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purechaos90
09-22-2007, 07:50 PM
here is my second walk test, plz rate
http://www.filecram.com/files/578walking.gif

That was horrible. Look at some walking tutorials.
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Hello this is one of my first animations please rate and give comments!

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9862/testpunchwhituziatendhz2.gif

Good for a first animation. Just look at a tutorial on the basics and work your way up from there once you have mastered the basics.

kido426
09-22-2007, 10:39 PM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6843/pokehr6.gif how do you like it?see,i was good and posted in begginers section,and now i want a cookie.

StickFollower
09-22-2007, 11:20 PM
dude, do not rate animations. All the animations you just rated are low beginner and no where near med beginner. Terix's was the best if you count the last 2 pages

ty for the advice, but it was just my opinion, i'll stick with suggestions I guess.

purechaos90
09-22-2007, 11:20 PM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6843/pokehr6.gif how do you like it?see,i was good and posted in begginers section,and now i want a cookie.

A little shakey on the jump. Not much to rate though.

burningpride
09-22-2007, 11:36 PM
http://<a href="http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=itsrealoksk4.gif" target="_blank"><img src="http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3927/itsrealoksk4.th.gif" border="0" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" /></a>[/IMG]

well i'm a super noob at animation and all this excuse me if i am wrong.
i probly put this on wrong......

Naglfar
09-23-2007, 04:59 AM
http://<a href="http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=itsrealoksk4.gif" target="_blank"><img src="http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3927/itsrealoksk4.th.gif" border="0" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" /></a>[/IMG]

well i'm a super noob at animation and all this excuse me if i am wrong.
i probly put this on wrong......

Step 1:
Save your .piv into .gif
Uncheck merge
Set frame delay to 6~7 for normal frame rate.
Shrink the frames by 1/2 or it will be too big.

Step 2:
Go to either www.imageshack.us ,www.pivothost.org , or www.filecram.com
I recommend one of them.
Upload your work there.
If you choose imageshack, I'd recommend you download the toolbar, so it's easier and faster to upload.

Step 3:
For Pivothost you should see a link already, copy and paste it here for the URL
For Imageshack you should see a heck lot of links in there with a first-frame-pic of your animation.
Scroll down the page till you see a link labeled with "Direct link". Copy it, and paste it here, it's your URL.
If you want to post it into image form, which you will need when you don't have 20 posts yet..
Type in *Paste your URL(Direct) Link here*
For Filecram just copy the Second code(BB link) for the direct link, First link HTML code for download.

There , you're done, Hope this helped.
Credz to Cezar for the Filecram add-on.
Naglfar

omegadoom
09-23-2007, 05:04 AM
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9343/harmlessas6.gif (http://imageshack.us)

animator12345
09-23-2007, 07:17 AM
wat did you think of my animation

omegadoom
09-23-2007, 08:51 AM
lol yours is ok wot do ya think of mine?????????????????????????????????
==>

animator12345
09-23-2007, 09:46 AM
it's good lots of blood

Naglfar
09-23-2007, 10:09 AM
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9343/harmlessas6.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Overall I think it's pretty good I guess, but the only problem is that the stickman's leg didn't really move at all, move the legs, and ease, then the animation would be excellent. =)
Keep going!

purechaos90
09-23-2007, 10:21 AM
hi guys i am back and have a new short , plz rate it 4 me

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9343/harmlessas6.gif (http://imageshack.us)


VERY stiff. Bad movements. blood was good for a beginner, but why did the blood just stop when it hit the ground? there was no easing at all. When the arms fell it just stopped on the ground, no bounce or anything.

Low beginner.

Asylum
09-23-2007, 12:28 PM
OmegaDoom,

I think it's pretty good but I don't like how he tosses his arm, it should've fallen off a little bit earlier. I also don't like how the leg was stiff, I think the spine movments were decent and the arms were pretty good, I'm not certain it that was the best way his first arm could've fallen but it was pretty good and I like the blood.



And burningpride, you don't use HTML you use IMG tags.

omegadoom
09-23-2007, 12:48 PM
thank you all for the advice, check this out (ignore the lightning thingy it sucks)http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5072/swordcombocz5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
thanx

General Douchington
09-23-2007, 01:26 PM
thank you all for the advice, check this out (ignore the lightning thingy it sucks)http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5072/swordcombocz5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
thanx

That "lightning thingy" is called Chidori, and if you know it sucks, why did you do it? Wait, the whole thing is bad, stiff and choppy, I'd rather not go on.

omegadoom
09-23-2007, 02:09 PM
tf your a ass hole and i will wait for a decent animator to rate it, and btw tht was a test so just stfu faggot

matnat
09-23-2007, 02:11 PM
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/2489/63662167bl3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Lol i got bored

Arch-Angel
09-23-2007, 02:24 PM
tf your a ass hole and i will wait for a decent animator to rate it, and btw tht was a test so just stfu faggot
we all know im godliness.

stiff, choppy, no easing, physics were off, placeing was off a bit, movements need loads of work, effects were terrible.

Go search here and at www.darkdemon.org for tutorials on the things I just listed. And use grammer, "tf your a ass hole", should be, "TF, you're an ass hole"

matnat
09-23-2007, 02:34 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/460/gfru9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
another thing :P

Asylum
09-23-2007, 02:35 PM
we all know im godliness.

stiff, choppy, no easing, physics were off, placeing was off a bit, movements need loads of work, effects were terrible.

Go search here and at for tutorials on the things I just listed. And use grammer, "tf your a ass hole", should be, "TF, you're an ass hole"


You need to use grammer as well...

"We all know I'm"...

Follow your own advice.

Arch-Angel
09-23-2007, 02:38 PM
This is what you do not understand Mr. "pivot noob", Im not a noob. Therefor, I do not HAVE to use the little ', or capitilize the first word in my posts. I'm just so cool like that, though it's annoying when noobs do, cuz 1337 basically mess around too much. You have lots to learn.

SprayPainted
09-23-2007, 02:49 PM
Whoa wtf! Millions of noobs since I last visited, two words: Holy Shit.

Knightsy
09-23-2007, 03:17 PM
Mat nat read sum tuts
bad reactions in your animation
also its like 2 frames form standing to laying

Dusty The Stickman
09-23-2007, 04:28 PM
WOW.........
thats funny

SprayPainted
09-23-2007, 04:31 PM
You dummy, why did you use Jynxs' avatar for your self?

Dusty The Stickman
09-23-2007, 04:37 PM
i didnt know i need a pic -.-?

