PDA

View Full Version : Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.


Pages : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 [38] 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133

lothar
07-08-2007, 08:56 PM
the easing isnt that great.
keep working.

Lone Wolf
07-08-2007, 09:05 PM
Um, since I haven't seen you before on the Forums before, what's your rank?
Because if you're below High Beginner, I'm going to wait for another answer...
:Sweating:

bob190
07-08-2007, 09:10 PM
tell how it is i read a tut but its not very good tips plz!

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9283/dunn0zz2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-08

Naglfar
07-08-2007, 09:19 PM
That was pf0's tut, eh? If you've followed it well it won't turn out like that, copy it frame by frame. It's a good tut.

Ns-2
07-08-2007, 09:57 PM
Um, yeahhh... I've been told to add easing so I tried it in this test
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8937/easingtest2ge6.gif


Tell me if the Easing is good or not.

Ahem......It sucked.

Lone Wolf
07-08-2007, 10:06 PM
Ahh, well I'm still low beg. I'll work on it more and post it after I get better.

lothar
07-08-2007, 10:39 PM
that sound like a good idea

Lone Wolf
07-08-2007, 10:55 PM
Lothar, don't post useless comments to increase your post count.

bowstick
07-08-2007, 10:59 PM
i agree lothar dont just do that to get more posts

Bricked
07-08-2007, 11:38 PM
I disagree, stop saying "I agree don't do that to get more posts." to get more posts.

Ns-2
07-08-2007, 11:53 PM
I disagree, stop saying "I agree don't do that to get more posts." to get more posts.

Agreed .

Now post something people instead of spamming the thread. My job

Strills
07-09-2007, 02:00 AM
Soo... here's my latest. Tried out some of my favorite moves.. tell me what you think and what I should work on.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Razhiz/combothingy.gif

Ns-2
07-09-2007, 11:29 AM
Soo... here's my latest. Tried out some of my favorite moves.. tell me what you think and what I should work on.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Razhiz/combothingy.gif

Stiff mostly good the running wasnt good.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 11:55 AM
This is some more i added to my previous animation

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/Best.gif

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 11:56 AM
this is the frist time i used blood

die321
07-09-2007, 02:05 PM
no offense, but work on everything... also the lines arent perfect so fix em >.>

just made a sig stick
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5753/sigstickhk1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
likie?

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 02:43 PM
ah that is tight as hell
can i get it?

die321
07-09-2007, 02:50 PM
yeah sure, lemme pm.

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 02:51 PM
thanks man ty so much

bowstick
07-09-2007, 03:24 PM
heres a water drip thing how is it (the white specks are lazyness on my part, how is the movement) http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/5633/firstwaterdripvq3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09 also i made a thread with a combo on it but nobody is responding and im getting pissed ......lol so i will post it here too http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/811/trycomboed6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09

No Mercy
07-09-2007, 03:25 PM
Awsome water! The combo is ok but the step is off.

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 03:26 PM
on the water drip the masss of water should get smaller every time particles drip off and it was k

Ns-2
07-09-2007, 03:28 PM
The water was meh the combo was ok.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 03:29 PM
yeah the water was pretty nice...you said you wanted somebody to continue with your combo on your other thread..i tried to download but ti didm't work......maybe add a kick to it

bowstick
07-09-2007, 03:37 PM
on the water drip the masss of water should get smaller every time particles drip off and it was kumm are you talking about the drop or the mass above it

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 03:38 PM
the drop and the mass i think should like dissapear then form another mass to make another drop

bowstick
07-09-2007, 03:40 PM
oh i get it i think i will do that but umm what rank do you think i am ? oh but dont count the combo that one sux A LOt

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 03:44 PM
well how bout when the water drips...it goes back flat...and then it loops again....instead of of dripping from the same mass

bowstick
07-09-2007, 03:45 PM
ok ill do that and post it

Ns-2
07-09-2007, 03:45 PM
well how bout when the water drips...it goes back flat...and then it loops again....instead of of dripping from the same mass

>_> that would be physics. Correct physics

DarkSector
07-09-2007, 03:57 PM
Practising my walking and looked a bit boring so i added a kik at the end
http://http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5999/walkingandkikqv8.gif
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5999/walkingandkikqv8.gif
and i done this one through boredem and it was whilst i was was waiting
bit of parkour pretty bad though
http://http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9388/parkoursj1.gif
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/9388/parkoursj1.gif

bowstick
07-09-2007, 04:01 PM
here it is http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/9749/waterloop2cb3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09 better?

