Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

[Teh_One]

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/5300/mygoodoneie8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
this is my best one so far. its still really stiff.

[sss]

his leg looks weird

[poopymcfloopydoopy]

Here's my video! Sry for the crappy quality, i couldn't get the ,gif file from the vid, so i used unregistered hypercam.

I can't post it yet bcuz i didnt post 20 times yet.

[sss]

why? you just save piv as gif and upload it to imageshack or other websites

[milafa]

here doggy doggy yea good doggy :P watch please

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/4412/hondjehieren8.th.gif (http://img185.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hondjehieren8.gif)

[sss]

was that a dog it looked like TiranoREX ;D

[milafa]

lol yea i didnt know how to make a dog with pivot... XD

[kreeze]

hey i will make new tread there will have some weapons if you want some of them just send an email to kreeze55@gmail.com and send the names of the weapons you want to get from me i will send you them.

if you aggreed!
i do not spam but i will paste them on the beginer and basic pivot channel
THE MASSAGES

[sss]

WOOT? If someone need guns they can 1:create 2:Go to some web page like droidz and download the,

[Digorrybio]

lol yea i didnt know how to make a dog with pivot... XD
i'll make a dog for you, i'll send it to you in pms when i'm done.

[sss]

I was bored so i made this quickly http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?image=reversekickux7.gif

[stickmaster]

Hey these are my first 4 ones that I actually like. They are not perfect. But they are OK.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s267/pinkidrummer/tesat.gif
First I made with CapNs running tutorial.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s267/pinkidrummer/swordrunning.gif
An addition to it.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s267/pinkidrummer/fatality.gif
I was so bored. (Fatality)
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s267/pinkidrummer/loser.gif
That loser died.

Whats your favorite?

[sss]

none .

[Celestial1]

First I made with CapNs running tutorial.

An addition to it.

I was so bored. (Fatality)

That loser died.

Whats your favorite?

Running: it simply looks like the guy is jumping while shaking his legs and arms; add some frames in the middle to show the switching of arms and legs, and it will look much better.

Sword + Running: Same for the legs, but also-Who carries a sword that way? Imagine holding it like that while running, your arms would be so taut to the sword's grip; it feels awkward. It looks twice as awkward when you're watching someone else do it. Move the sword; Traditional under-the-arm style is generally a good place to start.

Fatality: The "crosshair" goes behind his head? He also looks a bit like he's trying to take a squat, and when he gets shot he moves slightly to the left, gets a bullet hole in the head, but doesn't drop or at least lose the stiff joints?

Pistol: The shooter only moves his head while firing; add some recoil to the arms, because if that's a deagle he's firing he's gotta be superman to hold it that still. The victim falls kind of flatly, and his feat fall out from under him; Make arms drop, and follow his center of gravity down to figure out how he'd hit the ground first. The way he is shot he should bend his back a bit backwards, then begin to fall and his back straightens up normally again due to the falling motion, before his arse hits the ground and everything else follows.

[sss]

I was bored so i made this quickly http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?image=reversekickux7.gif


Yah... c&c .

[stickmaster]

Thanks Celestial. On the second on the man is about to strike down with the sword. Good advice though.

[flac0415]

Can someone rate my new tribute to the chase
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CsX96lEfDjE

[Teh_One]

to be honest, it was extremeley choppy. all of it made absoluteley no sense. everything was way too stiff. you should spend some more time on your animations.

[sss]

I was bored so i made this quickly http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?i...rsekickux7.gif

[chaddexter]

how do u make a pivot

[bloodymary]

hey i am back this is one of my (nooby Animations):http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/1681/mywarkm7.gif

[bloodymary]

this is one awesome thing A CIGGARETE FLICK

[bloodymary]

Cry oh my god i can't find anything good!

[bloodymary]

go here!http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9067/omgmd2.gif

[Teh_One]

this is one of my ones i made in about one hour to 30 minuites. i think it sucks, but oh well.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2361/testdi4.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[Digorrybio]

i'm tired of this. just because this is the beginner's thread, doesn't mean you post every half-assed peice of shit you crap out. do NOT post your animations here unless you put some ****ing efort into it. we don't need to see every thing you can slam together in a few seconds, if that's the best you can do, then we wnat to see it, but if you just slammed 5 minutes worth of work into a peice of shit, **** off, we don't want to see it. also, i know this qualifies as "flamming" but it think it deserves it, for obvious reasons.

