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Dark
11-22-2007, 10:10 AM
That's a mother****ing fast punch.

NeonFlame
11-22-2007, 10:11 AM
lol
you funny dark

sss
11-22-2007, 10:12 AM
man if i could move fast like that i would be a king of the world...in other words... to fast

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 10:15 AM
what the hell is wrong with my comp???!!!!

in mine it shows slow-mo God dammit!

imma just gonna give you guys the piv.

here:http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Zortin/punchhmf2.piv

(feel free to take my stks)

oh damn still is fast and,lower the frame rate see how it looks.

sss
11-22-2007, 10:17 AM
what the hell is wrong with my comp???!!!!

in mine it shows slow-mo God dammit!

yah it happens to me too on piv or on gif file its slow bet when i upload it to imageshack its slower or faster...that sucks

skeletendude
11-22-2007, 10:19 AM
since no one C&C on it im postin it again:


http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1116/owndtr9.gif

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 10:22 AM
you already posted that.

still, looks cool

high beg.

sss
11-22-2007, 10:24 AM
ill say med beg...the jump was strange...

skeletendude
11-22-2007, 10:32 AM
@monsterbreath12: i said no one C&C on it so i posted it again

@sss: he was in the matrix

sss
11-22-2007, 10:35 AM
ok then...matrix rulz xD

Darc
11-22-2007, 10:36 AM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7484/whoawr2.gif

can some people plz comment on this?
this is my third time posting this animation... can some CC and rate on this???

and skeletendude, nice ani, but work on the second jump, if it was slo-mo, make it slower.

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 10:37 AM
@monsterbreath12: i said no one C&C on it so i posted it again

@sss: he was in the matrix

ohh lol.

Sorry, I was concentrating at the link to see what ya did.

Still high beg, sss.

@Pivotmster: Awsome, easyed but un-smooth a little...

Med/High beg.

those shuriken looking thingys werent turned so good..

Darc
11-22-2007, 10:39 AM
okay, I know I was gone for a week or two, but come on...

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 10:41 AM
im sure you could do better

But first you need to get un-Rusty.

Darc
11-22-2007, 10:45 AM
okay, how about this one. (obviously inspired by centered origin)

http://www.filecram.com/files/acro-centered(short%20v.).gif

skeletendude
11-22-2007, 10:53 AM
this is my third time posting this animation... can some CC and rate on this???

and skeletendude, nice ani, but work on the second jump, if it was slo-mo, make it slower.

i was talkin about the first jump

Darc
11-22-2007, 10:55 AM
hmm... the first jump was okay, it couldve been better, but, I think you should be concerned about the second jump, it was too slow, and too fast to be a slo-mo jump. CC and Rank on mine? (no need to do both)

Dark
11-22-2007, 10:57 AM
Your running was totally messed up in the centered origin one. He was about to cross his arms until the jerked back to the original position. You might want to fix that.

Darc
11-22-2007, 10:59 AM
I liked the running in that one, but your right about the arms, but id doesnt mess it up, itll just look better when I fix it... if i do.

cloud wolf
11-22-2007, 11:06 AM
I saw NeonFlames fullbody anim so i thought i'd try 1,
its not my best but its my first fullbody
C&C
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8283/1stfullbodyow1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img138.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1stfullbodyow1.gif

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 11:07 AM
fulbodys cool runnings bad.

keep on going, you'll improve.

sss
11-22-2007, 11:14 AM
okay, how about this one. (obviously inspired by centered origin)

http://www.filecram.com/files/acro-centered(short%20v.).gif

i loved that one with spining thingy...but i hate this one

FantaSTICK
11-22-2007, 11:51 AM
It looked pretty good SSS, except I didn't like when he was sliding down the wall.

sss
11-22-2007, 11:54 AM
It looked pretty good SSS, except I didn't like when he was sliding down the wall.

...this animation issint mine... its PivotMasterXDfan

liamzo stickman
11-22-2007, 12:16 PM
here is my gun test
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6189/guntest2uf4.gif

sss
11-22-2007, 12:20 PM
http://img159.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rollkickta2.gif
here is something...and again in net it is tooooooo slow

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 12:26 PM
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/effort

sss
11-22-2007, 12:29 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkoh9.gif

my walk test...again too slow

FantaSTICK
11-22-2007, 12:36 PM
I just made this, its going to be my avatar-

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1030/hiza5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Edit: Can't figure out how to make it my avatar.. hmm

Dark
11-22-2007, 12:57 PM
Don't bother with it. Just get a cool picture.

MonsterBreath12
11-22-2007, 01:06 PM
yeah i agree with dark..

cuz its low/med beginner :/

liamzo stickman
11-22-2007, 02:02 PM
heres my gun test
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6189/guntest2uf4.gif

thejackler
11-22-2007, 02:14 PM
Please comment

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3133/helidroppn9.gif

NeonFlame
11-22-2007, 02:14 PM
everything on this page is lowish medish begginer.
Work on Easing, Physics, and stiffness
and SSS when you save as gif save frame rate as 6
jackler yours is very stiff but med begginer

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 02:36 PM
mutant default womg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111oneelevenonehundredandeleve noneelevenone11111!!!!!!



http://ihostupost.com/files/494/mutant%20technique%3Bcrouching%20spring%2C%20flyin g%20claw.gif
It's mutated to the point where it's almost not a default, exept for the proportions of length
head:36
arms:40
torso:60
legs:50
for future default edit creation

liamzo stickman
11-22-2007, 02:46 PM
give me advice on this
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6189/guntest2uf4.gif

Darc
11-22-2007, 03:11 PM
move the legs a little and smoothen it up, idk, theres not much you can do with that animation.