Dusty The Stickman
09-23-2007, 04:37 PM
needed*
a pic ill change

SprayPainted
09-23-2007, 04:41 PM
Dont use people avys mmkay?

soap
09-23-2007, 04:47 PM
and also dont double post u dumb.
EDIT!!!!!!!!
check this out
http://www.filecram.com/files/545first orange dot animation.gif
also whoever it was who called demi angel a noob deserves to go to hell . demi- angel is like a vet or almost

General Douchington
09-23-2007, 05:10 PM
and also dont double post u dumb.
EDIT!!!!!!!!
check this out
http://www.filecram.com/files/545first orange dot animation.gif
also whoever it was who called demi angel a noob deserves to go to hell . demi- angel is like a vet or almost

It looks like hes just floating up there. -_-

SprayPainted
09-23-2007, 05:14 PM
also whoever it was who called demi angel a noob deserves to go to hell . demi- angel is like a vet or almost

Where's this comin' from? Who called Demi a noob. Plus its how you consider someone a noob, like how they post, animate, etc.

purechaos90
09-23-2007, 05:22 PM
and also dont double post u dumb.
EDIT!!!!!!!!
check this out
http://www.filecram.com/files/545first orange dot animation.gif
also whoever it was who called demi angel a noob deserves to go to hell . demi- angel is like a vet or almost

Very stiff. No easing on the land.

StickFollower
09-23-2007, 10:08 PM
Where's this comin' from? Who called Demi a noob. Plus its how you consider someone a noob, like how they post, animate, etc.

Some guy last page called demi a noob because of grammar, just that stupid ' in i'm. Pretty dumb to call someone a noob for using im instead of i'm.

cloud wolf
09-24-2007, 05:43 AM
Made a decent fight. Please Comment and stuff
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8003/okfightpj1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks

release
09-24-2007, 07:10 AM
Need moar force! On punch and push. The rest was pretty good though.

Naglfar
09-24-2007, 10:07 AM
It looks like hes just floating up there. -_-

If you post that animation here, don't post it outside..

Cereal Man
09-24-2007, 10:23 AM
Made a decent fight. Please Comment and stuff
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8003/okfightpj1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks

Cloud wolf, that isn't so bad. Work on trying to make your animations longer.

You have potential.

animator12345
09-24-2007, 11:39 AM
how would you get to med begginer

Knightsy
09-24-2007, 12:05 PM
By doing a med begginer animation

Gyohdon
09-24-2007, 12:07 PM
By animating a lot and reading tutorials.
And you'll have to practice basics over and over.
Won't take that long if you're serious :P

Haven't been pivoting in 2 weeks now, so i just done some things.
This one kinda sucks at the ending:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/HolyRecovery.gif

This one too =P:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/WeaponsTest.gif

Here I was trying to do the mega fast walkings
vets and elites sometimes use for defaults (second is just funny =P):
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/DefaultWeirdWalk.gif
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/DefaultWeirdWalk_LOL.gif

This one, most recent, was a jogging test:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/JoggingTest.gif


Whaddaya think? still med beginner, or am i i low again.. >:(

animator12345
09-24-2007, 12:14 PM
I like the jogging test
it's smoooooth

animator12345
09-24-2007, 12:38 PM
this is one of my animations

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7185/wanabeun4.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Gyohdon
09-24-2007, 01:31 PM
The only good thing i see, is that you're pretty good at smoothness,
and i see a little easing. Keep practicing and you'll become
med beginner fo sho :P

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/JumpLeap.gif
Whaddaya think of this one?

animator12345
09-24-2007, 01:42 PM
thanks
I can't wait till I'm a med beginner
I like yours I like the jump
but I don't know what other people think

Knightsy
09-24-2007, 02:15 PM
nice run bad flip bad way to climb up a building med beg should put more effot in and def wokr on the flip everything is was OKAY.

General Douchington
09-24-2007, 02:16 PM
*yawns* Meh... pivot...
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa283/Uber-Warrior/sgr.gif

Knightsy
09-24-2007, 02:19 PM
way too shaky man ruins the good animation but are your arms :l

General Douchington
09-24-2007, 02:28 PM
Its purposely shaky, I did that on purpose, isn't that how reloading a D.B. Shotgun is like?

Gyohdon
09-24-2007, 02:28 PM
lol =P

What do you guys think of this one? its all about the kick, the rest was for the loop.
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/TurnKickTest.gif

General Douchington
09-24-2007, 02:30 PM
Not enough easing, a tad choppy at some parts, but not too much, and it just felt wierd to me for some reason, dunno.

Arch-Angel
09-24-2007, 02:44 PM
how would you get to med begginer
easing, physics, good enough movements, an animation that isn't really stiff
By doing a med begginer animation
you're not funny. -_-
this is one of my animations

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7185/wanabeun4.gif (http://imageshack.us)low beginner, you have a lot to work on.

The only good thing i see, is that you're pretty good at smoothness,
and i see a little easing. Keep practicing and you'll become
med beginner fo sho :P
false. you cannot be 'pretty good at smoothness'. Easing makes an animation smooth, therefor, little easing = not that smooth. Work on easing, physics, movements, and making things less stiff.

thanks
I can't wait till I'm a med beginner
that's stupid, you'd still be beginner, go for inter.

lol =P

What do you guys think of this one? its all about the kick, the rest was for the loop.
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/TurnKickTest.gifwork on easing, movements, physics, n that stuff, med beginner.

Not enough easing, a tad choppy at some parts, but not too much, and it just felt wierd to me for some reason, dunno.ha ha ha

Darc
09-24-2007, 04:01 PM
my walk test http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5888/walktest4jc7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
please rate and comment,

the body isnt stiff for a walk by the way, ive been observing people walk and our body doesnt move that much at all in a walk

Arch-Angel
09-24-2007, 04:16 PM
the whole walk is stiff, even the body -_-

Darc
09-24-2007, 04:55 PM
crap that's my 4th walk test. I CANT BELIEVE YOU HAVE TO MOVE SO MUCH IN A ****ING WALK! I'M ALWAYS SO ****ING STIFF ON ****ING WALKS! *moment of kicking something* okay im better now that still sucks though

Terix
09-24-2007, 04:56 PM
my walk test http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5888/walktest4jc7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
please rate and comment,

the body isnt stiff for a walk by the way, ive been observing people walk and our body doesnt move that much at all in a walk

didn't you post that already?I'm pretty sure you did.....but yeah.its a bit stiff.

Darc
09-24-2007, 05:00 PM
no i didnt post that already, though there is a tutorial on here that has a similar stickfigure, all my other walk test was the default on 3 beta

Terix
09-24-2007, 07:13 PM
oh,thats the problem right there.if your useing pivot 3 beta,put the speed up to at least 18 or so.then,when your done with the animation,and want to save it,put the frame rate at about......27.then it should be smooth.

kaillera
09-24-2007, 08:42 PM
I suppose you're doing slow motion?

no i wasnt.. it was just really slow after i uploaded it. not my fault.

SprayPainted
09-24-2007, 09:54 PM
By animating a lot and reading tutorials.
And you'll have to practice basics over and over.
Won't take that long if you're serious :P

Haven't been pivoting in 2 weeks now, so i just done some things.
This one kinda sucks at the ending:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/HolyRecovery.gif

This one too =P:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/WeaponsTest.gif

Here I was trying to do the mega fast walkings
vets and elites sometimes use for defaults (second is just funny =P):
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/DefaultWeirdWalk.gif
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/DefaultWeirdWalk_LOL.gif

This one, most recent, was a jogging test:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/JoggingTest.gif


Whaddaya think? still med beginner, or am i i low again.. >:(


Really, IMO, its either borderline inter or low inter.