[peanutlordofdoom]

This is my first 1000 frame animation and it's a rip off of the chase by pivotrj. And btw, don't kill me. Please.
EDIT
Well, it didnt work, so here's an url to it.
http://s261.photobucket.com/albums/ii47/lord_of_peanuts/?action=view&current=Yesfinallymychasethingy.flv
Oh btw the sounds out of sync so it would sound better if you mute your computer

[sss]

I was bored so i made this quickly c&c http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?i...rsekickux7.gif

Please... .

[Zofar]

Erm... my latest. Rank and c&c plz. Unless it's too short. it was a movement test.
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3264/jumptestthingcd2.gif

[PivotAncient]

Im to newb to rank, but I kind of like yours zofar, trip lol.

[Teh_One]

yea, i agree.
mah computers installing flash!
frickin' SCORE!!!

[PivotAncient]

My first Pivot, ever.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4421/randomnessyc5.gif

[Vervanda]

work on everything.

[PivotAncient]

Work on criticism please, no one likes a ass.

[Vervanda]

Well its choppy.
its a bad stick.

crappy physics.
no easing.

[Garuda]

Lol check out the page number.....

[Zofar]

Yea, a big test. The beam, i know it's crappy, this wasn't a beam test. Pz focus on the movements themselves. C&C and rate.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5012/hugetestsx9.gif

[flac0415]

Can someone rate my new tribute to the chase
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CsX96lEfDjE

[Zofar]

well, this is my first time ranking, but, i'm thinking low beginner. Maybe med. It was stiff, though, i didn't notice too much. The movements were choppy. Work on all the basics.

[Falling]

Yea, a big test. The beam, i know it's crappy, this wasn't a beam test. Pz focus on the movements themselves. C&C and rate.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5012/hugetestsx9.gif

Ok, the bad parts I saw were when he twisted in the air, that was bad, the beam, and the end when he was just tossed on screen. Otherwise I think this was a good job.

[sss]

I was bored so i made this quickly http://img253.imageshack.us/my.php?i...rsekickux7.gif

For the love of!!@! Gimme some C&C!!!!

[PivotAncient]

Everyone stop posting here for awile until its 2008:)

[MadHatter]

@pivotancient: your a dumbass

and sss i cant see your anim when i clicked on the link it went to a blank page

[sss]

http://img245.imageshack.us/content.php?page=done&l=img245/9748/reversekickko0.gif

Here

[Zofar]

The physics were bad, when he flies up, it looks like his body should move a bit. And, when he flys up, his legs are unmoving, when they start swaying, it's like something invisible pushed his legs. I think low beginner.

[bloodymary]

This is my deer run and flip test give me any and or suggestions/tips

[sss]

zofar so why do you think i'm posting here? Any more c&c?
http://img245.imageshack.us/content.php?page=done&l=img245/9748/reversekickko0.gif

[Axemunger]

not my first Pivot animation, but my latest one isn't finnished yet, but what do u think?
http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc302/axemunger/stickfall.gif

Can someone rate mine PLZ!?

[bloodymary]

AWESOME axemunger i give med. intermediate

[bloodymary]

My punching test took me a few minutes to figure it out

[Zofar]

I think his knees should bend, along with his body, to show the power of the punch. Maybe add an in-air frame,so that the arm doesn't just teleport to its destination. Here's an example i made:
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4707/punchshowingrs2.png
yea, it's a cruddy picture, im not good with art, but you see what i mean.

[sss]

Can someone rate mine PLZ!?

Slow,more easing,low beg

[bloodymary]

well i think i should do that.... but then again who likes my deer run and flip?

[Falling]

Here's a run test I did

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3231/runtestgifzz0.gif

[bloodymary]

That is good i rate med. intermediate well here is a unit i created:

[Falling]

I think you should try and rate better. It is important you give people a truthful rating, as in, the actual thing. What I did wasn't even near Inter. it was still low beginner. Work on that. And your stk is good, just don't show them to us, animate them.