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 04:02 PM
bit choppy....and i didnt like the stick guy in the first animation.....but overall...easing is the key...any way get the choppyness out which i have a problem with and your animation would look a lot better

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 04:02 PM
bowstick.....a lot better.....goes all together.....high beg if you ask me

DarkSector
07-09-2007, 04:04 PM
triple posting omg how did you come about that :O:O:O anyways comments on my animation above bowsticks

bowstick
07-09-2007, 04:04 PM
bowstick.....a lot better.....goes all together.....high beg if you ask me
yeah that was a good idea thanks for that.... i hope other people say that im high beginner also but oh well

to darksector i would work on easing thats pretty much it

die321
07-09-2007, 04:05 PM
ok xop, you are right, but i would like to defy people that are either nub/low beg, do not tell people what is wrong with thier animations, or right either. you are still getting the hang of the animation game, and won't be able to tell when anims are good or not. So . . . please . . . STOP. . . For those people that do.

plus, bow, in my eyes . . . it is high, but people have been rearing the ugly head of retarted critisizm. so don't thread it lol.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 04:09 PM
?????die321???....you must mean when i was replying to bostick or drksector.......one)i actually gave good advice on bowstick's animation.....two)It's all an opinion....they can agree or disagree...

bowstick
07-09-2007, 04:10 PM
but i wanna make a thread .............lol

die321
07-09-2007, 04:11 PM
yeah, i've been flamed a lot though, your choice (directed to bow) and xop, yeah to bowstick, i only say that because i've seen a nub be completely wrong and . . . yeah.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 04:14 PM
yeah...i know what you mean.....meaning noobs sometime say stuff that could be completely be wrong....that's why you should always think about what other people are gonna say before you say it

an1g8m0r
07-09-2007, 05:02 PM
I did a Background/kick test...I thought the outcome was ok. Please rate, comment, and give tips...

http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bgtestkickcb0.gif

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 05:07 PM
why did the backgroudn move spastically?

an1g8m0r
07-09-2007, 05:10 PM
Well, at first I was just doing the kick. But I conveniently decided that I wanted the background in, after the kick was done. -.-. I couldn't get the onionskin the same each frame. But what do you think of the kick and background? Tips, comments? Rating?

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 05:15 PM
the background was nice and the kick needs a little more umph to it

an1g8m0r
07-09-2007, 05:16 PM
K, thanks...Anyone else?

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:05 PM
Testing a backflip onto a wall and push off.....prolly a little choppy...

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/Backflip.gif

please.rank or comment and give some advice if you don't mind

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:07 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/7527/pivotanimationtk6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
one of my animations

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:10 PM
when he brings his arms down.....its a bit choppy

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:12 PM
yeah i think i made his arm go down in too short of frames

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:18 PM
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/Backflip.gif

Little Choppy...i thought it was pretty good

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:19 PM
dude right when ur guy puts his arms on the floor they kinda freak out

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:20 PM
yeah ur right...

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:29 PM
any suggestions?

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/2831/mybestanimationgz5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
seizure

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:36 PM
that scares me...........

NeonFlame
07-09-2007, 06:39 PM
ah ****
someone give me inspiration

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:40 PM
it should, but in a way i was serious because that would be a cool animation if it were smoother... but then it would look like he was dancing....DAMN screw the whole seizure idea

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 06:43 PM
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/Backflip.gif


Edited it a little

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 06:56 PM
there ya go http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2407/00000pb4.gif (http://imageshack.us)
H-o-l-y C-r-a-p

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 07:00 PM
???????....lol...

noobzer93
07-09-2007, 07:06 PM
ur animation there is still one flaw When ur guy jumps to the wall, when he hits it it shakes a little, is it supposed to, is it like a special effect:>

die321
07-09-2007, 07:17 PM
umm noobzer, not much of an animation, just some idiot moving, you're med beginner smoothness, but low beginner overall . . . and yeah DUH itz a special effect . . . xop everythings good, just ease a lil bit more and i hate the beginning, you should make the backbone move with the sways and ease the sways more as well, otherwise pretty nice, it ain't stiff after that.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 07:21 PM
what kind of rankin you think

die321
07-09-2007, 07:28 PM
low, possibly med, don't thread it though . . . t'would be suicide 0.0

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 07:35 PM
hey we should come together and make a beginner animation......that would be kind of noobish i guess....but quite funny...like have a big fight with all the different beginners name in it...but that would never happen

Naglfar
07-09-2007, 07:42 PM
Why not? It sounds interesting.

die321
07-09-2007, 07:46 PM
true, i'm workin on a colab wit' bow atm, but i guess we CAN hold it off :Happy:

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 08:12 PM
well...mind if i join in?

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 08:27 PM
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/b2.gif


i Didn't want him to land this one

Naglfar
07-09-2007, 08:35 PM
The arm swing was the worst, use easing. Then it would look good.

die321
07-09-2007, 08:45 PM
exactly what i suggested, when you swing the arms, ease it more, and mostly move his backbone his the arms.

Vervanda
07-09-2007, 08:48 PM
smooth but make he arm swing slower.

SprayPainted
07-09-2007, 09:02 PM
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4329/wrestletakedownzn6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09


Ummm, I dunno, But I did notice the black guy comes up to fast. Wadda yya think?

die321
07-09-2007, 09:08 PM
hey sorrow, what rank are you? because either you're too low a rank to judge an anim, or you havent been on the site for awhile, because back maybe 500 pages that would be smooth, but now it's low beginner.

And, hey cap'n, youre slumping man! just make a bit smoother, and add more style, ya know?

SprayPainted
07-09-2007, 09:14 PM
hey sorrow, what rank are you? because either you're too low a rank to judge an anim, or you havent been on the site for awhile, because back maybe 500 pages that would be smooth, but now it's low beginner.

And, hey cap'n, youre slumping man! just make a bit smoother, and add more style, ya know?



Hmmm......I guess it is a bit boring.

Dark
07-09-2007, 09:25 PM
Capn! What are you doing here? I thought you were better than that.

bob190
07-09-2007, 09:25 PM
rate plz.