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 04:00 PM
mutant default womg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111oneelevenonehundredandeleve noneelevenone11111!!!!!!



http://ihostupost.com/files/494/mutant%20technique%3Bcrouching%20spring%2C%20flyin g%20claw.gif
It's mutated to the point where it's almost not a default, exept for the proportions of length
head:36
arms:40 a segment
torso:60
legs:50 a segment
for future default edit creation
please rate .

also, i donated this to droidz, with hope it may get there, wish my little edit luck!

superbenjis
11-22-2007, 05:36 PM
A funny anim when I had nothing to do :D

[img=http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8040/fracturemasterbv1.th.gif] (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fracturemasterbv1.gif)

superbenjis
11-22-2007, 05:37 PM
A funny anim I did when I had nothing to do :D

[img=http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8040/fracturemasterbv1.th.gif] (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fracturemasterbv1.gif)

ilovestickanimations
11-22-2007, 06:14 PM
this is my fifth pivot. i no it is stiff and i need to work on easing but hey, im a beginner at animating. lol please PM me and tell me how to improve and wut do u rate it??

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4774/armypivothf4.gif (http://imageshack.us)


thnx for everything. :Happy: oh and rate my others too!

SoulEater
11-22-2007, 06:17 PM
I rate it low beginner. And don't call yourself a noob.

ilovestickanimations
11-22-2007, 06:27 PM
ok lol i wont it just means im a beginner tho. am i getting better??

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 07:00 PM
please rate !

also, i donated this to droidz, with hope it may get there, wish my little edit luck!

mutant default womg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111oneelevenonehundredandeleve noneelevenone11111!!!!!!



http://ihostupost.com/files/494/mutant%20technique%3Bcrouching%20spring%2C%20flyin g%20claw.gif
It's mutated to the point where it's almost not a default, exept for the proportions of length
head:36
arms:40
torso:60
legs:50
for future default edit creation
afgrgargfasdgasgasdgasdfas

yoshi12261
11-22-2007, 07:46 PM
how do i post a pivot video i just made my first one

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 09:00 PM
i will answer your question when you rate my animation!!!

yoshi12261
11-22-2007, 09:13 PM
o dang i still need 18 more posts

yoshi12261
11-22-2007, 09:29 PM
how u post them on this site?

you mean pivot movies?

Digorrybio
11-22-2007, 10:24 PM
RATE MY FREAKING ANIMATION DAMMIT!!!! (http://ihostupost.com/files/494/mutant%20technique%3Bcrouching%20spring%2C%20flyin g%20claw.gif)

Terix
11-22-2007, 11:36 PM
dude,stop your freakin spamming.its not funny,its just annoying.just wait for some one to rate.and I'd say about low-med begginer.your anims are just too jerky.

skeletendude
11-23-2007, 02:28 AM
your animation is shit to me, now stop spammin about it!!!

2-D
11-23-2007, 02:31 AM
RATE MY FREAKING ANIMATION DAMMIT!!!! (http://ihostupost.com/files/494/mutant%20technique%3Bcrouching%20spring%2C%20flyin g%20claw.gif)

I'll give that animation a 0..

out of five.

sss
11-23-2007, 05:04 AM
http://img251.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wallkpt3.gif

ok heres my new non slow walk test

Digorrybio
11-23-2007, 07:56 AM
ok, frist of all, sorry for the spam, it was late at night and my attention span=atoscopic, i will try to refrain from doing that anymore.

second, SSS, that wasn't very good, he didn;'t really take a step his feet just slid backwards then reset and he looked like his arms were flapping.
Overall low beginner, but apparently i am too...

sss
11-23-2007, 07:58 AM
i suck =) .

MasterStickGuitarist
11-23-2007, 08:09 AM
afgrgargfasdgasgasdgasdfas

the movements are good i just dont lik the stick

Digorrybio
11-23-2007, 08:19 AM
hey we're both bored! there can only be one of us in this here place... naw jk but whatever. why don't you like the stick?

amo1000
11-23-2007, 10:40 AM
SSS is wasnt too bad, just abit stiff, body and head shud atlesat move a tiny bit, the loop wasnt so gd aswell, he kept 'bopping' up and down

sss
11-23-2007, 10:45 AM
yah thats the point i tried to move the head...but i didint knew hot to do it natural... so i chosed the easy way bopping xD

liamzo stickman
11-23-2007, 11:47 AM
heres my new animation
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/653/gifwalkthrowtesthy9.gif

thejackler
11-23-2007, 12:55 PM
Please comment

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8687/lasercx0.gif

sss
11-23-2007, 01:56 PM
i really didint like that duck when he was preparing for shoot

liamzo stickman
11-23-2007, 02:22 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/653/gifwalkthrowtesthy9.gif
rate it

thejackler
11-23-2007, 02:23 PM
It looks choppy there because of the loop

superbenjis
11-23-2007, 03:12 PM
The movement of the scale ( is that "scale ?" ) is not very good, its shacking..