Naglfar
09-24-2007, 11:02 PM
Really, IMO, its either borderline inter or low inter.

Are you kidding?!?! :P
That's High beginner at MOST. Really...No way that's borderline inter.

Lone Wolf
09-24-2007, 11:03 PM
Really, IMO, its either borderline inter or low inter.

He's probably med beginner at best, man. He's too stiff and lacks some easing.

Naglfar
09-24-2007, 11:07 PM
He's probably med beginner at best, man. He's too stiff and lacks some easing.

Quoted for truth, are you Intermediate yet? Lone?

Lone Wolf
09-24-2007, 11:09 PM
Quoted for truth, are you Intermediate yet? Lone?

Pssh, no where near as close. Med beginner or high. I haven't animated a good animation that has stick figures for a while. I've been doing a lot of crap tests. I need inspiration.

EDIT: I've been doing stuff like this.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9066/physiczbr0.gif

Gyohdon
09-25-2007, 12:09 PM
HAHHAHAHHAH!1 LMFAO! inter lol
okay... phew, that just made my day.. o wait it already was =P

okay, but lone wolf, that one looked good, too bad it had no real stickmen too really rate you.

animator12345
09-25-2007, 12:10 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5379/slipzv1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/70/hillly1.gif (http://imageshack.us)

thease are my two slide animations

coopercrue
09-25-2007, 12:52 PM
pretty good they need some work though.

Gyohdon
09-25-2007, 01:01 PM
not just some, id have to say. you're dudes are prtty stiff and the fall in 1st anim is veryyy sick.. :|

what do you think of this one?
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/BalTest.gif

Stormwalker
09-25-2007, 01:03 PM
shakes way to much , practice easying, and the last kick was horible. not to sound hars but hey you want to improve dont you?

Gyohdon
09-25-2007, 01:06 PM
i do wanna improve and i say thanks:Happy: but when is the shaky part?

Naglfar
09-25-2007, 01:23 PM
The arms and the back is stiff. :3

animator12345
09-25-2007, 01:37 PM
how can I make my animations better?

Dark
09-25-2007, 01:53 PM
Practice, tutorials, and a burning motivation.

firefle
09-25-2007, 01:59 PM
little sniper thing i made out of boredom

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3981/sniperfunyp7.th.gif (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sniperfunyp7.gif)

Dark
09-25-2007, 02:04 PM
The blood was bad, and I could tell you were using an enlarge stick because...it was sticking out of the stick. The stick was stiff, and the fall was way too slow and unrealistic.

firefle
09-25-2007, 03:01 PM
ya i know the blood was horrible im looking for a good tut for blood but cant find any. but any way thanx for the tips.

Jutsu
09-25-2007, 04:30 PM
meh same stuff here I guess hows this?
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70798

General Douchington
09-25-2007, 05:02 PM
little sniper thing i made out of boredom

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3981/sniperfunyp7.th.gif (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sniperfunyp7.gif)

That was horrible, work on EVERYTHING, including putting 2 stks on top of one another correctly, seriously.

meh same stuff here I guess hows this?
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70798

Meh, it was good, though it needs a bit of work.

Asylum
09-25-2007, 05:16 PM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/175/idkru9.gif

alias
09-25-2007, 06:06 PM
Waaayy to fast, slow it down. It was smooth, but work on easing. Also stiff and the ending was terrible.

purechaos90
09-25-2007, 06:22 PM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/175/idkru9.gif

Low beginner. WAY too stiff. The guy that floated just stopped, with no easing, on his second "float trip" lol. Blood was horrible.

Terix
09-25-2007, 07:02 PM
I don't think that was blood at all realy.mabey a special fx?

Asylum
09-25-2007, 07:02 PM
Waaayy to fast, slow it down. It was smooth, but work on easing. Also stiff and the ending was terrible.
I could not think of a decent way to end it, kind've wanted a disintegrate-effect but.. Ehh.

Low beginner. WAY too stiff. The guy that floated just stopped, with no easing, on his second "float trip" lol. Blood was horrible.

It was a bit stiff, I just pissed around with it. I'm not too focused on blood right now.

purechaos90
09-25-2007, 07:10 PM
I could not think of a decent way to end it, kind've wanted a disintegrate-effect but.. Ehh.



It was a bit stiff, I just pissed around with it. I'm not too focused on blood right now.

Good. Don't focus on any specil fx, blod, or anything like that at your level. Just focus on the basics. Once you master that, you can step up to harder stuff.

Asylum
09-25-2007, 07:13 PM
Thanks for the tips, but I will do a LITTLE bit of blood. But I won't focus on getting any better, I just don't think it right to have a guy get shot in the head with no blood... About to start working on another anim.

firefle
09-25-2007, 08:02 PM
a little saber effect for those of you who said it was virtually impossible to have sabers on pivot


http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4489/saberlz7.th.gif (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=saberlz7.gif)

General Douchington
09-25-2007, 08:47 PM
a little saber effect for those of you who said it was virtually impossible to have sabers on pivot


http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4489/saberlz7.th.gif (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=saberlz7.gif)

No one ever said sabers were impossible in pivot, they're quite easy, with the right stks, and yours was worthless, not even worth posting.

firefle
09-25-2007, 08:53 PM
incorrect i made a thread asking if there was a way to do saber effect. dont remember who it was cuase i cant find the thread now but some one did say that it was virtually impossible. and if theres a beter saber technique please show me. And dont be so harsh im pretty new at this stuff. your tips are appreciated.

firefle
09-25-2007, 08:54 PM
and what is stks?

General Douchington
09-25-2007, 08:58 PM
1. Don't double post.
2. Droidz has many saber and saber effects stks, just dig around there.
3. Stks mean Sticks, stk is the type of files of the sticks.

kido426
09-25-2007, 09:27 PM
lol,how you like this?i was looking for that box from droidz so i made my own,so it kinda sucks,but here it is :Smile: http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5131/boxkillersd8.gif

Lone Wolf
09-25-2007, 11:10 PM
lol,how you like this?i was looking for that box from droidz so i made my own,so it kinda sucks,but here it is :Smile: http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5131/boxkillersd8.gif

Too jerky .

Gyohdon
09-26-2007, 01:14 AM
yeah, and the ending reaction of when he fell was too slow and too late.
And when the dude gets pushed by the box the legs are stiff. just fix that and i might look m high beginner. else med :P

EDIT: WOW no one has reacted for 9 hours! Lollz :P
I made a new anim. All stks made by me, EXCEPT for the hole in the ground, its by leedon.
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/CannonBlast.gif

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:14 PM
No offense to Leedon, but that hole sucked. Otherwise, you're good.

animator12345
09-26-2007, 02:20 PM
I liked the pirate man
did you make it yourself

Gyohdon
09-26-2007, 02:24 PM
yes, i said so -.-' =P
What rank do you think it is? im high beginner already?