[Vervanda]

http://www.filecram.com/files/week%20project.gif

[animator12345]

That is good i rate med. intermediate well here is a unit i created:
that isn't med inter, thats low beg

[susy95]

hi, this is my first animation :P

I hope you like it

img125.imageshack.us/img125/451/pivizr7.gif

[animator12345]

easing
chopyness
he should bend his knees before he jumps
when he is in the air make him move his limbs and body about
and more frames at the end

[Teh_One]

i tried to work on smoothness on this one.http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9360/runastopce1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[Dark]

Good.
But work on easing, stiffness, and jerking.

Working on one thing does not make your animation completely better.

["Psycho"]

heres some of mine


http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8176/lessonhr3.gif (http://imageshack.us)


http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7776/uploaduppercutxr8.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[Dark]

Work on one stick tests before you try something with two sticks. And read this to become better.
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=22662

[Elpha]

Haven't posted here in awhile...
Jazzy:
http://www.filepact.com/files/jazzy.gif

[Terix]

kinda stiff. good theme to it though...


just bored, doing whatever... I guess......

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/finished8a23.gif

[Delphinus19]

http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchzf8.gif

Punch test, made it in like three seconds...

[MadHatter]

his arm looks weird when he withdraws it from the guys face

[superbenjis]

low beg, read tutorias on blood, run and punch :/, but you say u made it in three seconds, dont make your animations quickly ..

[Delphinus19]

I know, patience is a virtue that i don't have. I was bored... I thought the blood was okay though.

[Terix]

kinda stiff. good theme to it though...


just bored, doing whatever... I guess......

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/finished8a23.gif


any comments?

.

["Psycho"]

kinda stiff. good theme to it though...


just bored, doing whatever... I guess......

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/finished8a23.gif
Get out of the begginer section and stop making us feel bad

["Psycho"]

Work on one stick tests before you try something with two sticks. And read this to become better.
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=22662

baha is a god! :Bricked:

[Terix]

Get out of the begginer section and stop making us feel bad

are you kidding? I'm only like a medish- highish bigginer... ish.... pivoteer. not that ranks matter anymore, but it saves me the flameing and shit. also, don't double post. just edit the last one.

[Lone Wolf]

are you kidding? I'm only like a medish- highish bigginer... ish.... pivoteer. not that ranks matter anymore, but it saves me the flameing and shit. also, don't double post. just edit the last one.

Uh. no. Go ahead and post out of the beginner's section. You get shitty comments in here anyways.

[Terix]

very true. I'll do that.

[gs1]

umm noob i kno what do you think?

[sss]

From when punks Trow rocks that explodes?, you need to learn how to run,more realistic movements.

[bloodymary]

To GS1,
I wouldn't do effects like the wind,but i think you need a bit more work so i agree with SSS.

[superbenjis]

Here a short pivot :)

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3186/yjof3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[Darc]

pretty nice, i just dont like the second bullet, its too big to go through a little hole on that sniper. and the back arm was stiff, move the forearm a bit more.

[Digorrybio]

i'm posting this here just because i don't think it deserves to not be here.
http://ihostupost.com/files/494/random.gif

[Vervanda]

http://www.filecram.com/files/week%20project.gif

[superbenjis]

Heeuu, what is that ?! o_O

[Zofar]

I was trying a kick. Is it a good kick? C&C please...
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5360/counterheadbuttox7.gif

[Lone Wolf]

I was trying a kick. Is it a good kick? C&C please...
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5360/counterheadbuttox7.gif

The easing needs work, and it's pretty stiff and jerky.

[psykofr33k]

Blah. I was just messing around with this animations. Comments?
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/New2.gif

[Death Angel]

This is my best anim pls tell me how to make it beter...

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/4241/movie10ir3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[CursedWaters]

Well, this definitely isn't my first ever movie, but it's where I am now. I'm just gonna submit this, cross my fingers, and prepare for some criticism. Just please don't tell me I'm low beginner... I don't know...

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/war1incomp.gif

It's not finished. How d'ya think I did with the background?
The ending runs a little jumpy and reveals a little more gap between frames. It's not supposed to slow down, ever since upload it's been like that. Or else it's my cruddy internet. Hope it doesn't lag, or that will effect how you see it...

[Zofar]

a way i reduce lag is to shrink it down... to a fourth of its size. A smaller file runs smoother.

[Lone Wolf]

Well, this definitely isn't my first ever movie, but it's where I am now. I'm just gonna submit this, cross my fingers, and prepare for some criticism. Just please don't tell me I'm low beginner... I don't know...