MonsterBreath12
11-23-2007, 05:47 PM
definaly low beginner. Like jackler said, the loop made it look worse well hes right .

magmawolf117
11-23-2007, 06:55 PM
this is cool i hope my pivits will be good for the web

skysniper
11-23-2007, 09:46 PM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6571/skyvw0.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>



Hope you like it tell me if its to fast or choppy:Smile:

sss
11-23-2007, 11:31 PM
it was to fast,movements were strange

R_S
11-24-2007, 02:35 AM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6571/skyvw0.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>



Hope you like it tell me if its to fast or choppy:Smile:

Um can't see it?
anyway
Heres my first >_>
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa167/thekid123456789/obstaclecourse.gif

Gyohdon
11-24-2007, 02:54 AM
dude, thats never your first. i guess you didnt count any tests or sumthing, rite?
it looks good though, med beginner i say

liamzo stickman
11-24-2007, 02:56 AM
ok here is my guy jumping of something
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5276/gifdivingtestfv6.gif

sss
11-24-2007, 03:53 AM
mabe that was hes first good anim? xD

liamzo stickman the jump was really bad,that blow of droidz is really getting old

porterboy85
11-24-2007, 08:21 AM
It may be worse but w/e....PLEAZ give me some pivot tips!!!!!
http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=heliattackle6.gif

superbenjis
11-24-2007, 08:42 AM
Is it in slow-motion ? Its very slow, and when the guy jump, the helicopter stop to move, but I really like your idea, so I did my own version :)
__________

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5966/airplanefuryva3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

SRC
11-24-2007, 09:15 AM
superbenjis u made his animation ur bitch lol

superbenjis
11-24-2007, 09:24 AM
I reeeallly like his idea, poterboy do u taked ur helicopter on droidz ?( theres a lot of tuto on stickpage, look at them ( at poterboy ) )

Other anim :D robot dance :

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3214/robotdancingyd1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

liamzo stickman
11-24-2007, 11:55 AM
i cant think of anything to animate, anyone got any ideas?

SoulEater
11-24-2007, 02:01 PM
Animate a stickfigure doing a backflip.

[Making up for spam] I have a good idea for my animation. I'll be posting one [/ making up for spam]

skysniper
11-24-2007, 02:28 PM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6489/deathkb6.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>


Ok Dont be jerks on this one i was bored and i was just makeing stuff as i go Yes i know i need to be more better when hes hitting the key board..........

skysniper
11-24-2007, 02:29 PM
Also Can you see my profile pict?

liamzo stickman
11-24-2007, 02:56 PM
skysniper's animation-http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6489/deathkb6.gif
very random

SoulEater
11-24-2007, 02:56 PM
The main thing you need to work on is easing. It looked horribly rushed.

liamzo stickman
11-24-2007, 03:23 PM
ok, here is a guy doing a back flip
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1933/gifbackfliprh5.gif

SoulEater
11-24-2007, 03:25 PM
It's better, but the reactions and physics, and still, easing, need work.

Rayzor
11-24-2007, 03:50 PM
Long time no post :)
Well here's mine, I made it in a rush for school, but i tried to
make the kick look realistic. Rate it please :)
http://i7.tinypic.com/7wkapo0.gif

superbenjis
11-24-2007, 03:53 PM
The walk is good, but the kick is wrong :/
An other anim from me :D, last for today, I promise x)

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6467/ownedddjk2.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Rayzor
11-24-2007, 04:02 PM
The walk is good, but the kick is wrong :/
I'll work on it later, its too late now, and i have till monday. So yeah. But the teacher is a noob anyway so he won't notice :heh:

skysniper
11-24-2007, 04:09 PM
sry for it being choppy ill try to fix p.s can you see my profile pictuer?

skysniper
11-24-2007, 04:34 PM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9085/preefallyc3.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>


i call it Total Random ^-^ hope you like:Smile: it if its choppy let me know....P.S Can You See My Pictuer?

superbenjis
11-24-2007, 05:42 PM
How do u do to use that kind of link ?

skeletendude
11-24-2007, 06:18 PM
The walk is good, but the kick is wrong :/
An other anim from me :D, last for today, I promise x)

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6467/ownedddjk2.gif (http://imageshack.us)


id say it that was med-high beg if it was faster

superbenjis
11-24-2007, 06:38 PM
It is lower when I upload it, when the guy dissapear, its supposed to be better :/

Lone Wolf
11-24-2007, 06:55 PM
how do u post them on this site

Why don't you use your Common Sense that human beings have when born? Don't you think that out of ALL the members that have joined this dying forum, that at least one of them have asked this idiotic question sometime?

Here, I'll give you a tip to help you. There's a forum called General Help near the top on the Home page. Don't you think that that is the perfect place to ask questions? But don't ask yor questioin there, because you're just going to get flamed and called a pivfag.

So here's the final instruction. Look in the Pivot Tutorials section near the bottom of the home page. From there you should be able to find it.

MrCheesy
11-24-2007, 08:37 PM
Dude, you don't need to be so rude to him. Jeez.

SoulEater
11-24-2007, 08:38 PM
He's just ticked off that nobody can ****ing find the answers for themselves.

MrCheesy
11-24-2007, 08:44 PM
I know that. Still he could of explained it in a nicer way.

SoulEater
11-24-2007, 08:46 PM
If you were here longer, you'd see how many people ask questions without looking them up. Wolf's said the answers politely enough times.

MrCheesy
11-24-2007, 08:46 PM
ok
.

Androu-
11-25-2007, 12:42 AM
Haven't visited this place in a while.
Anywho, my latest and unfinished can be found here (http://www.freewebs.com/androu-/lolrandomness.htm), Rank & CC would be appreciated.
Yeah, that pretty much sums it up. G'day.

skysniper
11-25-2007, 01:42 AM
i just go to imigeshack:heh:

skysniper
11-25-2007, 02:38 AM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6893/halo3tj3.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>


I know..I Know this isent going to be a great one...i just got bored so i amde a piv of Halo 3.......P.S if you whunt to know where i got the halo stks go to Droidz.org:heh:

thejackler
11-25-2007, 03:31 AM
This is just a punching test i did when i wa bored

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/5967/punchtestbk9.gif

sss
11-25-2007, 03:55 AM
the 2nd punch looked soooo lame

13375p34k0r
11-25-2007, 03:59 AM
My first Pivot animation since a long time...End is quite choppy...Med Beginner? :/
Dunno who made the rapier.
http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ownedty5.gif

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 04:02 AM
Sorry, it's low beginner. Work on easing, stiffness and reactions.