Shot at 2007-07-09http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6997/dunn0qt4.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09

Dark
07-09-2007, 09:27 PM
Bob, you're improving. The first one was waay to fast. But the second one wasn't actually that bad. You're good at ball animations.

SprayPainted
07-09-2007, 09:28 PM
Capn! What are you doing here? I thought you were better than that.

Well im not that good.




http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1515/wrestlerjumponir7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09

Better than the last?


rate plz.

Shot at 2007-07-09http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6997/dunn0qt4.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09

Maybe you should try with a stick figure stk.

bob190
07-09-2007, 09:30 PM
Bob, you're improving. The first one was waay to fast. But the second one wasn't actually that bad. You're good at ball animations.

yea that first one was really old dont know why i posted it i took it off tho

and capn if u search around the begs section a bit u'll find some of my animations wit stks

Dark
07-09-2007, 09:35 PM
Capn, wasn't you who made the good blood tut? Or was that a different Capn?

bob190
07-09-2007, 09:39 PM
capn a couple of my animations wit stks one on page 906 and one on page 881 i think, tell me wat u think about them k.

SprayPainted
07-09-2007, 09:40 PM
Capn, wasn't you who made the good blood tut? Or was that a different Capn?

Theres Capn, some other dude. Then theres me.

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 09:42 PM
How about somebody making an animation with a magician putting a man in a box and then making him disappear....and then use an effect to make him appear....i think that would be my new plot

SprayPainted
07-09-2007, 09:52 PM
How about somebody making an animation with a magician putting a man in a box and then making him disappear....and then use an effect to make him appear....i think that would be my new plot


How bout instead of telling us what you think we should do, you do what you think we should do!!!!!!

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 09:54 PM
lol.....ill be sure to do it......look tomorrow...ill even make my own stk magician.......check tomorrow.ok......

grim_reaper 111
07-09-2007, 09:58 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/killingspree.gif

lol i made this for fun took me about 5 min im good with these programs

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 10:00 PM
first..beginners section.....you don't want to be flamed..believe me.....first do that...too choppy.....you need to work on easing....takes time to get basics...i dont even have it all that good....anyway..beginners section if you don't want to get flamed....and called a noob :)

grim_reaper 111
07-09-2007, 10:02 PM
woopsy ill post it there right away

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 10:06 PM
well good night and ill be sure to practice tonight so i can hit that high beginner if you know what i mean.....well cya later....

grim_reaper 111
07-09-2007, 10:09 PM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/killingspree.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/mkstickstyle.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/superkamehameha.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/swordoffleg.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/funny.gif

here is a bunch of movies i made im quite good with programs like pivot

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 10:18 PM
well one....that is really low beginner...no offense.....read on some tutorials..on www.darkdemon.org they have excellant tutors for walking and running....at first i thought the same way you did....i thought it was pretty good....but after watching more animations.....i realized i needed to improve....once again look at the tutorials on darkdemon and you will find the correct way for blood...walking.....and physics and easing....it's a lot of complication....but you have to practice.....anyway...keep working at it

Carteana
07-09-2007, 10:29 PM
ok, im a bit of a nub, and this is my first animation ever (so i expect a

good flaming) and its a bit slow 4 some reason. anyway, give me some feedback and ill cya l8er. mkay:Smile:

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/8889/fight4gifkk0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-09

Carteana
07-09-2007, 10:30 PM
omg its really slow, dont look at it lol

Carteana
07-09-2007, 10:33 PM
im sorry, it looked better when i was making it lol

grim_reaper 111
07-09-2007, 10:36 PM
try speeding it up yeah good idea alltough quite good

xoptikx
07-09-2007, 10:55 PM
when you save as gif......uncheck merge, and make frame rate to 6...it will ook better......look over tutorial at www.darkdemon.org
they have everything you need....practice first and then start posting your animations here

an1g8m0r
07-09-2007, 11:13 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bgtestkickcb0.gif


Anyone rate me?

Gyohdon
07-10-2007, 04:58 AM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/N00b%20Pivot/Survival-1.gif

This is my first pivot movie ever. Please tell me how to improve it.

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/N00b%20Pivot/LA-AD.gif
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/N00b%20Pivot/Snipertest.gif

Here are two others. I made the sniper animation three minutes ago.

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/N00b%20Pivot/WhatGoesAround.gif

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 07:51 AM
The animation you have are choppy...got to www.darkdemon.org for some excellant tutorials......look over that for walkin...running...all the above.......but anyway keep working at and you'll improve.....


http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/Magic.gif

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 08:14 AM
magic was omega stiff that is all

bowstick
07-10-2007, 08:29 AM
yes even though the main this that is moving is the arm dont just move that part you can move other ones to and make him step back or something. just to make it so unstiff.

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 08:38 AM
yeah...i noticed just having them standing there was kind of weird and stiff

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:09 AM
why does the same people always reply in the beginners section...i mean can we at least have some constructive criticizm from some of the inter....instead of waiting every second for a new reply.....i kow its my opinion but still

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:13 AM
I thought i would post this one....was very bored...made it like 3 weeks ago

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/skatefall.gif

DarkSector
07-10-2007, 09:19 AM
lol the blood moves very bad lol not much popint commenting because you just like said very bored that why your posting it
o and yeah stop triple posting.