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/war1incomp.gif

It's not finished. How d'ya think I did with the background?
The ending runs a little jumpy and reveals a little more gap between frames. It's not supposed to slow down, ever since upload it's been like that. Or else it's my cruddy internet. Hope it doesn't lag, or that will effect how you see it...

Beginner. If you did the background yourself, it looks pretty cool. It's stiff, so move the backbone more. Also, work on physics.

[Zofar]

well, my latest. Rank and c&c plz.
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6900/test6mw3.gif

[CursedWaters]

Beginner. If you did the background yourself, it looks pretty cool. It's stiff, so move the backbone more. Also, work on physics.
Yeah, my stks don't have very... flexible backbones. They connect like this:

O-------O

Should it be like this?

O---O---O

[Dark]

Yes, it should. Less stiffness.

[Lone Wolf]

Yeah, my stks don't have very... flexible backbones. They connect like this:

O-------O

Should it be like this?

O---O---O

Yeah, that's how my base stk looks like. It doesn't hurt to add one more too.

[CursedWaters]

Yeah, that's how my base stk looks like. It doesn't hurt to add one more too.
Dang, well I'll have to start all over after I make a more detalied stk.:Nooooooo:

Here's one that's been collecting dust. I know it sucks, I just thought the general idea of it was cool. I might try to recreate it with more physics and, uh... some vertebrae, heh heh.:Happy:

Oh, and... I'm a low beginner, aren't I?

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/f5.gif

[Terix]

pretty much, just work MAJORLY on stiffness, and easeing. you really have potential.

[the drawer]

I recently downloaded pivot on my labtop and here is an ani' I made.
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t221/The_Drawer/swordop.gif

[Blaxo]

heres a animation i made just testing my easing

[Arch-Angel]

http://www.filecram.com/files/highbeginner.gif
Made on my laptop. Am I high beginner yet? Or are my animations to stiff and uneased?

[psykofr33k]

Yeah, not much to comment on. Just a run. Here is my animation I posted earlier, and, got no comments one. Comment, please?
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/New2.gif

[Terix]

http://www.filecram.com/files/highbeginner.gif
Made on my laptop. Am I high beginner yet? Or are my animations to stiff and uneased?

the hell? is this another joke or something? because I laughed. :D

[sss]

@blaxo, it was too short everyone,make a longer easing thingie...
@Demi Yes,get out of here ;D

[invertin]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x297/Stikanimations/Transformers.gif
Bored.

[animator12345]

http://www.filecram.com/files/highbeginner.gif
Made on my laptop. Am I high beginner yet? Or are my animations to stiff and uneased?
that is really stiff and no easing










lol I am joking

[jammansaiyan]

hey got this a while ago but some of mine arnt the best animations but here you go lol
"http://img91.imageshack.us/my.php?image=multiattack2rd9.gif"
dont put the quotes in "
lol

p.s. its a tree outside

[Blaxo]

it was ok but work on your easing and try to find a better tree

[sss]

work on your movements,easing, look at some tuts.

[Dax]

i was trying to practice smoothness, tell me how this turned out

http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=portalfx8.gif

[sss]

Not Bad .

[mid-pivoteer]

look, i have been to countless forums looking for a mentor:Smile: , so if any of you could help me get better in pivot, please let me know!





Note: i haven't read the other posts, i forgot to! Sorry:Cry:

[Blaxo]

i added on a bit

[psykofr33k]

Yeah, not much to comment on. Just a run. Here is my animation I posted earlier, and, got no comments one. Comment, please?
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/New2.gif

NOW COMMENT!!!!

[Masronoai]

How Do I Post A Pivet Vidio? Someone Pleaseeee Help!

[SoulEater]

Please. Just leave stick page before you get your feelings hurt. If you insist in staying long enough to get flamed, then to leave stickpage, go to filecram.com.
Now fix your spelling and grammar. Use the spell check.

[Blaxo]

i added on a bit
uhhh can someone comment?

[sss]

http://img517.imageshack.us/content.php?page=done&l=img517/5404/killingxl7.gif

Heres my...i dont know maybe killing thing,yah,should i continue? OH BTW I LEARNED HOW TO RUN IT THIS ANIM ;D

[mid-pivoteer]

any one want to be my mentor????:Smile:

[sss]

General Help....