13375p34k0r
11-25-2007, 04:06 AM
Ok.Ty for a fast answer^^

sss
11-25-2007, 04:31 AM
yes low beg .

raidforce
11-25-2007, 04:34 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4535/coolmi6.gif (http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4535/coolmi6.gif)

my first pivot.

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 04:37 AM
Lol, raidforce used pivot. Its your first and it's already almost med beginner.

raidforce
11-25-2007, 04:41 AM
eh, **** ranks, I just want some criticism and comments. Thank you anyways, though.


edit: I have officially made something decent in every program now. :D Expect some more pivots from me tomorrow. (that or another flash animation, but whatever, both are good)

skysniper
11-25-2007, 05:21 AM
<a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/994/dangfp4.gif" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us"/></a><br/>

Hope you Like it :) its random P.S tell me if its Choppy or Not:heh:

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 05:25 AM
Dont use image tags, we cant read them.

superbenjis
11-25-2007, 06:30 AM
An other anim from me :D, last for today, I promise x)

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6467/ownedddjk2.gif (http://imageshack.us/)

Can someone comment my anim ?

Naglfar
11-25-2007, 07:20 AM
Can someone comment my anim ?

Make it a bit faster and put in more fluidity then it deserves its own thread.

Superbe? =P

angelstickman
11-25-2007, 07:53 AM
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/4521/boom1si7.gif (http://imageshack.us) RATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

liamzo stickman
11-25-2007, 08:02 AM
here is my new animation rate + c&c
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/4131/gifmovmenttestgz4.gif

superbenjis
11-25-2007, 08:07 AM
It is in slowmo ? Very to slow..

An other anim from me ( I am in fire ! xD )
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/7756/idiotor0.gif (http://imageshack.us)

liamzo stickman
11-25-2007, 08:09 AM
i was faster when it was on pivot

ok i made it faster, rate + c&c
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7849/gifmovmenttestnn5.gif

superbenjis
11-25-2007, 09:17 AM
very nice, go on pivot, make the frames speed at something like 20-23 ( default : 12 ) and post it again, I think it should be better

liamzo stickman
11-25-2007, 09:26 AM
ok rate and c&c
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6966/gifmovmenttestyp8.gif

superbenjis
11-25-2007, 09:43 AM
Do you did what I said ? If u do, I dont see defference :/

liamzo stickman
11-25-2007, 09:47 AM
i did but it didn't work so when i saved it as a gif i changer the frame delay from 6 to 4

ok now this might be really fast but rate it please
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1699/gifmovmenttestds5.gif

animator12345
11-25-2007, 09:57 AM
it's choppy and the jump was to slow.
when he lets go he just flys off

Dark
11-25-2007, 10:39 AM
Stop asking for a ****ing rank, because ranks are gay. Just focus on making the animation good.

I say it's to choppy on he swing, the launch, and the jump. Does your stick have at least 2 backbones?

liamzo stickman
11-25-2007, 10:57 AM
yes it does.
was the back flip any good

MonsterBreath12
11-25-2007, 11:05 AM
yes it does.
was the back flip any good

it was slow, un-eased, and choppy and it look more like he was floating so, It did not look like a flip.

Androu-
11-25-2007, 11:41 AM
Haven't visited this place in a while.
Anywho, my latest and unfinished can be found here (http://www.freewebs.com/androu-/lolrandomness.htm), Rank & CC would be appreciated.
Yeah, that pretty much sums it up. G'day.

Still need rank & cc for this one.
i just go to imigeshack:heh:

Okay, let me explain. I post my pivots on my freewebs for a couple of my friends to see. Since for every pivot I make I'm just going to do this anyway, I figure: if I want to get my pivot on stickpage, darkdemon, etc. why post in another place then post a link, when I can just post a link and be done with it.

So there you go.

raidforce
11-25-2007, 12:49 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4535/coolmi6.gif (http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4535/coolmi6.gif)

my first pivot.

sorry to bump it, but any comments and criticism?

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 01:21 PM
K, I'll give C&C now.
Like I said last time, it was very good for your first. I saw that the physics were off on that last flip, and the animation got choppy while the first punch was thrown. I barely noticed any stiffness at all.

Rayzor
11-25-2007, 02:06 PM
http://i14.tinypic.com/81oukp3.gif
New one from me :) Is this one better ? I know the last part when he falls doesn't look good, but its about the walk & the kick.

thejackler
11-25-2007, 02:15 PM
It's very stiff, and you should work on your easing
look at some tuts

acerocks
11-25-2007, 02:16 PM
wtf happend to my pivot

acerocks
11-25-2007, 02:20 PM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. i had 22 post now i only have 2 great now i have to start all over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now i cant post mmy pivot. :(

Rayzor
11-25-2007, 02:21 PM
It's very stiff, and you should work on your easing
look at some tuts
Sorry but what's Easing ? :Embarrassed:

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 02:23 PM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. i had 22 post now i only have 2 great now i have to start all over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now i cant post mmy pivot. :(
Your posts were probrobly deleted because they were spam.

acerocks
11-25-2007, 02:26 PM
how do u bump other post?some1 did it to me

SoulEater
11-25-2007, 02:27 PM
It was a moderator that did it. Just get your post count up without spamming.

thejackler
11-25-2007, 02:32 PM
Sorry but what's Easing ? :Embarrassed:

Here's a basic tut with easing and other suff

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=47182

Rayzor
11-25-2007, 02:34 PM
Here's a basic tut with easing and other suff

Thanks. I hope it helps :)

Omega
11-25-2007, 02:51 PM
sorry to bump it, but any comments and criticism?