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:21 AM
yeah....i just learned how to do blood 2 nights ago.....anyway....ill be sure to quit posting....to much to say in too many comments....lol

die321
07-10-2007, 09:32 AM
you know, theres a lot of noobs postin lately and one said he was good with pivot lol he sucks horribly, if you think you're good, get a second opinion first biotchez.

die321
07-10-2007, 09:39 AM
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/killingspree.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/mkstickstyle.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/superkamehameha.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/swordoffleg.gif
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/hotty_1231/funny.gif

here is a bunch of movies i made im quite good with programs like pivot ( I MEAN I SUCK ) lol yeah right how could anyone thing THATS good?................. http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/718481.htm

example, sry for double lol.
Heres a random limerick . . . " If you closely enough in this post, you will see something that you don't . . . if you do what you should, (I knew that you could), you will find the message isnt in quote."
______________________________________________

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:39 AM
good point.....i guess when u really start off and you create something and haven't looked at other animations....u think to yourself....hey that's not that bad.....but after time you see how bad you suck and how much more you need to look at the tutorial....so...once again...think about what you say before you say....or you might get flamed...like me...lol

die321
07-10-2007, 09:45 AM
that link above is for my signature stick i made, took me 2 hours XD.

i dunno what to used, left or right. (left i added backbone armor)

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:50 AM
i got a question...when i download it.....it doesn't come up as a stk. file.......how do i open it after i download.?

die321
07-10-2007, 09:51 AM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7430/sigtesthx3.gif (http://imageshack.us) fixed
and heres the stk
http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/6863456.htm god messed up again, heres backbone armor one.

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:54 AM
looks nice....i like it...you make it?.....i made like a supersayain goku.......but that's pretty cool....any name you have for it..?

die321
07-10-2007, 09:56 AM
Blind Death Guard, and yeah i made, i actually made the base too =D.

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 09:59 AM
niice...i think ill work on one now....

No Mercy
07-10-2007, 10:12 AM
Making signature sticks is hard I think, I've made two of them but they're not very good.

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 10:25 AM
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/mantis.gif

Ideas came along as i was making base.....i thought...why not a bug type...not a fly but a mantis....but i don't think mantis fly but it's a cool name i think.....any other suggestions i can improve on this


http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb17/XoptikX/goku2pic.gif

I made this one too....suppose to be goku....if to u think this is copied i promised i made this....i was trying to find one on droidz but i went ahead and made this....once again....im srry if you think this is copied becuz its not.....just dont want ppl thinking im copying them

bowstick
07-10-2007, 10:45 AM
heres my walk what do yall think http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6770/walkhu0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10 COMMENTS?

diamondduke
07-10-2007, 10:45 AM
look at mine
http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/649/killeroc9.gif (http://imageshack.us)

bowstick
07-10-2007, 10:47 AM
its soo stiff, move each joint a frame

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 10:51 AM
could of made the guy in the back try to attk him while your guy is killing another person

bowstick
07-10-2007, 10:56 AM
heres my walk what do yall think http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6770/walkhu0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10 COMMENTS? COMMENTS PLEASE

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 10:56 AM
bowstick the walk was way too stiff
and
the rest of the anims are not worthy of my comments
lol XD

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 10:57 AM
and LOOK AT MY NEW ANIM !

bowstick
07-10-2007, 10:58 AM
but how are the leg movements

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 10:59 AM
leg movements were good....but i see where the stiffness is at ...in the spine...any way...i thought it was completely smooth with legs and arms

bowstick
07-10-2007, 11:00 AM
mk i will change and post it here

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 11:00 AM
when you walk ur legs extend all the way out then bend but its decent
its like umm i think poutinesalads walk

bowstick
07-10-2007, 11:06 AM
here BETTER? http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7240/walk2yg1.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 11:08 AM
yay...not so stiff....infourtunately for my magic thingy....there is no hope for them...lol

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 11:15 AM
YEAH BUT EXTEND THE LEGS ALL THE WAY
crap i hate it when i forget to turn off caps!

TheAnnoyingNoobFag****
07-10-2007, 11:26 AM
YEAH BUT EXTEND THE LEGS ALL THE WAY
crap i hate it when i forget to turn off caps!

THEN WHY POST IT IN CAPS?!
Go back and edit it, retard.

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 11:35 AM
its a friggin joke dude

Waterboy
07-10-2007, 11:42 AM
YEAH BUT EXTEND THE LEGS ALL THE WAY
crap i hate it when i forget to turn off caps!

Yeah what stagant said. Cant wait to do our collab! *Winks at Bowstick*

Edit: TheMaster, you need to learn what a joke is btw.

Msk
07-10-2007, 11:59 AM
This is my first animation. I made it yesterday.
Tell me what you think.

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8306/footox3.gif

xoptikx
07-10-2007, 12:02 PM
what i said before.....keep practicin and download some different stk figures

die321
07-10-2007, 01:06 PM
and make it less bad . . . and more good, nothing good about it, i can see you're average for a beginner, nothing wrong with horrible first anims is there guys?
just read some tuts, and welcome to SPP!

Lemon
07-10-2007, 02:23 PM
I know i seriously screwed up in the fall. Im just practicing though, doing some short tests and done a front flip.