And do you think i need a new avvy..?

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:26 PM
Well I can't rank you because my rank is yet to be discovered. And yeah, you need a new avi.

Zapo
09-26-2007, 02:28 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=coolxn6.gif
please rate i keep trying to make boarder... please tell me if im close and gyohdon the runing was great put the smoke and most other stuff wasnt that good id say med- high beg.Getting there though good job.

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:29 PM
That looks nice. But for some reason, the arms look stiff.

Gyohdon
09-26-2007, 02:32 PM
boarder?.. wtf?

but ill rate, if ya got no problem with that:Happy:

id say just med beginner. the smoke was too dark for my opinion and it didn't disintegrate well. also it stayed at the same 'bigness' (dunno how to say it :P) at the bottom the whole time. also the movements could be better. good luck with getting better =P

Zapo
09-26-2007, 02:34 PM
boarder?.. wtf?

but ill rate, if ya got no problem with that:Happy:

id say just med beginner. the smoke was too dark for my opinion and it didn't disintegrate well. also it stayed at the same 'bigness' (dunno how to say it :P) at the bottom the whole time. also the movements could be better. good luck with getting better =P
he he lol thats funny man but let me remind you if im med begginer your low and besides the smoke didnt disinagrate it faded into the begging again. Good luck on improving from low beg buday:heh:

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:34 PM
I believe you mean 'size'. And he means border. I assume border Inter?

EDIT: Zapo, with practice, Gyohdon can become better. Anyone can become better. And it's spelled buddy.

Gyohdon
09-26-2007, 02:36 PM
my god, zapo dont be such an arrogant noob thinking hes better than someone, just cuz he's giving hes opinion, cuz im definitaly no low beginner anymore.

Zapo
09-26-2007, 02:36 PM
Yes but i never said the animation was border inter i was saying im trying to make border inter :)

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:37 PM
Uh, that's what I meant.

Zapo
09-26-2007, 02:38 PM
my god, zapo dont be such an arrogant noob thinking hes better than someone, just cuz he's giving hes opinion, cuz im definitaly no low beginner anymore.
ok maby not but im just saying your not as good as me... so ur probaly one level under me.Well your running is wicked ill give you that but not much else try working on weak points in ur animations and your the one who was being an arrogant noob i was just more obvious. well you were right dark lol.

Dark
09-26-2007, 02:39 PM
Hey, if you guys are going to argue about who's better, do a PW.

Zapo
09-26-2007, 02:39 PM
Nah i think were done :| lol

animator12345
09-26-2007, 02:55 PM
I think gyohdon was better

Zapo
09-26-2007, 04:04 PM
thats cool but i think you mean his running like realy there was nothing else in it... i guy pulls somthing a canon explodes looked bad then a guys croaches and a crappy hole appears

Darc
09-26-2007, 05:30 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/9017/comboqo0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
my first and best (<-- obviously) combat test! please rate and C&C, also, is it too fast?crap no ones on right now

Zsdery
09-26-2007, 06:45 PM
that looked good but why does it pause in the beginning

anfu
09-26-2007, 06:59 PM
heres one i did kind of fast... i am going to keep adding more scenes anyway but i want a little feedback
http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/1784969.htm

purechaos90
09-26-2007, 07:02 PM
heres one i did kind of fast... i am going to keep adding more scenes anyway but i want a little feedback
http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/1784969.htm

Choppy. No easing at all. Bad movements.

low beginner.

the drawer
09-26-2007, 07:32 PM
small punch test.
did really bad on the falling.

http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t221/The_Drawer/fulbodypunch.gif

Pls Rate

Zapo
09-26-2007, 07:40 PM
acctualy the falling wasnt that bad good job.Can anyone rate mine?
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=100framesjr5.gif

kido426
09-26-2007, 08:53 PM
why are you posting in beg section?your like...a pivot god compared to mine..well heres one here.youll see.movmensts suck everything sucks in anim.look at mine then your then think why your in here.here is my sucky anim :Oh No!:http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4884/wellgoodeh2.gif oops

Terix
09-26-2007, 09:08 PM
helluva lot better than mine kido.and speeking of mine....


http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/wolfmaydie/new_blood_test.gif


I was trying out some new blood I made.

Zapo
09-26-2007, 09:09 PM
dude listen your gonna stay like that forever you keep talking that way try to get some confidence and thanks for being nice :) but i was horrible from like a week ago i figured out what my problem was.Onigon skin trailing try it like make ur stick move sorta the.... nvm its realy hard to explain but theres some tuts with it.And try to ease in as much as you can :) good luck. To kido
Well got to go guys bye

kido426
09-26-2007, 09:31 PM
ty zapo...ty terix?....look what im trying to say is gtfo of beg section beacus your way better than thaT.and terix the only problem wit your anims is there stiff,and easing,mine have all of ity wronmg wit em ok?so your l;ike med beg zapo your inter.

Terix
09-26-2007, 09:37 PM
well,don't say anything good about my anims.you'll just get flammed by demi,spraypainted,or some other peaple that hate my pivots.but thank you anyway...

kido426
09-26-2007, 09:44 PM
ill say what i want about your pivs,they could stick it up there asses your good just need a little work,ZAPO ARE YOU POSTING AWSOME ANIMS OUTTA BEG SECTION YET??

SprayPainted
09-26-2007, 09:51 PM
well,don't say anything good about my anims.you'll just get flammed by demi,spraypainted,or some other peaple that hate my pivots.but thank you anyway...

I dont call it flaming, yet, harsh critsizim.

Maybe somewhat flaming, SOMEWHAT.

Darc
09-26-2007, 09:55 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5836/combopm7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
I only got 1 comment on this. C&C? and, if you want, rate? and it pauses in the beginning so you can see whats happening.
Credz to droidz for midget stick

Terix
09-26-2007, 10:04 PM
I dont call it flaming, yet, harsh critsizim.

Maybe somewhat flaming, SOMEWHAT.

hehe,I know.I was just warning kido for possible fight starters.no offence....we cool?

@pivot master:its pretty good really.I didn't think anyone could make the miget sticks move so smoothly.nice.


and what do you guys think of my new blood stks?

http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd91/wolfmaydie/bloodstkthingy.gif

SoulEater
09-26-2007, 10:18 PM
http://www.filecram.com/files/584Backflip test.gifHere is my latest animation:

Rank plz =D

Jutsu
09-26-2007, 10:22 PM
Well there all low beg but progressing just learn to ease better.

SoulEater
09-26-2007, 10:26 PM
Er, were you talking to terix or me?

Terix
09-26-2007, 10:31 PM
Well there all low beg but progressing just learn to ease better.

yeah,I know,but I'm just practiceing with blood and stuff.I'm just trying to see if I'm any good at makeing blood stks is all.