The flip was horrible. Very stiff and choppy, but there is evident easing.

Chaos669
11-25-2007, 02:57 PM
Pivots are looking good considering your beginners guys, you'll get better!

raidforce
11-25-2007, 04:37 PM
another pivot:
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/228/buildingflipki3.gif

superbenjis
11-25-2007, 04:39 PM
from rayzor:http://i14.tinypic.com/81oukp3.gif

The kick need improvement
This is my version ( of the kick, your walk is 5/5 )
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/7527/kicktheballonmp5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Omega
11-25-2007, 04:48 PM
The kick need improvement
This is my version ( of the kick, your walk is 5/5 )
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/7527/kicktheballonmp5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

How is the walk perfect? The arms are terrible.

shadow136
11-25-2007, 05:48 PM
How is the walk perfect? The arms are terrible.


Arms are fine he just didnt move them alot, just cuz he kept arms near the waist of his stick doesnt mean the arms are terrible, your just being a tough critic.

Heres some staff movements that I did a while back, it's a bit stiff on some parts but pretty good none the less.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6185/staffmovementssk0.gif

This is just a quick fight I put together, like before it's a bit stiff but it turned out pretty well.

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6815/crappyfightuq8.gif

IMA CHARGIN MAH FIREBALL

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/7140/imacharginmafireballnf6.gif

Some cool ability ideas that I had for a possible project later on down the line.

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6011/awesomeabilitiesfd3.gif

Some more cool abilites I made up. I dont liek this one as much though.

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1151/awesomeabilitiespart2pz1.gif

This is just me messin around on Pivot while I was bored.

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/8685/myfirstanimationei6.gif

Please leave Constructive Criticism and Comments!

Chaos669
11-25-2007, 05:53 PM
Good job shadow, looks ok so far, might wanna work on choppiness and easing a little though.

shadow136
11-25-2007, 05:54 PM
Yeah Im working on walk cycles for now to practice that.

EnterTheDragon
11-25-2007, 05:57 PM
Here are my first two pivots:

First:

http:// img164.imageshack.us/my.php? image=walkcyclecw4.gif

Second:

http:// img134.imageshack.us/my.php? image=backflipuk6.gif

criticism and comments, please.

(also, sorry for not being able to post links, I forgot you have to have 20 posts)

Androu-
11-25-2007, 06:09 PM
Haven't visited this place in a while.
Anywho, my latest and unfinished can be found here (http://www.freewebs.com/androu-/lolrandomness.htm), Rank & CC would be appreciated.
Yeah, that pretty much sums it up. G'day.
I would like rank, cc, and to stop being ignored. I now fully realize why I don't post here anymore.

shadow136
11-25-2007, 06:10 PM
I jsut made this Pivot a few mins ago while I wa suploading my other old ones, this just a walk cycle for a robot I decided to make. Pretty smooth, much better than all my originals if I do say so myself. But I felt I coudl have done mroe with this one.

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1231/robotmovementsku7.gif

Chaos669
11-25-2007, 08:16 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/57/ballbouncesppcq1.th.gif (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ballbouncesppcq1.gif)
Just trying out easing =/


http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/781/horsepunchsppfd6.th.gif (http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=horsepunchsppfd6.gif)
Note: The horse isn't supposed to move, it's supposed to be like that.
Trying out punching, walking, blood.


http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9291/blobblastsppql2.th.gif (http://img211.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blobblastsppql2.gif)
Playing with explosions :P


CC VERY much appreciated.



Androu - I don't know if you want an opinion from a newb or not but here it goes.
It looks smooth, and I like the use of easing, your fighting moves flow well, and IMO it's pretty good. I hope to see it finished soon :P.

I'd say high beginner.

Terix
11-25-2007, 09:01 PM
@ chaos: well,you should ease ALOT more than you do.its just too choppy,and stiff.

also,I made a run cycle.changed my style while I was at it.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/run_cycle3j5u.gif

EDIT: yes,its stiff,and the arms are too choppy.I'll fix it right now.

Chaos669
11-25-2007, 09:08 PM
Thanks for the CC Terix :P.

Yeah, might wanna fix up that cycle.

Terix
11-25-2007, 09:11 PM
here,fixed it....should look a bit better.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/run_cycle46ts.gif

JVizzle
11-25-2007, 09:14 PM
1st pivot animation

Chaos669
11-25-2007, 09:16 PM
Looking better xD

JV that's not bad for a first animation, but please try to refrain from using the default stick...

raidforce
11-25-2007, 09:42 PM
another pivot:
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/228/buildingflipki3.gif

C & C? While filling in the minimum post size limit, I will add that......post limit fulfilled. :D

JVizzle
11-25-2007, 10:19 PM
why do my pivots become jpg's?

Androu-
11-25-2007, 10:41 PM
Because it can save as either a .jpg. or .gif. You must have selected .jpg on accident instead of .gif when you saved it.

sss
11-26-2007, 06:17 AM
dunno mabe you save jpg?

Rayzor
11-26-2007, 12:11 PM
At school people ask me for help, cause im the best in my class, but to be honest i think im not good at all :s
I dont even know how to fix the easing in my animation's.
Anybody has suggestions ?
I wonder if this is any good ?
I got it from the tut so i tried to make something like it.
http://i7.tinypic.com/72gcy9h.gif

Dark
11-26-2007, 01:49 PM
Everyone at your school uses pivot?