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u275/leesoftware/Frontflip.gif

die321
07-10-2007, 02:31 PM
umm i know exactly what you did for te jump, and i know you copied frame by frame, so it really screws up the anim at the end. because you copy it frame by frame, it looks good to start, then the ending sucks, no offense, just work on everything.

Lemon
07-10-2007, 02:33 PM
Copied what, frame by frame, what are you talking about

NeonFlame
07-10-2007, 02:35 PM
die=no high beg

bowstick
07-10-2007, 02:58 PM
well heres a jump with cammera movemet thing what do yall thing i need help with movements ........ i think? http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1658/jumpao7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10

die321
07-10-2007, 03:28 PM
nice bow, stagant, huh? whaddya talkin about, i never said i was . . .

and lemon, you copied a jumpt tut frame by frame, i would know, i looked at the tut before...

die321
07-10-2007, 03:51 PM
ummm, why is it an image? . . . save it as a .gif and upload it here (imageshack.us)
lol the only reason this is double is the guy posted just images and deleted it...

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 03:55 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

lol yes i guess ill have to post my second ever hmmmmmm i really sucked on that one

well not ever wat i ment was the second i made iv only made like maybe 12 or 15

die321
07-10-2007, 04:08 PM
yeah no offense, but you sucked on that one as well, everyhtings wrong, look at tuts (you;re runnin me out of critisism, too many noobs lately 0.o)

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:14 PM
fugging around hmmmmm the name sais it all

wat do you think i think its pretty top knotch if you want somthing noobish

altho it would be good in a battle animation

the claw guy needs to wind back wen he grabs and needs to seem like hes doing more

also needs to be in fighting posision because i know a flying jump kick would probably knock his ass over

brask
07-10-2007, 04:23 PM
Ok this is a preview for my new new animation called The War.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x110/br4sk/thewar.gif

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:24 PM
its got some bumps but pretty good theres like no explosions or waves pushing the tank away

also the teliportation/transmition/super fast movment at the end was kindov cheesy

good movement and color usage you didnt half ass the frame work

die321
07-10-2007, 04:26 PM
fugging around hmmmmm the name sais it all

wat do you think i think its pretty top knotch if you want somthing noobish

altho it would be good in a battle animation

the claw guy needs to wind back wen he grabs and needs to seem like hes doing more

also needs to be in fighting posision because i know a flying jump kick would probably knock his ass over
DUDE you don't know what the hell you're tlaking about yet, you still suck, it sounds harsh, but niether of your anims have impressed me enough to say you're close to low beginner, sry, but its all teh truth.

Ok this is a preview for my new new animation called The War.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x110/br4sk/thewar.gif
i like it so far, it's good for you, i can see you're dustin off that pivot.exe there bud lol
though it's still stiff =\

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:29 PM
well thats why its a noob board durrrrrrrr i even admitted to it i dont give a flying
wat you think

also the NAME SAIS IT ALL THE FACT THAT I DIDNT TRY SOULD BE PRETTY OBVIOS

dang i hate typing with my fingure bieng on shift by accident

brask
07-10-2007, 04:31 PM
alright thanx...uh dusin off...? I just got it like a week ago...well thanx for giving comments that don't call me some embarassing name.thankx again uh please rate

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:33 PM
for the apropiate thread 4/5 mine was probably a 1/5 because it wasnt leangthy

die321
07-10-2007, 04:34 PM
umm massamune, its called critisism, you take thigns too seriously, i'm trying to tell you whats wrong iwth the anims, and it's common to hear those things as a noob, i was actually banned on DD by a bully GM for hating my anim, thats why i came here, we all have to start, and it is just an animating program, not your life, so, take it easy, almost every animaiton i get i have the "You suck at animating" Police come on my thread and F me up.

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:36 PM
no you didnt you just said i didnt know wat the hell i was talking about

p.s nether of our animations suck
i know i had to make a new acount because i was spaming due to some jerks like 5 of them gang beating me at insult


why dont you post an animation

die321
07-10-2007, 04:42 PM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/4107/googazy0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
my latest, didn't try real hard, i was rushin.

plus i added like 400 more frames, but pivot beta 3 crashed and i lost it =(

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:46 PM
pretty good not like i was trying to show you up tho 5/5 for movement 4/5 for shooting

die321
07-10-2007, 04:49 PM
yea i didnt like the shooting, woulda fixed but i lost it lol.

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 04:53 PM
pretty good backround maybey there would be some way to add rain but that would take bum f*** for ever


sorry about before just im sick of taking peoples shit and even getting ragged on at the noobs board getting close to snapping

die321
07-10-2007, 05:23 PM
lol, don't worry, take me for example, I joined harch and i'm barely high ebginner.

Torkashi
07-10-2007, 05:26 PM
.......... why wont it let me post my anim?

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 05:28 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm better?