Jutsu
09-26-2007, 11:20 PM
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70855
Hows this?

Terix
09-26-2007, 11:26 PM
I saw that eirlier.I like it.its pretty smooth.I also like how he disapperears at the end.nice one.

Jutsu
09-27-2007, 12:30 AM
No one will tell me the problems, unless there are none.
Dragora shed the light!!!!
http://www.filecram.com/files/leap of faith.gif
I know what your thinking, since wen can .:pt:. do smoke?
Well I can should I continue it?

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 02:05 AM
how did i do this!!! C&C please but seriosly how did i do this
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1438/51910784ta5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

new100
09-27-2007, 03:00 AM
hi guys im back. i was on some other websites but they got boring so i came back to spp's forums. changed alot.

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 03:51 AM
hey nice to see you hope you got better at pivot. hey i got an animated avi now. .:pt:. the smoke should have went toward itself more like it was ingulping itself or something

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/447/65tgn9.gif (http://imageshack.us) C&C nobody C&Ced this one i posted forever ago

new100
09-27-2007, 04:32 AM
umm... crap i didnt make any more pivot since a lot of weeks. i didnt get good. ill get back to work. as always here. but my stickmans skills improved since those weeks. he killed sticks that kill other sticks and he is a hero now. hes got more weapons too. hes also got deathmatch awards. hes got 5 of them: one shot four kills, invinceability, pistol only, gold damage to enemys [100645] and gold kills [600]. and now in stickworld theres the deathmatch compitition [15 rounds, 1000 enemys, winner gets a new weapon witch is more powerful then a nucler bomb] and he signed up. 2 more days til that starts but it does not include weapons. his unarmed attacking and dodging is 100% exellent and hes got hell loads of magic. he says "it will be easy for me so dont worry i wont die!" im trying to belive that but its not easy on round 15 cause there will be 5 ultimite fighters that never died. i think that new100 will survive but theres no escape so its gonna be a little hard.

Zapo
09-27-2007, 04:47 AM
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=100framesjr5.gif
like it yes? no? any ways please rank me.

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 04:50 AM
you posted that already i like it thats realy good i think thats high begginer but i dunno how to rate. what about mine though both of them there on this page

Zapo
09-27-2007, 04:53 AM
its acctually pretty good just to many flashes bot sure if its med beg er hi beg.
any ways dude i g2g so pm me if u want to talk i read after school

new100
09-27-2007, 05:00 AM
look at my new sig\/ cool huh? i made the animated pic in that game rage style! it kinda sucks. but do you like it anyway?

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 05:01 AM
i like it anyway

new100
09-27-2007, 05:05 AM
ill get to work on a pivot animation. it will be kinda big like 1200x800 and it will take 250 frames like its some kinda movie.

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 05:07 AM
cool how long will it take hey we have the same join date

new100
09-27-2007, 05:23 AM
its 250 frames it will take a min to finish. yea i know we got the same join date. thanx for knowing

Darc
09-27-2007, 06:24 AM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5836/combopm7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
PLZ? comment and C&C

lol everytime i posted this, another person would post their animation, so people dont even look at mine

new100
09-27-2007, 06:32 AM
um i gotta be offline cause im getting errors ill be back

Edit: back but i made the ending but its not in the movie so its zip file:

4659

please enjoy the movie but click "movie 1" first then "movie 1 end" last

Edit2: PivotMasterXDfan thats not bad

Edit3: man the new speakers are freaking loud! new100? "SHUT THAT SHIT OFF!" -new100
they can hear you! "WHAT?!" -New100
I SAID THEY CANT HEAR YOU! "WHAT!?!" -New100
I SAID... forget it

Naglfar
09-27-2007, 01:26 PM
Could you ...Save it into .gif form? I can't see it that way.

Dark
09-27-2007, 01:49 PM
For the punch and kicks, you should animate him resetting rather than looping it.

ezo
09-27-2007, 02:22 PM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1258/poonchkq8.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Couldn't be arsed to do a flash, so heres my phail at pivot.

Zapo
09-27-2007, 04:42 PM
its just image shack to me... weired any ways heres my new pivot please give CONSTRUCTIVE critisam no saying ur a noob and stuff hates that... any ways im trying to make boarder please tell me if im almost there.
http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omgyo7.gif

SoulEater
09-27-2007, 04:59 PM
http://www.filecram.com/files/584Backflip test.gifHere is my latest animation:

Rank plz =D
Come on, 2 of my animations were ignored.
Once again I ask rank plz =D

Zapo
09-27-2007, 05:03 PM
umm... well maby med beg your problem is the guy flys back to much before he flips

SoulEater
09-27-2007, 05:23 PM
If you look closely you will see that when he flips is when his legs curl up and give him the force 'too' flip. I waz trying to follow physics. Oh well I'll work harder on flips next time =D

Zapo
09-27-2007, 05:26 PM
ok well ill try to make a wall flip now to cause im board...Nvm failed im sorta lazt right now ima do my home work bye

Zsdery
09-27-2007, 05:27 PM
um i gotta be offline cause im getting errors ill be back

Edit: back but i made the ending but its not in the movie so its zip file:

4659

please enjoy the movie but click "movie 1" first then "movie 1 end" last

Edit2: PivotMasterXDfan thats not bad

Edit3: man the new speakers are freaking loud! new100? "SHUT THAT SHIT OFF!" -new100
they can hear you! "WHAT?!" -New100
I SAID THEY CANT HEAR YOU! "WHAT!?!" -New100
I SAID... forget it
**** it i can't watch it because of pivot 3

SoulEater
09-27-2007, 05:31 PM
ok well ill try to make a wall flip now to cause im board...
heh, inspired by my anime?
Hehe, I only got one coment, and btw, what would my rank be now that you saw why the flip was kind of wrong? (not nagging or pressing for rank)

Zapo
09-27-2007, 06:56 PM
yes lol.Well i would say the same any ways my moms trippin lol brb

No Mercy
09-28-2007, 01:03 AM
Its been such a long time since I got on here and even animated. So I really want to get back into animating and get rid of the rust so here is my first anim in like a month.
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/9676/boxbreakoutxy0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/9676/boxbreakoutxy0.8131d1e494.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=517&i=boxbreakoutxy0.gif)
Really stiff and choppy so let me know what you think.
P.S. This is my new stick that I made.

new100
09-28-2007, 04:41 AM
ok iv heared that mine todally sucks. so im gonna have to practice a lot. and i mean it. im gonna post 3 hits of walking next post or this post by edit and i want to know witch one is good

Edit: here they are:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/7999/walk1ys3.gif walk 1
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8094/walk2rh9.gif walk 2
and http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7805/walk3uv5.gif walk 3

Edit 2: to me all 3 of them suck

Gyohdon
09-28-2007, 10:49 AM
No mercy: It looks pretty good, but your problem is that you make the anims tooooo smooth.