Rayzor
11-26-2007, 02:06 PM
Everyone at your school uses pivot?
My whole class does, I had a project about animation, And I used pivot for it. Then some idiot told the whole class about it and now the teacher is even giving lessons about it >.> ( I kinda know how everything works so I'm not putting effort into that lessons anyway :P )

MonsterBreath12
11-26-2007, 02:23 PM
Still need rank & cc for this one.


Okay, let me explain. I post my pivots on my freewebs for a couple of my friends to see. Since for every pivot I make I'm just going to do this anyway, I figure: if I want to get my pivot on stickpage, darkdemon, etc. why post in another place then post a link, when I can just post a link and be done with it.

So there you go.

oh i like that one pretty cool the punch was abit weird but the fall was good as were the running partz

@Razor: poor you. Im hoping that a friend of mine tells nobody about pivot, cause he already told one of my friends whos in SPP. his name is Marco951.....

Rayzor
11-26-2007, 02:55 PM
@Razor: poor you. Im hoping that a friend of mine tells nobody about pivot, cause he already told one of my friends whos in SPP. his name is Marco951.....[/quote]

Their not better then me anyway, everybody is like "You didnt make that yourself" So im like, Whatever. but uhm.. Yeah I'm not telling them anything anymore >.>
Anyway, its time to go to bed for me :P

skysniper
11-26-2007, 03:40 PM
Nice Bouncing Ball :D P.S Every one at my school Uses Pivot:heh:

Chaos669
11-26-2007, 08:35 PM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/7880/punch2sppvy8.th.gif (http://img523.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punch2sppvy8.gif)

It's supposed to look weak...I know it's a little stiff, I'm trying at least, hope I'll get better at this soon :P. Hope the easing wasn't total shit.

It's a freaking punch btw. =D

leo4life
11-26-2007, 08:57 PM
here is something that i rushed on, but i think its kinda good, tooke me 10 minutes to make, lol http://www.fileupyours.com/files/144265/graaa.gif i no i no, the ending was pretty bad

Chaos669
11-26-2007, 08:59 PM
Leo the flips look okay, except the one off the tree, IMO it looks like he's going way too fast. and At the end it looks as if he's floating in air, work on smoothness a little more.

All around it looks pretty decent.

Rayzor
11-27-2007, 12:06 PM
Nice Bouncing Ball :D P.S Every one at my school Uses Pivot:heh:

thanks :)

Im about to make a new one but I'm out if inspiration >.>

dutchboy12
11-27-2007, 12:21 PM
http://i3.tinypic.com/8f10ne1.gif http://i18.tinypic.com/6p4edde.gif http://i11.tinypic.com/8f44sco.gif i never used any animation program i made this with pivot im 12 year im bad with animations :Sweating:

Rayzor
11-27-2007, 12:24 PM
Thats okay for your first tries.
Just keep practising and read tutorial's.
Btw, Im dutch too :)

dutchboy12
11-27-2007, 12:30 PM
thanks u got msn ? then add me pm me with your email

SoulEater
11-27-2007, 12:40 PM
Dont double post. use the edit button at the bottom of your post.

liamzo stickman
11-27-2007, 01:49 PM
ok, my backflip rate it
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20backflip%202.gif

Dark
11-27-2007, 01:57 PM
No one stops for a second then flips and floats at the same time. You should work on the physics on the flip.

leo4life
11-27-2007, 06:45 PM
http://www.fileupyours.com/files/144265/the%20brawl.gif

i wanted to practice making my pivot smooth, what yall think?!? does anyone think i should finish it?

superbenjis
11-27-2007, 06:51 PM
Yes you should finish, its nice, I think the best thing in your anim are the flips...
3.5/5

And me, I need help on beam, so here's a beam I did, I didn't find a tuto for this..
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1530/beamty5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
And I ask the same question as loe4life, should I finish the animation ?

Chaos669
11-27-2007, 07:55 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=O5EFh3THp34

A little funny animation xD

I know the crying sucks ass...don't need to repeat it.

Other CC is appreciated :).

liamzo stickman
11-28-2007, 11:13 AM
ok, a front flip
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20front%20flip.gif

Chaos669
11-28-2007, 02:31 PM
Liamzo, it looks like he paused slightly in mid-air again..the take off is good, but personally I don't like the flip and landing.

liamzo stickman
11-28-2007, 02:39 PM
i can't think of anything to animate can someone suggest something?

leo4life
11-28-2007, 02:40 PM
umm, a stick fight? lol.

Chaos669
11-28-2007, 02:40 PM
Make something funny xD

Less Than Three Chibi
11-28-2007, 04:20 PM
Liamzo Stickman,
On both of you're pivots (the backflip and the front flip) there was no easing on in the arms when jumping before the flip.

angelstickman
11-28-2007, 06:35 PM
[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6825/theownagethatneverwaseu0.gif[/


I SAY THIS IS MY BEST YET

superbenjis
11-28-2007, 06:36 PM
A gunshot test, rate and comment please :)

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3584/gunshotkk7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
[img=http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3584/gunshotkk7.th.gif] (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gunshotkk7.gif)

Chaos669
11-28-2007, 07:08 PM
Angel, please, get over to the tutorials section, and read ALL of them.

Benjis, the gunshot was pretty good...but....

The shot looked kinda stiff, the blood was good but it looked like the bullet skinned his head. Easing looks okay to me.

Med/high beginner.

SoulEater
11-28-2007, 07:10 PM
Sorry, it's not med/high beginner. It's low beginner. Work on stiffness, mostly.

superbenjis
11-28-2007, 07:21 PM
but it looked like the bullet skinned his head.

