything that can possibly be wrong with them is lol
EDIT: DAMNIT DUDE lol some guy posted right before me, this it to squeegy :D

Thanks for your pretty mindless flame. Everything? They're not giving you seizures. That's something. Also, mine are the same size as everyone else's, unless you mean the stick figures.

HXC-Kobra
06-13-2008, 09:37 PM
hahaha squeegy i like the one were he puts the guys head on his head... :heh:

Spartan1105
06-13-2008, 09:59 PM
Slow walking...(the guys hands are in his pocket)

I was gonna add something to it, like some guy that wants to fight him, but I'd rather wait, and see what people think about it first.

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/2991/slowwalklk8.gif
THERE, I MADE IT SMALLER :P

EDIT: ( i bet no one cares about this since its "old") buut...i figured out when i was looking at the frames, there was a double frame in it. :P

die321
06-13-2008, 10:07 PM
Thanks for your pretty mindless flame. Everything? They're not giving you seizures. That's something. Also, mine are the same size as everyone else's, unless you mean the stick figures.
*Sigh* . . . that wasn't really a flame . . . what I meant by it had everything wrong with it was that it was choppy, stiff, and uneased, so to fix those you should look at tuts

I gave you advice and you took it the wrong way
Misunderstanding . . . ain't it a bitch (a little humor there if you got that)

anyway, what i meant was scale it down to 1/2, or else it takes up the whole page (Like your post did), and if they're scaled right, it should only take about what 2 average sized text posts would be.

EDIT: Spartan, nice walk there . . . it's pretty smooth but i see a little jerk, most likely because it's a loop, but yeah remember to try to keep it looking smooth the whole animation, and don't get lazy and try to speed things up by not trying. Keep it up DAWG!!1!11one1!

HXC-Kobra
06-13-2008, 10:20 PM
Hey any advice for my first animation?

Spartan1105
06-13-2008, 10:27 PM
Spartan, nice walk there . . . it's pretty smooth but i see a little jerk, most likely because it's a loop, but yeah remember to try to keep it looking smooth the whole animation, and don't get lazy and try to speed things up by not trying. Keep it up DAWG!!1!11one1!

Thanks...ill post the new anim ASAP.

Squeegy
06-13-2008, 10:47 PM
Well, that was spam. Anyway, where's that stickman that everyone uses, the one in die's signature?

stickmaneatingicecream
06-13-2008, 10:54 PM
how do i post animations?

please tell me someone

Spartan1105
06-13-2008, 11:07 PM
how do i post animations?

please tell me someone

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=36183&highlight=how+to+upload+anims


^^here^^

Squeegy
06-13-2008, 11:29 PM
Alright, I checked out the guide on DarkDemon.org and tried the uppercut.

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/uppercut.gif
I realize it's pretty crap, but it's my first attempt.

EDIT:

And a slide punch.
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/slidepunch.gif

Slide punch in action.
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/slidepunchia.gif

bustastks
06-14-2008, 08:14 AM
i dunno, seemed choppy to me. also needs easing in action. Watch tuts more closely

Squeegy
06-14-2008, 09:17 AM
Actually I have looked at tutorials for easing, it's in there. And of course it's choppy, it's my first attempt at it with a completely different stickman.

die321
06-14-2008, 09:32 AM
Actually I have looked at tutorials for easing, it's in there. And of course it's choppy, it's my first attempt at it with a completely different stickman.
The Stick really shouldn't matter, and there shouldn't be any explanation for it being choppy if you're following a frame by frame tut, but at least you're getting some of the movements down

Some things i see wrong are that in one frame he move a bunch, then everything stops for 1 other limb to move
you should move everything equally and in unison, unless one limb is easing while the others keep going

EDIT: also I don't think you can slide and punch, lol

Squeegy
06-14-2008, 09:35 AM
Well, it was a new stickman to me, and kind of confusing to move because he had all these different joints.

Yes, about the movement, that's the fault of the tutorial. I was trying to follow it exactly and it only told me one thing at a time.

die321
06-14-2008, 09:40 AM
If I were you I'd get used to that stick, cause it's a wonderful base stick for tests and small fights if you're not using specifically colored, or specially designed sticks for story anims


but they're good extras to beat the shit outta :P

Jah-Jah
06-14-2008, 10:14 AM
I made a sprite animation do you think it's beginnerhttp://img362.imageshack.us/img362/1251/sprite1hk0.gif

die321
06-14-2008, 10:47 AM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5799/introtocolabck7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
What do ya think of my intro to the colab with
Twisted Symphony here? The guy got raped by the .gif, he should be dark gray

btw the only reason i'm posting here in the beginners section is cause i don't wanna waste space in the open thread