[mid-pivoteer]

hey, will you mentor me?




if you don't want to, i will spend another 3 days looking for a mentor!

[mid-pivoteer]

Ah forget it!1:Cry: :Cry: :Cry:

[skillerstick]

just some pivot in my boring time could you just give them a rank and dat plz.
http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=jjustanthertestsv5.gif It has slowed down so it mit be a bit chopy :(
http://img177.imageshack.us/my.php?image=justatestms3.gif

[invertin]

Transformers one was fun to make, so I made another.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x297/Stikanimations/Transformers2.gif
I made some mistakes here and there, too lazy to fix.

[BASALT]

this is my load of vids
youtube.com/profile_videos?user=BASALTWOLF

[sss]

@skiller Low beginner blood,like crape strange movements and the 2nd was tooooo fast

[skillerstick]

lol im no good with making blood. it looks like little sticks.

[MonsterBreath12]

http://img517.imageshack.us/content.php?page=done&l=img517/5404/killingxl7.gif

Heres my...i dont know maybe killing thing,yah,should i continue? OH BTW I LEARNED HOW TO RUN IT THIS ANIM ;D


links not working.

[CursedWaters]

I tried for easing, and I'm hoping the physics are okay, doubtful about the fall though. I KNOW HE'S STIFF. I don't have a decent stk with vertebrae yet, so for now he's going to have a petrified spine.

If you're wondering why I made someone kick himself in the face, I has no idea.

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/legpullG.gif

[Dark]

Well, I can say you're improving. Big time.

[CursedWaters]

Where exactly do I need to improve, and what is my weakest point? (ASIDE FROM STIFFNESS...)

It's so wonderful to hear that I'm improving... I may cry...:Cry: :Happy:

[skillerstick]

its a little bit stiff but part from that cursedwater its good. keep going

[spaceflip]

These are some of my first animations. PLZ post comments

[Dark]

Where exactly do I need to improve, and what is my weakest point? (ASIDE FROM STIFFNESS...)

It's so wonderful to hear that I'm improving... I may cry...:Cry: :Happy:

Well, you should really make a floor.

[CursedWaters]

Heh, well I know that... I was just making a quickie to test easing and such. I've always had an appreciation for physics, but only a medium-strength focus/grip on it.

You can tell, right? That there is easing in my ani?:Nooooooo:

[Dark]

Yeah, very good physics. Keep improving, you're already better than me. Which isn't that good, but at least you don't suck.

[CursedWaters]

Lol... made myself an avy real quick.

[sss]

ok this should work http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1791/killingxs2.gif


So should i continue? oh Btw tell me whats wrong with running (1st time i used running in a animation i think)

[LN3uq]

Ok, the running acually wasn't half bad, I think the legs could have extended more, but it was pretty good considering.
When the first stick throws the knife up in the air in the beginning, there isn't nearly enough easing at the top of the throw. That knife should hang up there for a while. Now, knifes and things are harder to show than say, a ball, because the spin on them is so noticeable. But, make sure that the center of the knife, or wherever the center of it's weight is, stays on a curving path.
Here's an example I've made with a ball. It's only at 12 fps, you don't need ot have ridiculous frame rates to have a graceful motion, though I do think that your animation could use some more frames in between each motion. They seem a bit choppy. But, that might not be all in the speed, but just that you aren't keeping movements steady.
Anyway, the example.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1114582
Try and make the center of the knife decrease the distance to the top of the throw by around half every time, maybe more. Then on the way down, simply double it.
Here's the same animation at 24 fps. Not much different, but it does admittedly look smoother. I did take out a few frames at the top of the curve, it seemed too slow.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1240302

Keep at it, I like how long your animations are. I can never get past like five seconds.

And yes, the animations are in flash. I don't have pivot, but the concept is the same.

[Blot]

http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii184/edwardo0/midgetfight.gif

just tell me what is good about it and what i need to improve on

[Lemon]

Improve on easing, physics, choppyness,

[sss]

Whow thanks LN3uq Finally a good C&C ;D

[Blot]

lol mines really bad i cant figure out how to do get it hell smooth and get the easing and physics :( i looked at all the tuts but it doesnt help

[Nebakenezzer]

when I left..

there were only 3000 veiws...