It was a bit my intention :Spiderman:

Digorrybio
11-28-2007, 08:23 PM
[url=http://imageshack.us]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6825/theownagethatneverwaseu0.gif[/


I SAY THIS IS MY BEST YET
then i'd really, really hate to see your worst

leo4life
11-28-2007, 08:34 PM
hey, dis my first beam test, i did this by myself, no tutors or anything, so if its bad, its not my fault :Smile:



http://www.fileupyours.com/files/144265/beam.gif

Terix
11-28-2007, 09:45 PM
hmmm...stiffness and smoothness were the main problems.the beam could use some work.I sugest not useing effects until you got the basics down.


anyway,I made an anim for some collab I'm apart of over at ng.its a mix between a castle tribute,frozen fire tribute,and a collab bit.most stks are by frozen fire....others were made by limped and I.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/collab_bitteh5wbh.gif

C&C would be apretiated...also a rank would be good.

leo4life
11-28-2007, 10:57 PM
ya no... this is the first time ive seen u animate terix, lol u pwnwed

Terix
11-28-2007, 11:02 PM
naah,theres still some editing to be done.the gif keeps on rapeing the colors,or whatever demi would say...heres a more edited version....also,I forgot to mention,this is a castle & frozen fire tribute,all the while a collab entry.anyway,here.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/collab_bittehtvwl.gif

SoulEater
11-28-2007, 11:07 PM
The main thing in most of your animations is the stiffness and the slowness.
When the monsters got shot, you shouldn't make them dissapear right away.
Keep practicing and you'll reach high beginner soon.

Terix
11-28-2007, 11:13 PM
yeah..like I said,its in the "work in progress" stage.I'll keep editing til' its up to par.also,the monsters disapearing thing was more of a vampire kind of thing.....actually,I just made that up. ^_^;
but its kinda like a video game death thing...I dunno how to explain it....

leo4life
11-28-2007, 11:37 PM
The main thing in most of your animations is the stiffness and the slowness.
When the monsters got shot, you shouldn't make them dissapear right away.
Keep practicing and you'll reach high beginner soon.


pssffttt, hes already a high begginer, lol im getting coments saying im med begginer, so i no terix isnt no med eaither, cause his are way better than mine,lol

SoulEater
11-28-2007, 11:39 PM
Even though I quit pivot, I can still rank it. I used it for over 3 years. I got the ranking down :)
Terix is med beginner, almost high beginner, and you are low beginner still.

raidforce
11-29-2007, 12:23 AM
STOP WITH RANKS YOU DUMB PIVFAGS.
another:

http://www.antiup.net/files/front%20and%20back%20flips.gif (http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3606)

leo4life
11-29-2007, 06:07 AM
STOP WITH RANKS YOU DUMB PIVFAGS.
another:

lol come on man, whats wrong with asking for a rank, its not hurting anyone :Ohhhhh: . anyways, i like ur flip, make some more, but make it longs, like about 10 seconds or sumthing, just a suggestion:Happy:

liamzo stickman
11-29-2007, 11:29 AM
ok my guy running and walking
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20walk%20+%20run%20test.gif

animator12345
11-29-2007, 12:17 PM
it's getting better

liamzo stickman
11-29-2007, 12:19 PM
what things do i need to improve on

superbenjis
11-29-2007, 12:59 PM
The guy is not running enaugh time ..

A gunshot test, rate and comment please :)



Please comment, I think I need some help on that :|

superbenjis
11-29-2007, 01:24 PM
SRY FOR DOUBLE POST

A gunshot test, rate and comment please :)
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2458/gunshotpo7.gif (http://imageshack.us)

I think I need a bit of help on that :|

liamzo stickman
11-29-2007, 01:56 PM
ok here is just my running
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20run.gif

SoulEater
11-29-2007, 02:12 PM
Work a lot on stiffness and easing.

liamzo stickman
11-29-2007, 02:23 PM
me
.

SoulEater
11-29-2007, 02:27 PM
Yeah, you.

liamzo stickman
11-29-2007, 02:44 PM
ok, ok, a guy punching
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punch%20test.gif

SoulEater
11-29-2007, 02:52 PM
The arms were smooth, but the back arms kind of twitched at the end, and it lacked some easing. The head and the torso is still stiff, and the walking looks weird.

leo4life
11-29-2007, 03:04 PM
i dunno.... looks pretty goood to me =D

raidforce
11-29-2007, 03:06 PM
my fourth:
http://www.antiup.net/files/Ragdoll.gif (http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3621)

superbenjis
11-29-2007, 03:13 PM
Funny and original 4/5

Terix
11-29-2007, 03:18 PM
STOP WITH RANKS YOU DUMB PIVFAGS.
another:

http://www.antiup.net/files/front%20and%20back%20flips.gif (http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3606)


thats weird....I made a stk EXACTLY LIKE THAT!
did I post a download I forgot about?

raidforce
11-29-2007, 03:23 PM
OSHI- you made that .stk? Damn, I forgot to give you credit. Thanks for the stick, it is pretty awesome.

Terix
11-29-2007, 03:30 PM
no no,don't apologize.I forgot I posted that stk in the first place.=P
but thanks.

leo4life
11-29-2007, 03:30 PM
OOHH Sht, can i use ur stick guy to? he looks cool, plz send me a link where to download him

Terix
11-29-2007, 03:33 PM
yeah.here:

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/wolfmaydie/1cc0e.stk

if anyone wants to download,just give me cred if you use it.THXKBAI!!!!!