New100: please read some tuts on easing walking and running. then you'll be fine =D

kido426
09-28-2007, 12:00 PM
nm,you DO make your anims to smooth,but when the boxes flew down it was good

animator12345
09-28-2007, 12:39 PM
nm I like your stk
this is one of my animations
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7069/jumpcc5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Terix
09-28-2007, 01:21 PM
pretty damn good for a first.just work on easing and stiffness and you'll be fine.

Tabion
09-28-2007, 02:06 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8119/smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.th.gif (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.gif)
My 3rd Pivot (I'mnot showing you 2nd coz its crap)but this one is just a stick dude getting attacked by a bunch of other stick dudes who get ass kicked!
edit: For some reason its very slow on image shack!?

purechaos90
09-28-2007, 02:45 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8119/smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.th.gif (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.gif)
My 3rd Pivot (I'mnot showing you 2nd coz its crap)but this one is just a stick dude getting attacked by a bunch of other stick dudes who get ass kicked!
edit: For some reason its very slow on image shack!?

And this one wasn't crap? I only watched 5 seconds of it and my eyes started to bleed. Look at some tutorials on the basics, k?

Gyohdon
09-28-2007, 03:17 PM
what do ya guys think of this?
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/BackKick.gif

jake1002
09-28-2007, 03:58 PM
Here's ma new anim, don't know if its good or bad, but its a change

Oh btw it looks better when its faster but, i cant change the frame rate for sum reson

fire_fly14
09-28-2007, 04:16 PM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/8119/smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.th.gif (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=smallfighthowtabiongetsrh7.gif)
My 3rd Pivot (I'mnot showing you 2nd coz its crap)but this one is just a stick dude getting attacked by a bunch of other stick dudes who get ass kicked!
edit: For some reason its very slow on image shack!?

you shouldnt be allowed to post in teh begginers section

hell! you shouldnt be allowed to post this was crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT: newest animation havent been here in 2 months because i was busy over summer here you go pls pls pls pls pls rate http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8205/blahblahblahahhhhhxg5.gif

ok i reloaded it without merge lets see what happens

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3774/blahblahblahahhhhhpk6.gif
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/3774/blahblahblahahhhhhpk6.gif

EDIT 2: is something wrong with imageshack it slows every1's animations down INCLUDING MINE!!

and incase u cant see http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8205/blahblahblahahhhhhxg5.gif

animator12345
09-28-2007, 04:53 PM
this is one of my football animations
wat do u think
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/4407/footballhl8.gif (http://imageshack.us)

kido426
09-28-2007, 05:01 PM
that was soccer

Darc
09-28-2007, 05:26 PM
it was okay... the physics were kind of off, it was really choppy there and there, and when he steps back in the middle, it looks really stiff and choppy, also the head on the guy looks retarded and jagged. one last thing, when someone charges for a jump, their feet stay in the same place, it doesnt slide.

off-topic: read the poem in my sig...

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9809/midgetgy8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
here is my animation credz to droidz for midgets

No Mercy
09-28-2007, 05:29 PM
Ok first of all, Image shack doesn't slow my anims down (dont make an excuse cuz you dont know how to work the frame rate).
What we call soccer is what he calls football (different countries have different names)
Fire Fly, yours wasn't any better and don't flame if your a noob, actualy dont flame at all.

Asylum
09-28-2007, 06:10 PM
Ya'll need to learn different cultures; some places it's football, some soccer.

It doesn't slow my animations down btw.


(TIP: Save with pivot3 beta, for me it was less choppy uploading it.)

Darc
09-28-2007, 06:29 PM
Pivot 3 speeds it up, can some one rate and comment my animation?

Asylum
09-28-2007, 06:59 PM
Can I comment? Yes, but I can't rate (I'm a noob.) I liked it, the anim was smooth and I think it wasn't stiff (if my memory serves me well.)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7694/boxix4.gif Can anyone rate?

Darc
09-28-2007, 07:03 PM
low-med beginner, it was kinda stiff and choppy, and not a lot of easing, but the pause-scroll and the bounce on the LOL was nice, if the LOL bounce was bad i would have rated it low beginner.

off topic: is the poem on my sig funny?

Terix
09-28-2007, 07:05 PM
I laughed at your sig.it was....funny I guess.

Darc
09-28-2007, 07:08 PM
thanks, my friend read it from another friend who got it from some web i dont know, any way can you rate or C&C my animation, i really would rather a rank though.

Asylum
09-28-2007, 07:23 PM
Like the poem. For the hell of it I dug out my OLDEST animation I could find. I would ask you to rate it, but I already know the answer. 100% Steaming pile of B.S.

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9386/48211104qf4.gif

Darc
09-28-2007, 07:34 PM
well, for one thing, the feet werent even on the same spot of the ground half the time, stiff choppy, no easing blah blah blah, what else would you expect from your (possibly) first animtion? also, dont take this personally and dont be offended, its your first animtion.
I would show you my oldest animtion too, but, i deleted all of my animations because they all sucked ass.
then i did a lot of tests before i made an actual fight animtion.

Asylum
09-28-2007, 07:48 PM
well, for one thing, the feet werent even on the same spot of the ground half the time, stiff choppy, no easing blah blah blah, what else would you expect from your (possibly) first animtion? also, dont take this personally and dont be offended, its your first animtion.
I would show you my oldest animtion too, but, i deleted all of my animations because they all sucked ass.
then i did a lot of tests before i made an actual fight animtion.

I know, still like to keep to show how I've improoved.


http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/210/pwnt2rp6.gif

Zapo
09-28-2007, 08:20 PM
hey guys umm think im getting closer to boarder but no one commented on this ani yet please rate!!! :)
http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omgyo7.gif

purechaos90
09-28-2007, 08:24 PM
hey guys umm think im getting closer to boarder but no one commented on this ani yet please rate!!! :)
http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omgyo7.gif

I give it med beginner. Smoke was good, movements= ok, Reaction on fall= needs work, First landing/jump= needs work.

Zapo
09-28-2007, 08:26 PM
ok thank you ill try to fix it

StickFollower
09-28-2007, 09:28 PM
guys lets stop the flaming, everyone has there own opinion, just deal with the criticisms.

Dark
09-28-2007, 09:31 PM
There was flaming? When?

SprayPainted
09-28-2007, 09:51 PM
ok iv heared that mine todally sucks. so im gonna have to practice a lot. and i mean it. im gonna post 3 hits of walking next post or this post by edit and i want to know witch one is good

Edit: here they are:
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/7999/walk1ys3.gif walk 1
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8094/walk2rh9.gif walk 2
and http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7805/walk3uv5.gif walk 3

Edit 2: to me all 3 of them suck


Never use any of them.

Dark
09-28-2007, 09:56 PM
Try using easing and making your walk slower to make it look realistic New100.

Darc
09-28-2007, 09:58 PM
Can some PLZ rate my midget animation? ive already posted it like 5 times and i really want a rank for it. I will post it again if you ask.

New100 I strongly suggest you look at many tutorials before you post anything like that again. Please dont take it personally, i know you can do better than those.