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 05:29 PM
.......... why wont it let me post my anim?

wen you make save the animation it will ask you srink frames do that by like 2 or 3 then make sure its not to long

diamondduke
07-10-2007, 05:32 PM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/7755/closebattlevf5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
i made another one:Happy:

diamondduke
07-10-2007, 05:32 PM
i need to work on running

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 05:33 PM
4/5 for combo ness 3/5 for movment and smoothness how bout mine

pretty good i learnd to make black flash wen big hits happen

on my animation up farther on the thread

/massamune is the name of sephiroths sword

also they started out standing on air in the beggining but still pretty much better than mine

PaperGodzilla
07-10-2007, 05:37 PM
FIGHT!
http://www.imageheap.com/main/pic.php?u=1972TcCdk&i=11963

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 05:41 PM
good for a first

die321
07-10-2007, 06:02 PM
umm if you're low beginner, please don't rate others it bugs me, cause they slip up a lot, and just work on everything paper, read tutorials . . . God the boys are gonna get mad for all this noob activity goin on (as in newbies, new people ot the animating buissness)

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 06:04 PM
well nobody will rate mine iv got nothing to do

my apologies its just i thaught as long as i say nothing offending and plus im not one of those jerks wit onemillion posts that only calls people stupid noobs tecnacly nobody is quallified to rate
shit if they think wat they see is noobish then there calling people who have there stuff on stick
page not the forum are noobs to


i had some ass a few days ago tell me no chatting only post somthing about animation people make up your mind

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 06:04 PM
yah i dont even think i was that good on my first, i diddint even have a grip on walking.

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 06:06 PM
and massamune work on smoothness and stiffness.

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 06:13 PM
finally somone said somthing but seriosly wat do you think rate me i beg you

massamune is the name of sephiroths sword

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 06:23 PM
in ranks id say low begginner the ani itself was average for its maker but watch tuts on easing smoothness and stiffness

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 06:25 PM
thnx for saying somthing tutorials?

Torkashi
07-10-2007, 06:51 PM
http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/681/knight1bk2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
By Trevor881 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/Trevor881) at 2007-07-09

any good? creds to droidz for the sticks

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 06:57 PM
work on physics, choppyness and ( i feel like a broken reacord lol) smoothness

bob190
07-10-2007, 07:07 PM
got the idea from capns sig comments
rate

http://www.picvault.info/images/537048509_dunn0.gif

Jutsu
07-10-2007, 07:26 PM
lol spiky guy got shot 5/5 funnieness 4/5 coolness special affects 3/5:Happy:

bob190
07-10-2007, 07:29 PM
thx mass and could somebody rate me plz .

an1g8m0r
07-10-2007, 08:09 PM
Srry bob, i think thats still low beginner (Although Im prob not one to rate, because Im low beginner myself)...Try adding some blood instead of making him disappear.

http://img352.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spas1sl8.gif

As you can see in the url, I was trying a "spastic" style of fighting. Rate, comment, tips and whatever.

EDIT: Its slightly better...

die321
07-10-2007, 08:14 PM
i'd say med, just stop making him shake all around, ya know?

an1g8m0r
07-10-2007, 08:24 PM
K thanks, Ill fix that, and maybe add background...lol

gunmetal
07-10-2007, 08:29 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7450/guncl9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10this is my 1st attempt at a gun what you thhinkneed mentoor:Happy:

bob190
07-10-2007, 08:29 PM
thxs anger but it was just kinda a joke u know i put it togther in like 10 mins lol

Dark
07-10-2007, 08:36 PM
Gun, you should work on basics first. It was choppy, stiff, and non-realistic. You also messed up on the blood BIG TIME. It should be a darker shade of red. And the last blood splats used, should be in BACK of the stickman. My verdict: Don't use guns yet.

die321
07-10-2007, 08:37 PM
gunmetal, you're still getting to know pivot i see, low beginner (at least it's not nUb lol).

you rushed it too, you made one frame, moving towards the head, next at the head, and next back down, ease
frame one: move a bit
2: lil more
i've explained this too much, can someone else tell him?

an1g8m0r
07-10-2007, 08:54 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spas2kr4.gif

Is the shaking better? I decided not to add a background.


EDIT:Gunmetal, heres a few tips. Look at some tutorials on blood, physics,easing and reactions. The blood needs to kind of spurt out of the wound, not just appear. Most important of all, practice.

Torkashi
07-10-2007, 08:56 PM
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/879/demonvshumanpart1ho7.gif (http://imageshack.us)
By Trevor881 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/Trevor881) at 2007-07-10

like it?
creds to droidz for the sticks

die321
07-10-2007, 09:09 PM
work on just about . . . everything . . .

and an1g8m0r, meh not really, just needs overall improvment i guess.

now someone gimme something to Fvcking animate!!!!

an1g8m0r
07-10-2007, 09:11 PM
Um....make a stickman with the flu... :-0

Thanks for the comments.

bob190
07-10-2007, 09:14 PM
rate plz! and comments appreciated

http://www.picvault.info/images/537048551_dunn0.gif

skr1llaman
07-10-2007, 09:14 PM
Hey wussup guyz, um Here's a Halfway finished Anim. and i'm HEAVILY working on my smoothness, and easing, so can you guys tell me how smooth it is so far, and what i need to work on?
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4080/lilgangstasfightinuz3.gif

Gladly Appreciate Skr1lla

:Smile:

Dark
07-10-2007, 09:16 PM
Hey, Skrilla! You're getting better and better man. I think it's pretty smooth so far, but you need to work on stiffiness and the reactions. How good were you at flipbooks?