EDIT: its for pivot 3 beta and up.

raidforce
11-29-2007, 03:35 PM
no worky. :( try www.droidz.org and go to the section called sticks, then at the bottom is his stick

Terix
11-29-2007, 03:39 PM
what the hell?!I didn't submitt that! ...well I did,but it was declined.....THAT JERKOFF STOLE IT!!!!!!!

EDIT: nvm....he just took my Idea....lol I remember that guy when I first submitted that stk.he was all jazzed.

leo4life
11-29-2007, 04:00 PM
dang man ur stick figure is awsome, ima invent a stick figure

SkuLLz
11-30-2007, 07:10 AM
[
IMG=http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/5416/cool3eb7.th.gif]

hmm i downloaded pivot a year ago but my animation was shit so i think it still is shit but i wana know whats wrong with my animations - please tell me

EDIT : oh cuz i have 5 posts i need someone to post the correct link ... umm

liamzo stickman
11-30-2007, 09:58 AM
ok, my punching again
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punching.gif

raidforce
11-30-2007, 10:06 AM
well, pivot is being a bitch, so the gif is way slowed down (even after I put the fps to it's highest in an attempt to compensate)

http://www.antiup.net/files/Ragdoll%2028.gif (http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3689)

here is the piv file so you can see it at normal speed:
http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/1736206.htm

MonsterBreath12
11-30-2007, 01:26 PM
very nice, raidforce.

maybe to not make it slow put the frame delay to 6 and on merge un-check it and shrink frames by 1/2.

anyway, I was messin' around with dark bert and meh neeww stickmmmaaannn:
http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Zortin/darkbertzqczs.gif
it kinda sucks though but its no suppost to be a loop ile continiue it maybe.

animator12345
11-30-2007, 01:29 PM
ok, my punching again
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punching.gif
very good
when his arms flop down make them bounce of his body

Arch-Angel
11-30-2007, 01:32 PM
omg MB, did you make your sig?

cloud wolf
11-30-2007, 01:45 PM
Right made another anim please C&C and tell me if i can post outside the Begginers section

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1197/lawaleffectsyw1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lawaleffectsyw1.gif

raidforce
11-30-2007, 03:30 PM
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3704 Thank you monster breath, I was wondering what was wrong with the damned gif.

sAcReD
11-30-2007, 03:49 PM
im doin somethin for the destruction of grey collab on a different site(on my sig) and i just wanna see wat ppl think... im not done yet... i dont even think im half way done but just tell me how it looks C&C and rank plz!!

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x168/sAcReD_09/DestructionoftheGrey.gif

Reeses cup
11-30-2007, 04:08 PM
how do you post them???????????????/

Arch-Angel
11-30-2007, 04:13 PM
how do you post them???????????????/ there are many ways that we know of.

1- by going to the tutorials section and looking

2- having a 3rd grade edumacation

3- common sense

now pick which one you have/will do, and pick 2 that you don't have/will do.
You decide.

Someone Important
11-30-2007, 06:01 PM
this is one of mine too.:Spiderman:

Digorrybio
11-30-2007, 06:51 PM
low beginner... no easing, very stiff, go read some tutorials k?

superbenjis
11-30-2007, 07:32 PM
I made some stick figures :P

http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1196537850.stk <--- handgun
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1196494706.stk <--- stickman
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1196481135.stk <--- handgun 2

Arch-Angel
11-30-2007, 07:33 PM
no pic no click

leo4life
11-30-2007, 09:29 PM
http://moviewavs.com/php/sounds/?id=bst&media=WAVS&type=TV_Shows&movie=Simpsons&quote=cartoon.txt&file=cartoon.wav ...




just kidding, just kidding:Happy:

i suck at pivot

sAcReD
11-30-2007, 09:55 PM
im doin somethin for the destruction of grey collab on a different site(on my sig) and i just wanna see wat ppl think... im not done yet... i dont even think im half way done but just tell me how it looks C&C and rank plz!!

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x168/sAcReD_09/DestructionoftheGrey.gif

hellos? plz??? i need to know

superbenjis
12-01-2007, 07:04 AM
I think med-med begginer :P

Arch-Angel
12-01-2007, 09:19 AM
I think med-med begginer :P **** you. there are no sub ranks for sub ranks.

It's just

-Beginner
-low
-med
-high
-borderline
-Intermediate
-low
-med
-high
-Veteran

liamzo stickman
12-01-2007, 09:27 AM
can i get some tips for this punch, i thought ELITE was a rank
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punching.gif

sAcReD
12-01-2007, 09:29 AM
**** you. there are no sub ranks for sub ranks.

It's just

-Beginner
-low
-med
-high
-borderline
-Intermediate
-low
-med
-high
-Veteran

yo demi since u no all the ranks wat would u say and wat should i do to improve??

Arch-Angel
12-01-2007, 09:32 AM
can i get some tips for this punch, i thought ELITE was a rank
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punching.gif
it is, though there havn't been new Elite's in ages. So I left it out.
yo demi since u no all the ranks wat would u say and wat should i do to improve??Work on everything

cloud wolf
12-01-2007, 09:51 AM
Right made another anim please C&C and tell me if i can post outside the Begginers section

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1197/lawaleffectsyw1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lawaleffectsyw1.gif

liamzo stickman
12-01-2007, 10:00 AM
ok, can someone give me tips for my punch
http://www.antiup.net/files/gif%20punching.gif

cloud wolf
12-01-2007, 10:02 AM
Its a good punch theres not much more needed although 1 of his feet had a spasm

cloud wolf
12-01-2007, 10:02 AM
Its a good punch theres not much more needed although 1 of his feet had a spasm