[Blot]

http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii184/edwardo0/flyingkick.gif

ok i added easing but not the physics lol just tell me if its smooth enough. its the start of a midget action guy lol

[SoulEater]

You didn't add easing.

[Blot]

yer i did look closely lol

[SoulEater]

You should add much more easing then. It appeared that there was none. Also work on stiffness and choppyness, as well as..physics.

[Blot]

i know thats y i said no physics it was just a test for easing and i didnt have enough room to do all the easing stuff

[Blot]

cmon people comment my stuf sdfdsjfdfshgldf

[Automaton]

there was no easing in there. heres how to do it. on the first frame, move it 1 pixel, 2nd - 2, 3rd - 4, 4th - 8, 5th - 16, 6th - 32, 7th - 32, and then the reverse back down to 1.

[spaceflip]

Plz rate my animations.

[CursedWaters]

I likes the third one...:Happy:

[stickpixman]

I like the third one it's hilarililousis.

[Dax]

I tried to do something like a glide run,but it didn't turn out so well,
I know the start and the arms are messed up, I'll fix those later, plz focus on everything else like the speed and how the legs look.

http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=glideruntestlw5.gif

[spaceflip]

:Happy: I have new animations Plz comment.

[animator12345]

low begginer
easing
stiffness
chopyness
physics

[spaceflip]

That makes sense. I did them in like 20 minutes.

[stickpixman]

lol thats fast very fast -_-

[skeletendude]

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2371/dancetz6.gif

i know the spine is stiff and the arm is jerking at one point but i still think its good

[MadHatter]

Lol looks alright.

Looks like a gay guy at a rave.

[purechaos90]

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2371/dancetz6.gif

i know the spine is stiff and the arm is jerking at one point but i still think its good


Lol. It's better without the credits. (from ur vid on youtube. I saw it).

[stickpixman]

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/th_destroyer-episode1.jpg (http://s214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/?action=view&current=destroyer-episode1.flv)

It is my first pivot movie.

[stickpagefan51]

It is my first pivot movie.

It was so good that I didn't notice.

[/Sarcasm]

It needs work on every thing.

[sss]

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/th_destroyer-episode1.jpg (http://s214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/?action=view&current=destroyer-episode1.flv)

It is my first pivot movie.


Cant see it .

[Rigger939]

Heres a beam test to me it very good but wat your opinion?

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1378/riggersbeamtestxz2.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[KaLLiL]

A little fast but its good I think

I'm a begginer too so look at this

========================
swfme.com/view/1112402



Crit plz

[sss]

Fast!>? maybe slow

[Rigger939]

wow quite nice i like the blood its a bit stiff but i like it

[stickpixman]

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/th_ultimatestick.jpg (http://s214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/?action=view&current=ultimatestick.flv)
It's one of my first animations.

[kreeze]

NIce vidio stickpixman that for destriyer - episode 1 but my movie " Prince of stickmeni on movie maker is gone because i make account and the the administrator account is gone but now i make it but it is 24 frames in 1 sec and the movie is 30 mins but it is very difficult :)

[stickpixman]

Nice do you mind pming me and attaching the video to it?

[night_shadow]

This isn't my first anime but its my first post!

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5214/thevendingmachinesmallpw2.gif

[stickpixman]

pretty good.pretty good

[spaceflip]

These are a few more animations of mine.

[stickpixman]

cool very cool

[animator12345]

this is a test for a spidey pack
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5222/spideyje5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[sss]

Sexy .

[animator12345]

all my animations are sexy
*wink*

[sss]

This one is super sexy ;D

[animator12345]

I know that your next post will be
What ?!
can I have some more c+c please

[sss]

What ?!

[animator12345]

oh! nothing I'm gona change it

[Dax]

i improved my running a little bit but i still think it is choppy towards the end, ill continue to work on it.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8743/glideruntestqj8.gif

[koossie]

sorry coukldnt get it on image shack or putfile :(
so if you want i can email you (dont know how to put files here im new ...)

[sss]

i improved my running a little bit but i still think it is choppy towards the end, ill continue to work on it.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8743/glideruntestqj8.gif

Looks like he is walking in BIG steps...