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:10 PM
Can you post it again? Lol.

Darc
09-28-2007, 10:12 PM
okay dark, you got the invisible text code wrong. and ill edit this post when i upload it.
this is the code at work, dark
here it is plz rate and also, on the part when he bursts out of the ground, i know it sucked, i didnt know how else to ambush him.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9228/midgethp6.gif (http://imageshack.us)

kidjro
09-28-2007, 10:18 PM
i no this is kinda strange because im not new to this site but how do u post ur vid so that u dont have to go to the web site to see it

Omega
09-28-2007, 10:19 PM
Can I comment? Yes, but I can't rate (I'm a noob.) I liked it, the anim was smooth and I think it wasn't stiff (if my memory serves me well.)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7694/boxix4.gif Can anyone rate?

The beginning was a bit smooth, but then the rest just sucked. His gun just changed with a flash. Make the guy reach into his pocket and then take it out.

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:21 PM
okay dark, you got the invisible text code wrong. and ill edit this post when i upload it.
this is the code at work, dark
here it is plz rate and also, on the part when he bursts out of the ground, i know it sucked, i didnt know how else to ambush him.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9228/midgethp6.gif (http://imageshack.us)


Eh, that's good. I haven't used pivot in while, so I can't rank you. BUT, I do know the basics. For the most part, that look good. But, I'd have to say stiffiness is a probelm for you. And I didn't get the code wrong. What are you talking about? Lol.

And for the ambush, you could've had him fall from the sky, or materialize right behind him.

Darc
09-28-2007, 10:25 PM
oh, you must have edited it when i said you got the code wrong, and also... which part was stiff, or did every part have a little bit of stiffness.

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:28 PM
Well try a few practice animations with some guy unfolding. (You know, like from a crouch position to a standing postion.) That involves a moving of all limbs and joints.

Willsing
09-28-2007, 10:30 PM
To the midget Animation:
i liked it but my only problem is that there is no blood, and that the figures are midgets (no offense to all u midgets out there... lol) blood adds alot to the Animation and makes it look a lot better (in my opinion).

Darc
09-28-2007, 10:32 PM
i no this is kinda strange because im not new to this site but how do u post ur vid so that u dont have to go to the web site to see it
go to imageshack, and when you upload it, scroll down and copy the hotlink for forums (1) and paste it on your post, and itll show up instantly, so only use the clickable links if you dont want everyone to instantly see it.

To the midget Animation:
i liked it but my only problem is that there is no blood, and that the figures are midgets (no offense to all u midgets out there... lol) blood adds alot to the Animation and makes it look a lot better (in my opinion).
okay, ill edit it with a little blood. and also can you rank it, like, high beginner, low beginner, low inter (<-- i doubt that).

kidjro
09-28-2007, 10:35 PM
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9550/earthbenderws6.gif (http://imageshack.us)


please comment on vid and yes i no its glichy

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:36 PM
You use hotlink 1, not embed.

And DX, did you see my advice?

kidjro
09-28-2007, 10:45 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8788/yeahzf2.gif (http://imageshack.us)

i would also like u to rate this one if one of u could =)

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:47 PM
Low-Begginner. You need to work on physics, easing, stiffiness, and .stk making. Another thing; don't use effects yet. You need to focus more on the basics. (God I sound like Demi-Angel/Dragora.)

As for the running...basically the same thing. Make your run have more frames in between it so it looks real. And, your physics on the jump need work. Alot of work.

kidjro
09-28-2007, 10:48 PM
thank u... ill do that

Dark
09-28-2007, 10:50 PM
No problem mate.

Willsing
09-28-2007, 10:55 PM
do i really need 20 posts until i can show my animations? or did i misunderstand?

SprayPainted
09-28-2007, 10:56 PM
No thats just a joke the site pulls on you! Is he this retarded?

Willsing
09-28-2007, 10:58 PM
i meant: is there a way to show ur animations? becuz it says that im not allowed to put URL's is there another way i can show'em or im i gonna have to get 20?

SprayPainted
09-28-2007, 11:00 PM
Post the url with img tags like: URL goes here

But seriously, is it that hard to get 20 post without spamming?

Willsing
09-28-2007, 11:19 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8739/deathchambergio7.gif

ok this is one of my best ones... the first couple of seconds are really really bad but after the first one dies it starts to be ok... comment plz, and rank. thnx

special thnx to Spraypainted! ;)

Dark
09-28-2007, 11:23 PM
Low begginner. You need to work on the basics, but you have potential to be something. And next time, try not to make the animation so big.

Willsing
09-28-2007, 11:25 PM
ok thnx! and can u plz send me a Link to a tut of the Basics or tell me a way to Practice them?

Asylum
09-28-2007, 11:27 PM
ok this is one of my best ones... the first couple of seconds are really really bad but after the first one dies it starts to be ok... comment plz, and rank. thnx

special thnx to Spraypainted! ;)

Dude, for a begginer that's great! I don't use backgrounds like that even after a month! Work on the basics (smooth easing physics walking punching running jumping etc) a little bit and you'll do great!

*EDIT: Go to the pivot tutorial forum (a bit below this) and read more specific stuff there. You should also try and resize it a little, the image is a bit on the large side.*

Willsing
09-28-2007, 11:30 PM
Dude, for a begginer that's great! I don't use backgrounds like that even after a month! Work on the basics (smooth easing physics walking punching running jumping etc) a little bit and you'll do great!
.*

thnx man... :D i Draw well so the Backgrounds are easy for me to make... :D

Asylum
09-28-2007, 11:32 PM
thnx man... :D i Draw well so the Backgrounds are easy for me to make... :D

Cool. :)

I never really had the patience for it, if you'd like check out http://www.droidz.org/ for stk files. Weapons are a pain in the arse to make.

16,000Th post on this thread. ^_^

Dark
09-28-2007, 11:32 PM
I'll tell you. The basics are Easing, physics, stiffiness, and smoothness. I'll explain all of them.

Easing- It means to make something move realistically. Like it starts out slow, speeds up, and slows down again.

Physics- You know, like gravity, how stuff moves. Physics is also important to make the animation realistic. (Unless you're in space.)

Stiffiness- It means that the stick's parts always move when performing an action. For instance, when you punch, don't you use like, your whole body? It doesn't just stand still and one arm moves. You'd look like a retard. Also used in realism.

Smoothness/Fluidness- Does you animation move jerky and spazzes out? That's an example of choppyness. The opposite is smoothness. Make sure the animation has decent spacing.

That's all right now. For tuts, go to official tutorials.

Willsing
09-28-2007, 11:46 PM
to Dark: kk ill try to work on all of them. thnx!

To asylum: thnx, cool site.

BTW what is C&C?? i saw so many people say it and i have no idea what it means..

Dark
09-28-2007, 11:48 PM
It means comment and critisize. And no problem. If you have any more questions on the basics feel free to ask.