Jah-Jah, Downloading sprites and making an anim can't show us if your beginner or not, make another and we'll see

burza
06-14-2008, 01:30 PM
From newest to oldest :
http://upd.animatorhost.com/Burza/Ouch9yd.gif
http://upd.animatorhost.com/Burza/Without_titles1ok.gif
http://upd.animatorhost.com/Burza/beztytulupgz6.gif

die321
06-14-2008, 01:37 PM
Nice

I'd say borderline inter, but the only problems are minor stiff parts for short amounts of time, but otherwise, make longer anims and you might be inter

So lol hows mine ^^^ It's my colab intro with TS

burza
06-14-2008, 02:02 PM
It's pretty nice.
But I feel like it's kinda.. Trembling..
Ehh.. Question : Is there a double framing ? Or my internet did that ?

PS. : If there are errors, then sry for my english, ya know I'm not so good at it.. I'm only 12.

die321
06-14-2008, 02:11 PM
Yeah, it was double framing, just to build suspense at the beginning
Hopefully TS will get back on soon to do his part, lol he left right when i finished 16 hours ago and hasn't been back >_>

Spartan1105
06-14-2008, 07:52 PM
My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet :Embarrassed:. Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3249/runexplosionsl1.gif

be a man
06-14-2008, 09:21 PM
lol i couldn't do any better :)!

awsaludares
06-15-2008, 01:54 AM
people w8 until i have 20 posts!!!

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 02:14 AM
My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet :Embarrassed:. Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3249/runexplosionsl1.gif

Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif

die321
06-15-2008, 10:11 AM
Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif
Ok his wasn't that good, it's in the beginner section for god's sake

and for joo

VERY stiff uneased and choppy
it's tut time, hit up darkdemon.org's pivot tutorial master list and stare at it for a few weeks until it soaks in

NOW TAI MAI SHU

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 11:07 AM
Ok his wasn't that good, it's in the beginner section for god's sake

and for joo

VERY stiff uneased and choppy
it's tut time, hit up darkdemon.org's pivot tutorial master list and stare at it for a few weeks until it soaks in

NOW TAI MAI SHU

I was saying wow cause it was his second stick animation and you have to admit it wasnt THAT bad...also mine stinks cause im a beginner too lol XD

Jah-Jah
06-15-2008, 11:22 AM
Is it beginner?http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/4788/halotd5.gif

Squeegy
06-15-2008, 11:35 AM
Is it beginner?

Yes. The walk was crap, the stick figures were too stiff, the one on the right never moved at all, the guy's fall was weird, and he disappeared. An animation doesn't have to be a clean loop.



Ok first off...WOW....second....heres my first pivot animation...i dub it....dont play with guns! http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/dontplaywithguns.gif



Uh, no offense, I realize you're a beginner, but it sucked. Why?



1. Stiff, uneased, choppy, unfluid. Move everyone at the same time, and do it slowly.



2. The title was too short, and you shouldn't have had one at all, really. One frame is barely anything.



3. The bullets were already there. Make them come out of the guns and move quickly towards wherever they were shot at.



4. Read some tutorials. DarkDemon.org, as said, has some good ones.





My second anim, I have to admit, it's sorta choppy. The explosion at the end was a test, I don't know how to do them yet . Oh yeah and I know the guy lagged a bit after the explosion. Comments?





Nice hatred of the Chinese. But yeah, it's good, especially for a second animation. The sword is really nice, and you pulled off the camera really well. Just work on your explosions. =P

Spartan1105
06-15-2008, 01:40 PM
Nice hatred of the Chinese. But yeah, it's good, especially for a second animation. The sword is really nice, and you pulled off the camera really well. Just work on your explosions. =P

Arrite, I didn't know what other stks to use because I was too lazy to choose, so I randomly picked one :P
IM NOT RACIST :Nooooooo: AZN's my kind :P (i'm Jap and Flip)

HXC-Kobra
06-15-2008, 05:18 PM
Spartan, I really liked the animation.. minus the pink explosion?

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 05:27 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=encounter20cu0.gif

This is my second animation...is it better than the last one?

Gunned.Stick.
06-15-2008, 05:29 PM
Nice for a second.
My second also looked something like that ^.^ good memories.

Should I animate Pivot again?

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 05:33 PM
Nice for a second.
My second also looked something like that ^.^ good memories.

Should I animate Pivot again?

Its actually your decision. You can if you want to again.