[Dax]

yea hes suppose to be jumping a little bit and I am still working on it,
I was trying this style of running:

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/44/gliderunningcw3.gif


i found this in a tutorial,don't remember which one but i really liked it

[animator12345]

this is a test for a spidey pack
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5222/spideyje5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
can I have some more C+C please
something new
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7799/tripodow2.gif

[Rigger939]

Cool u guys have got some good idears very cool :>)

[stickpixman]

http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/th_chamber.jpg (http://s214.photobucket.com/albums/cc220/killvader3/?action=view&current=chamber.flv)

My 3rd animation.

[KaLLiL]

how do u guys insert your images on the post???

[stickpixman]

That i cannot say my friend.
Plus you need 20+ posts you only have 5.

[poopymcfloopydoopy]

This is my retarded stick battle. It only like 1 minute long...Don't make fun plz :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wHPZDgF43Qc

Plz give positive feedback.

[KaLLiL]

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4230/jumptestoe4.gifbut here is it my jump test
crit plz

[stickpixman]

poopymcfloopydoopy it was a pretty good stick movie i give you an A.:)

[SoulEater]

Learn to rate.
There was stiffness in the back and the arms, the jump physics were kind of off, you need to add more easing and don't jerk the stick to the back of the screen.
And it's not an A

[poopymcfloopydoopy]

really ty!
0=(====> Sword!

Well, that was only my first video without viewing the tuts here. but ohh well, i can learn

[stickpixman]

Really it was better than i can do and ive had pivot for almost a year!
0=(====> sword!!!

[KaLLiL]

ooook thanks for the help but I dont know what are easing
tell me and I'll do it

[poopymcfloopydoopy]

i couldn't convert to .gif, so i recorded with Hypercam, and added music

I'd say it was pretty good...

[Dax]

I edited it towards the end, but i still think it's a little bit too choppy,and a little bit too slow, but I am still
gonna work on it until i get it down

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2291/glideruntestqt5.gif

[poopymcfloopydoopy]

I say ur run anim is fine... mean, it's not terrible, but it's not perfect, it's fine

[SoulEater]

ooook thanks for the help but I dont know what are easing
tell me and I'll do it Easing is where you move something slowy for one frame, then move it a bit faster the next frame, untill it reaches full speed. Look at your arm when it moves. It will move slowly first instead of going full speed right away.

[KaLLiL]

Easing is where you move something slowy for one frame, then move it a bit faster the next frame, untill it reaches full speed. Look at your arm when it moves. It will move slowly first instead of going full speed right away.

Ok thanks for the explanetion I'll try to do better

[KaLLiL]

sorry for the doble post
here is one more
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7320/flyingidiotbi7.gif
i think its not good but ... forget it

[SoulEater]

It's way too stiff, and it lacks easing and physics.

[KaLLiL]

man you're hard hm?

finnished one morehttp://img407.imageshack.us/img407/7787/jumptest2da9.gif

[Dax]

It was good, needs a bit more smoothness though.
I just made another test, you guys are probably getting annoyed at me so i made this one a little more entertaining, i think it turned out a lot better
but i still need to work on his arms.

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/6531/glideruntest2il2.gif

[CursedWaters]

I'm goin' a eventually have this guy doing a variety of actions. I figure if I submit his activities as I go, you guys will be able to beat me to a bloody pulp with your criticism until I'm perfect. And guess what?:Happy:

HE HAS A SPINE!!:Smile:

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/obstacle_rerun.gif

[Dark]

Make it bigger.

[CursedWaters]

Izzit bigger now?:Sweating:

[Dark]

No .

[CursedWaters]

Okayz... bigger now.

[Androu-]

Ugh, what am I doing here?

Oh well.

http://img244.imageshack.us/my.php?image=appearanddissappearhscg7.gif

Simple appearing and disappearing effect.

[Lone Wolf]

Ugh, what am I doing here?

Oh well.

http://img244.imageshack.us/my.php?image=appearanddissappearhscg7.gif

Simple appearing and disappearing effect.

That wasn't even worth posting.

[Androu-]

Sorry. Won't happen again.

[Lone Wolf]

Sorry. Won't happen again.

Yeah, add on or something. The effect itself wasn't badly done or anything, it's just too simple to actually post.

[Androu-]

Yeah, I'm going to use it in the one I'm working on right now.