†Rocky†
09-29-2007, 12:18 AM
hey...this is my first beam animation on stick page..and my first post... so yeah..someone rate it and tell me how i'm doing like (ex) low nub, hi nub, low beginner, and so on .http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/2960170.htm

Arch-Angel
09-29-2007, 12:20 AM
im sorry. BUT CONGRATULATIONS!!!! That was in fact, the worst beam test i've ever seen. Everyone else is smart enough to know that you should use a line for beams, wow.

SoulEater
09-29-2007, 12:51 AM
Lol, I would rate you low beginner rocky =P
Theres major stiffness, it needs smoothing, and as demi said, beams look better as lines. The only part that wasn't nub was charging the beam, everything else:
Phail.

kingb85
09-29-2007, 01:54 AM
in pivit can u make sounds and type cause i dont now how and witch verson of pivit is the best to use

Willsing
09-29-2007, 02:37 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2186/demonvsmanwithswordgjj2.gif

ok, here i tried some new stuff i saw in this site and some other Sites... im pretty proud of it... so tell me what u think.

(thnx to Capn for his Running Tutorial)

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 02:45 AM
thats bad, dont be proud of it..
please look at tutorials and use only 1 stickman and practice basics mmkey?

and no one commented on mine:
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/BackKick.gif
is it good?

Willsing
09-29-2007, 02:50 AM
y is it bad? becuz it has more than one Figure in it?

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 02:53 AM
okej..
its stiff, choppy and there is no easing.
the movements suck, and the beam..? omg.. -.-'
just do test, believe me, it'll be much better when you do tests and practice basics.

Willsing
09-29-2007, 02:55 AM
i think its very good for someone whos been animating for a week...and btw when u comment on someones video, being an ass doesnt make ur point clearer or u cooler so u may as well stop.

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 02:58 AM
im not being an ass, im commenting your anim. if you cant handle it, dont post animations.

Willsing
09-29-2007, 02:59 AM
thats bad, dont be proud of it..


thats being an ass...

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 03:06 AM
thats the truth now stop whining cuz you made me spam. and if you continue this discussion i can be more of an ass then that, you noob. now do some tests for crying out loud!!!

or just comment this one
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/BackKick.gif

Willsing
09-29-2007, 03:14 AM
lol!!! ill stop this... "you noob" lol... u talk like a lame gamer... and im not whining the one writing "for crying out loud!!!" is u.
and i dont care if u will be an ass, it doesn't offend me in any way. i just said it cuz it just shows that u cant speak politely and u can only express yourself by Cursing and Saying how much the other person sucks.

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 03:23 AM
1) you ARE whining you ****er. youre going on and on about one ****ing comment.

2) telling you you suck is COMMENTING! I was telling what i thought of the ****ing anim!

3) 'you noob', is not something a lame gamer says, its actually me hating you guts.

4) i can express myself without cursing, its just that you pissed me off.

and 5) Goddamnit, you made me say **** for 3 times noob!

Willsing
09-29-2007, 03:28 AM
and im whining? lol look how mad u get!!!

and from what i saw u cant talk without cursing i didnt piss u off and u said "thats bad, dont be proud of it.." and thats being an ass... and it doesnt hurt me i just thikn u couldve said something more helpful and thats y i think ur an ass...

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 03:38 AM
please look at tutorials and use only 1 stickman and practice basics mmkey?

Thats helpfull isn't it?! And I dont think its funny pissing someone off you idiot.
Now if you got something usefull to say, post it. If its smoe whining again just pm me with it ok, cunt?

Now please someone other then willlsing, please comment on these
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/BackKick.gif
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/NewRunTest.gif

Willsing
09-29-2007, 03:42 AM
the running is good... the kick is also cool.

and yeah that is helpful

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 03:44 AM
ok, thank you.

now lets be happy, gay friends:Happy: lol

Willsing
09-29-2007, 03:44 AM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/913/demonvsmanwithswordgdo7.gif
these are some stuff i saw at som Tutorials and animations and tried something... tell me what u think.

Willsing
09-29-2007, 03:45 AM
ok, thank you.

now lets be happy, gay friends:Happy: lol

lol ok fine we will :Smile:

Gyohdon
09-29-2007, 03:55 AM
lol
you can edit your posts btw, at the bottom cuz double posting isnt that cool :P
and you posted the same thing like last, or was that your intention?

Willsing
09-29-2007, 04:09 AM
hmm... i didnt know that... ill try not to Double post from now on thnx

Arch-Angel
09-29-2007, 07:26 AM
stop the double posting, and use grammar.

Knightsy
09-29-2007, 08:00 AM
and work on anitmaion
and do effects
and Learn Basics
and Learn To Smoothen Your Animations
and i said and 6 six times

Darc
09-29-2007, 08:27 AM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2110/midgetyw8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
here is my midget again, i added some blood and a few tremor (screen shaking) effects. PLZ rate, ive gotten enough C&C. credz to droidz for blood.


here it is again, slower though http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7083/midgettesthu4.gif (http://imageshack.us)Plz rate

Knightsy
09-29-2007, 09:22 AM
its ok dont like the laziness of using teleport to get him back to his feet
first combo the goodness(not godness)
blood was ok but wht i dont get is why make it diasappear(bad spelling)
reactions-some good
sum bad. Med maybe higher(ont to good givng ideas of ranks)

Darc
09-29-2007, 09:32 AM
no one can rank anymore... you the third, or fourth, person ive heard say that.

Veyz
09-29-2007, 09:55 AM
This is my very 1st pivot without doing any tutorials or anything so dont b harsh.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z291/Veyz_93/1st.gif

yueo626
09-29-2007, 09:57 AM
why cant anyone rank??:Nooooooo:

Dark
09-29-2007, 10:06 AM
I can rank if I wanted to.

And for the animation, don't post your very 1st one. Otherwise you'll get flamed. But I have to say, you're going in the right direction with smootness and easing. But, you still need work.

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2110/midgetyw8.gif (http://imageshack.us)
here is my midget again, i added some blood and a few tremor (screen shaking) effects. PLZ rate, ive gotten enough C&C. credz to droidz for blood.


here it is again, slower though http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/7083/midgettesthu4.gif (http://imageshack.us)Plz rate

That's a little better. But it's stiff. Lol. High Begginner?

Asylum
09-29-2007, 11:03 AM
This is my very 1st pivot without doing any tutorials or anything so dont b harsh.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z291/Veyz_93/1st.gif

It's better than my first animation, but I still see some really bad probs. He shouldn't stop mid-jump to kick, he should either be falling or going up not floating; his leg shouldn't bend forward PAST the knee.. Ouuchhh.

ezo
09-29-2007, 11:24 AM
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/6686/poonchxv4.gif
Couldn't be arsed to do a flash, so heres my phail at pivot.

Knightsy
09-29-2007, 11:25 AM
Asylum Well Atleast you grasped one thing some begginers havent

Dark
09-29-2007, 11:48 AM
What did Asylum grasp? He didn't do any animations. And ezo, it's a link to imageshack. Fix it.