Edit: Walking. Don't forget walking.

die321
07-10-2007, 09:17 PM
yeah but, heavily increasing smoofnezz may be what you say, but thats exactly what i did and they ended up sucky cause i ignored all other concept (movements, effects, stiffness) so yea...

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 09:18 PM
thats pretty smooth, just work on walking a bit

bob190
07-10-2007, 09:20 PM
would some one comment on mine plz and possibly rate?

http://www.picvault.info/images/537048551_dunn0.gif

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 09:22 PM
the beam or whatever was overall smooth but as for the stick, its really stiff..i rate it med-low begginner

Dark
07-10-2007, 09:23 PM
Alright, first of all, when the red line comes out of the volcano, make sure it is BEHIND THE STK.

skr1llaman
07-10-2007, 09:24 PM
Hey Dark! long time no see. Thanx for the compliment. And also, I was really good at flip animation. I'd usually do it in my school in a class that was boring, and they'd usually look pretty good. I got better and better, and then i started watching stick movies, and when i first saw the Xiao Xiao, Madness, and, Killing Spree series, i was inspired to do animations, and, here i am!

Skr1lla:Smile:

And die321 i know exactly what you mean

Edit: I will improve my walking also =)
Skr1lla

bob190
07-10-2007, 09:26 PM
Alright, first of all, when the red line comes out of the volcano, make sure it is BEHIND THE STK.

it was
















.

Dark
07-10-2007, 09:26 PM
Hm...Skrilla, do you have a tablet, or good at drawing with a mouse?

And bob, are you sure?

bob190
07-10-2007, 09:27 PM
yes positive just opened pivot and checked

Dark
07-10-2007, 09:28 PM
I posted after you. Post edited.

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 09:29 PM
im going to post a ani that ive been working on in probably a day or two cuz its probably my greatest and it will most likely get me into high begginner

skr1llaman
07-10-2007, 09:29 PM
Im good at drawing with a mouse i guess lol
:Happy:
Skr1lla

Dark
07-10-2007, 09:31 PM
Then I recommend that you use easytoon...it's sorta like flipbooking. Look it up on google.

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 09:34 PM
Then I recommend that you use easytoon...it's sorta like flipbooking. Look it up on google.
but easytoon couldkinda be like pivot if copy and paste the last frame but i dunno i only used it once or twice

skr1llaman
07-10-2007, 09:37 PM
Oh wait, no lol i tried easytoon, and its hard to draw with the mouse on there
:Happy:
Lol

die321
07-10-2007, 09:42 PM
just testin out meh base dude lolz
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5387/basetestbm2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
If it didn't work (http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5387/basetestbm2.gif)

Ns-2
07-10-2007, 09:44 PM
just testin out meh base dude lolz
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5387/basetestbm2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
If it did'nt work (http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5387/basetestbm2.gif)

Smooth but slidy feet.

die321
07-10-2007, 09:46 PM
lol i know, i didn't wanna make it look stiff aorund there so i tried sliding, didn't work out huh?

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 10:46 PM
heres the 1 i finished just now.. what rank am i

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/awesome_048/ghreatestt.gif

die321
07-10-2007, 10:54 PM
nice effects, but work on all teh vital thigns such as running walking you know the drill lol

Rombie
07-10-2007, 10:56 PM
Cool, work on running, and walking. Also stiffness.

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 10:58 PM
what is my rank

die321
07-10-2007, 11:01 PM
unless you get your walking and running fixed still low, sry . . .

see my base stick test? anyone want the base stick for that matter?

awesomeness
07-10-2007, 11:05 PM
oh, well thats alright, i gotta watch more tuts lol getting rusty

Ns-2
07-10-2007, 11:14 PM
lol i know, i didn't wanna make it look stiff aorund there so i tried sliding, didn't work out huh?

Feet are ment to be planted not much movement.

die321
07-10-2007, 11:37 PM
Feet are ment to be planted not much movement.

well the reason he slid to start was he was moving that way, adn second time i did do a bit too much but i fixed that after i posted :Cool:

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 12:30 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm gave it another shot

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 12:31 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm


witch one is better?
on my original (this one) theres no way he hit hard enough as in needs more boom to split a man in half but in my new one (up top) looks like he didnt even get hit need help

advice? also i doubt any ones up and awake at like since im in oregon (west coast) 11 30
rate me insult me watever just keep in mind it title is fugging around no effort was put forth
and calling me a noob does nothing ITS MEANINGLESS

massamune is the name of sephiroths sword

die321
07-11-2007, 12:35 AM
please don't post twice in a row, people consider it spamming, well . . . just stiff and choppy, ah whatever i'll explain easing to ya bud . . .
this is the spacing you should use: first frame |-| just barely move it
|--| thats the second you move it a bit more
|---| third
and on and on
maybe 10th |----------| or whatever
11 |---------| now its slowing down, you get it?
made a new anim, call it base play
lemme post hold up
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7012/baseplaygz9.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 12:42 AM
thnx and i know just i didnt want to make my animation to many killobytes so i took no time on it ultamate rank bigginer

die321
07-11-2007, 12:44 AM
check your inbox (top right, click the blinkin red thing) you'll be pleased lol

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 01:13 AM
getting closer? hmmm pivot showed the guys body as red to
its got choppy spots but all the parts move not like one at a time the fact that he got reduced to a thin line is pretty cool altho at the end it didnt come out right with him becoming whole again
it looks like hes blinking wen he does it but a pretty clean cut wich is wat makes him so choppy
head bounced oppinions as always apreceated i vote 4/5 take of 3/5 clean cut 1/5 ending smoothness just because of that f ing blinking

Gyohdon
07-11-2007, 02:59 AM
pretty good i say! but im a low beginner:heh:
i just made a new animation and im doing second episode right now. You can see it at Youtube, just enter my name, gyohdon and then its the only movie there is :P oh and plz rate and comment on youtube, i'd really appreciate that. oh its not there yet.... i'll say when its there.... lol

Lukey
07-11-2007, 04:16 AM
Ok Heres my latest, It got burried before ^^?