[sAcReD]

ya like lone wolf said, add on, i like the kinda video game type of teleporting though, very nice...

[CursedWaters]

Someone plz criticize me!:Cry:

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff234/CursedWaters/obstacle_rerun.gif

[sss]

A bad run and a jump not really much to crit...

[CursedWaters]

Thanks for letting me know what is wrong with it. I'll get to work adding on so people don't get ticked off at me for tossing in my two cents every 20 frames...

What's wrong with his run? Does he need to lean more into it, or are his arms too unresponsive? Is it both? Just tell me that and I'll finish this animation.

[sss]

Arms,and it looks like he has 1 leg broken,you should look at some tuts and try doing the exact thing

[Dax]

I'M BACK AND WITH A VENGEANCE! ;-;
lol, jk
Anyway is this any smoother?

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5892/glideruntest3qc6.gif

[Anarchey]

not really smooth just like not as choppy as id expect from joo....

[Dark]

@ CursedWaters: I don't really see a point in jumping, he can reach it easily. =/

[ßub]

Punch Test:

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5820/punchtest2bu7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtest2bu7.gif

[RazrBlade]

Punch Test:

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5820/punchtest2bu7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtest2bu7.gif

I didn't like how his arm jerked after the punch, but anyway, it's good.

[sss]

@ CursedWaters: I don't really see a point in jumping, he can reach it easily. =/

Good point .

[sAcReD]

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x168/sAcReD_09/ImpactTest.gif

my impact test, plz C&C the impact and NOT HOW HE FALLS, i was only aiming for the impact...

[sss]

My uppercut http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=upcea5.gif
@sacred it was good...But the fall...

[Rigger939]

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5347/cbapn8.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Can any 1 give me some pointers on my animation i dont realy like the beam and any idears on wat to do next with it ?????

oh and i know the bench look bad when it falls ill fix dat later!

[Stormwalker]

good that you posted it here but why did you also make a thread about it?
anyway well you shouldnt yet make such long anis you need to improove you skill cuz that was realy , choppy stiff , the text needs to stay for a longer while cuz its hard to read it. mostly on work on everything check tutorials too and good luck

[bloodymary]

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1026/awesomespritemovieyp9.gif my first sprite movie short bu i think good

[stickpixman]

Here is a gun test that I made.


http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2034/gunntestfd2.gif


EDIT:http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunntestfd2.gif

[bloodymary]

ok no offense but that TOTALLY sucked see when you use a gun you make a flash of light and no bullet or make a bullet and add smoke a trail and a blast and make sure when you shoot you make the arm go back and you stickman bend back a little and also to get a good gun, go to Droidz.org

[stickpixman]

I always go to droidz.org

[bloodymary]

well doesn't seem like it when you don't have a good gun but the body doesn't move bullet is to slow and nothing that is even good with a gun

[bloodymary]

here is an example of what a sucky animation would be...

[SoulEater]

That isn't even using anything with pivot. Bad example.

[bloodymary]

LOL i did use pivot it was just sprites xD

[SoulEater]

Bad animations range for a farther range then what you think. Your animation with the gun did suck.

[Digorrybio]

must test new avatar lol

[sss]

My uppercut http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=upcea5.gif

[Digorrybio]

My uppercut http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=upcea5.gif
looks fairly slow, and is pretty choppy, also, baha tut clone much?

[sss]

yep .

[ßub]

I didn't like how his arm jerked after the punch, but anyway, it's good.
thanks. Yeah, I tried to make it look like he was kinda shaking afterwards because it was a powerful punch. It didn't turn out to good though :P

[invertin]

ok no offense but that TOTALLY sucked
Don't say no offense and then insult someone.

No offense means that you mean no offense in saying it, adding in an insult is just contradictory.

..

No animation yet, just wanted to say that.

[Flashorama]

Ok well here is one of my few piv anims which i actually worked on and in case any of you people remember my super saiyan throwdown anim i think i made this smoother than that. I posted this in the right place this time too. Tell me what you think.

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9764/rasenganblastag8.gif

[Flashorama]

yes i know the run up to him is bad but beside that its good. Still waitin for comments.

[SoulEater]

Sorry, but it is not good whatsoever. Work on posing, easing, stiffness, physics, choppyness, anticipation, and everything else basic. Then it will start to not suck. With more practice, you can get better then this.