HXC-Kobra
06-15-2008, 06:04 PM
Is it just my computer or on Dragons animation, did it left behind junk when the stick moved?

pivot killer
06-15-2008, 06:22 PM
it is okay i rushed ^_^

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 06:22 PM
Is it just my computer or on Dragons animation, did it left behind junk when the stick moved?

Did it wha? Sorry for me that doesnt make sense lol..

pivot killer
06-15-2008, 06:23 PM
the thing isnt working:(
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HXC-Kobra
06-15-2008, 06:24 PM
For some reason when i was wathcing your animation, when the stick figure moved, it left behind like particles... kinda weird and hard to explain.

HXC-Kobra
06-15-2008, 06:27 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/346v0cj.gif
My first animation.

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 06:37 PM
For some reason when i was wathcing your animation, when the stick figure moved, it left behind like particles... kinda weird and hard to explain.

might be you...i dont think it does it with anyone else

Edit: Nice animation btw

HXC-Kobra
06-15-2008, 07:27 PM
Thanks :D two more i made...

http://i27.tinypic.com/hu0g85.gif

[IMG=http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3038/minigunzorqk1.th.gif] (http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=minigunzorqk1.gif)

Squeegy
06-15-2008, 08:59 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=encounter20cu0.gif

This is my second animation...is it better than the last one?

1. Too stiff. Also a bit choppy.

2. The sword just went right through him.

3. Run kinda sucked, check a tutorial.




By the way guys, how's this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/uppercutavatar2.gif

Spartan1105
06-15-2008, 10:25 PM
By the way guys, how's this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/uppercutavatar2.gif

a lot better, it doesn't have that small pause, like before. It's smoother. :)

dartdragonheart
06-15-2008, 10:30 PM
1. Too stiff. Also a bit choppy.

2. The sword just went right through him.

3. Run kinda sucked, check a tutorial.




By the way guys, how's this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/uppercutavatar2.gif

1. Remember...im still new to pivot..2 nice...though i dont think I notice a difference.

Squeegy
06-15-2008, 10:39 PM
Yeah, that's why you're a beginner. There's tons of differences, actually. =/

1. Floor.

2. Legs spread better.

3. Jump is better, landing is better.

4. Smoother.

5. Moves all at the same time.

power fuse0
06-16-2008, 09:07 AM
1. Too stiff. Also a bit choppy.

2. The sword just went right through him.

3. Run kinda sucked, check a tutorial.




By the way guys, how's this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f357/swallis21/Random%20Stick%20Animations/uppercutavatar2.gif

Its a little bit Choppy with little easing, however it doesn't look too bad.
You just need to ease out the back and the head at the end of the movement so it doesn't look so sudden when he stops.
You also need to make your limbs flow form the last frame.d
OH yeah and dont make the stickfigure slide when he crouches.

Rabstar
06-16-2008, 09:58 AM
Yo Squeegy ur uppercut thing was the one from dardemon
i think
thats the one i got

Squeegy
06-16-2008, 10:00 AM
Its a little bit Choppy with little easing, however it doesn't look too bad.

Actually there's easing in there, like 5 frames of it, a lot for such a short animation.

You just need to ease out the back and the head at the end of the movement so it doesn't look so sudden when he stops.

Don't know what you mean.

You also need to make your limbs flow form the last frame.d

What? That doesn't make any sense.

OH yeah and dont make the stickfigure slide when he crouches.

He never crouches, and he's sliding from the forward momentum. That's easing, isn't it?

die321
06-16-2008, 05:06 PM
4 Things Squeegy (Explaining Pf0 for you)

1. He meant the end probably, and it doesn't matter how big the anim is to whether you ease more or not, just don't get lazy, and put your time and effort into your anims to improve.
2. At the end it just seems like the head jerks down and it looks kinda awkward.
3. At the end the arms look wierd and don't flow well with everything.
4. When he bends forward, his leg slides instead of his knee bending, forcing you to slide his foot back yet again to have enough power for the jump.
-Die

dartdragonheart
06-16-2008, 05:37 PM
Ok....NOW...this is my third animation

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l174/DartDragonheart/demonic_duels.gif

Edit: By the way, yes I know its choppy at some points but is it any better than the last one?

bobobo
06-16-2008, 09:17 PM
uhm run test

http://img254.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runnerdk2.gif

dartdragonheart
06-16-2008, 09:32 PM
O.o....it looks more like hes sliding lol

bobobo
06-16-2008, 09:51 PM
ya its my first try at running

die321
06-16-2008, 10:26 PM
I'm gawna cry . . .
yeah anyway, work on your running a LOT
just make sure he doesn't . . . do whatever he was doing lol

bobobo
06-16-2008, 10:38 PM
dont cry cause i suck its ok im commiting suicide tommarow =)