How is it,

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a178/lukeyblades/Speared.gif

I tried camera movemetns and blood for the first time.

Luke~

NeonFlame
07-11-2007, 06:19 AM
the blood was .....
just circles

Waterboy
07-11-2007, 07:31 AM
If you want to do blood just look at my avatar.

Go from lines to circles.

NeonFlame
07-11-2007, 07:41 AM
dude i cant do blood its so gay
well i can do the easy types of blood
but dammit
justin! must mentor me

deathknight9000
07-11-2007, 07:44 AM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8...yoflifeqw2.gif (http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8300/thewayoflifeqw2.gif) here my new one

die321
07-11-2007, 08:09 AM
god i've always dreamed of posting in bahas tut or something on dd and him seeing my sig lol...
call it base play :D http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7012/baseplaygz9.gif (http://imageshack.us)

NeonFlame
07-11-2007, 08:29 AM
o shit stiffness

die321
07-11-2007, 08:44 AM
it was just testin meh base guy, i tink i like him.

NeonFlame
07-11-2007, 08:59 AM
i like it can i get a link?

Gyohdon
07-11-2007, 09:54 AM
pretty good i say! but im a low beginner:heh:
i just made a new animation and im doing second episode right now. You can see it at Youtube, just enter my name, Gyohdon(With capital G!) and then its the only movie there is :P oh and plz rate and comment on youtube, i'd really appreciate that. oh its not there yet.... i'll say when its there.... lol



Jeeeeej! finally it loaded! search for : CaseMan #1 at youtube to find it. plz comment and rate at youtube

Hermit Solmu
07-11-2007, 10:01 AM
what do you guys think of my gun animationhttp://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7450/guncl9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-07-10

This was made by GunMetal.

GunMetal, I would say work on the basics before trying more advanced stuff like this. I do like how you did the blood, and the shots were timed nicely, but I would try things like walking, running, jumping, then go on to falling, flipping, etc. Then incorporate items, like guns.

Then you can combine shooting, falling, and your blood that you did, and have a nicer animation.

Good luck. It's a long road. :D

Ns-2
07-11-2007, 10:04 AM
Jeeeeej! finally it loaded! search for : CaseMan #1 at youtube to find it. plz comment and rate at youtube

No ones ganna go to youtube to watch your animation.

psykofr33k
07-11-2007, 10:07 AM
Here's a crappy kick test.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s28/psykofr33k/KickTest.gif

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 10:14 AM
well i iz back after much sleep......... the kick isnt that crappy tho

Gyohdon
07-11-2007, 10:25 AM
No ones ganna go to youtube to watch your animation.

well if you won't look here it is: http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/Gyohdon/N00b%20Pivot/Caseman1.gif

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 10:28 AM
good dodgeing ness and thnx for the complament on my decapatation animation

psykofr33k
07-11-2007, 10:29 AM
Low Beginner. Work on everything. Try not to do animations with two stickmen. Right now, just work with movements on one stickman. When you get better, then add more stickmen. Also, don't try effects yet. I know it is cool when you just start pivot to do effects, but it doesn't look very good. Keep working.

Jutsu
07-11-2007, 10:31 AM
i didnt get enough ranking on this:Nooooooo:

Kagedanji
07-11-2007, 10:54 AM
I'm really sorry that I'm making you go to Youtube, but that's the only way I can get you to listen to the audio along with the animations. Here's a link to my 3 vids.

/profile?user=XeryuNoKage (copy and paste this in front of "youtube.com" in the adress bar)

It's a series I'm slowly updating. It doesn't really follow a storyline, they're just minute long shorts that use the same characters. Watch the teaser first.

Ns-2
07-11-2007, 10:57 AM
I'm really sorry that I'm making you go to Youtube, but that's the only way I can get you to listen to the audio along with the animations. Here's a link to my 3 vids.

/profile?user=XeryuNoKage (copy and paste this in front of "youtube.com" in the adress bar)

It's a series I'm slowly updating. It doesn't really follow a storyline, they're just minute long shorts that use the same characters. Watch the teaser first.

Flash-Swf it-Imageshack or Photobucket etc.

Kagedanji
07-11-2007, 11:03 AM
Flash-Swf it-Imageshack or Photobucket etc.

Sorry, but I don't have Flash. It's the reason I use Pivot. Is there a way to convert my pivot vid files to swf without having flash?

Ns-2
07-11-2007, 11:06 AM
Sorry, but I don't have Flash. It's the reason I use Pivot. Is there a way to convert my pivot vid files to swf without having flash?

30 day free trial of flash.