PDA

View Full Version : Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.


Pages : 1 2 [3] 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133

violent_creater
10-10-2006, 07:52 PM
well on my com. it says he hit the exat same direction that he flew off of

x~quiz~it
10-10-2006, 07:53 PM
Wait min are u look at mine's or sumone else's

violent_creater
10-10-2006, 07:55 PM
nope im looking at yours

x~quiz~it
10-10-2006, 07:56 PM
oh well idk i figured it'd be crappy newayz lol

violent_creater
10-10-2006, 07:57 PM
lol ok then whatever

x~quiz~it
10-10-2006, 10:29 PM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/3083/numerothresrb7.gifhttp://img226.imageshack.us/img226/3513/numba4ev0.gif http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/3083/numerothresrb7.gif
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6500/mysecondworkpw3.gif
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/934/myworkrr0.gif
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/3728/mypunchingtutresultsrz0.gifhttp://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7695/mysigut4.gif

Sry about the size of this guy's but i didn't want to double post and whatever. its everything ive made so far

lappy74
10-11-2006, 12:47 AM
holy shit dude.....decrease the size....wow 2 big

ngriesedieck
10-11-2006, 06:10 AM
set the decrease frames by 2 or 3.
The last one is the best one.
Try to do something other than effects, maybe like a fight.

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4813/springboardfn5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
springboard fun!

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4804/vcvsngxr3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Me vs. Violent Creater.
i'm tophat.

skoolhobo
10-11-2006, 11:05 AM
check out the anim that took me 2 mis
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9048/lvbmz1.th.gif (http://img254.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lvbmz1.gif)

O yea ngriesedieck, in your top one... when the board comes back up it stops facing up

lappy74
10-11-2006, 11:10 AM
the blood is off dude

Silent_ninja_assassin
10-11-2006, 11:29 AM
blood is of like lappy said and its way to choppy but othervise its good for something that took 2 mins

lappy74
10-11-2006, 11:32 AM
lol i like to take more than 2 mins on ma anis....and am creatin a second part to ma dodge ball ani

x~quiz~it
10-11-2006, 05:09 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/4796/numba2punchzc9.gif
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5004/mynumba1punchrv1.gif Can anyone help me, i need tips on pivot smoothness

lappy74
10-12-2006, 12:55 AM
the shakyness is over the top....

ngriesedieck
10-12-2006, 05:53 AM
Don't do tremors until you have the basics.
That's not bad, work on physics and stiffness.

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 06:13 AM
ok i was thinking on starting a short movie cause i downloaded vehicles, and some weapons from dark demon and i can do some basic blood but what do you guys think?? and any have any ideas for a war movie made in pivot like a name??oh last question how do you put your pivots in a swf file to make say a play button for your pivot movie?http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2403/mymoviewa1.gif^^ my movie so far
Creds to dark demon for the blood windows and city and weapons

power fuse0
10-12-2006, 10:22 AM
wth is witht he floor?

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 10:43 AM
sry about that but i was trying to make a tv lol, what do you think i should do?? leave it there or what

power fuse0
10-12-2006, 12:18 PM
make a filled in white box, put that over the floor, then put the tv over that, but i mean on you animation above lol,

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 01:34 PM
lmao ok whatever, hey can someone one help me decide on my sig. i cant chose out of the three so can u please choose one

kr3w
10-12-2006, 01:45 PM
I like the second one the best

ngriesedieck
10-12-2006, 01:48 PM
None of them

(if I had to choose, I would gouge my eyes out with burning hot pokers.)

(ps- #1)
(pps-go to the sig request forum.)

semistick123
10-12-2006, 01:52 PM
Dude, i made that. I swear.
Dude,This Is NOT A Forum Full Of Very Dumb People.Peter Bone Made That.We Are NOT Dumb.You Think We're Dumb,But Youre Dumb For Trying Us.
So Just Make Your Own ANiamtions.Dont Rip Off Petr Bone's Anis.

ngriesedieck
10-12-2006, 01:58 PM
Don't Capitilize Every Single Fricking Word, Semistick. That Fight Was Like 4 Pages Ago Lol I Am Very Funny Ha Ha Ha.

semistick123
10-12-2006, 02:04 PM
Don't Capitilize Every Single Fricking Word, Semistick. That Fight Was Like 4 Pages Ago Lol I Am Very Funny Ha Ha Ha.
I Capitalize What I Want.I Find It More Civilized.And LOOK.Your Capializing All Words!
Why Do You Make Fun Of People If You End Up Doing It?!?!?!

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 02:07 PM
ok so i have one vote for numba 2 anyone else wanna help me out

skoolhobo
10-12-2006, 02:18 PM
None of them

(if I had to choose, I would gouge my eyes out with burning hot pokers.)

(ps- #1)
(pps-go to the sig request forum.)
lawlz.....

x~quiz~it, you should reallly ask somone to make you a sig like tiddlywinks
by going to the sig request thread that he posted:)

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 02:21 PM
so what u dont like mines lol?? whats twiddldinks thread in pivot, flash, easytoon, general help??

skoolhobo
10-12-2006, 03:09 PM
sig request, yours are fine but there bot really meaning anything for a sig but you do what you want

ngriesedieck
10-12-2006, 03:44 PM
Sig Request is under Main forum.

And Semistick: I am making fun of you when I capitalize everything. Imitation is the sincerest form of insults. And no, it does not make you look more civilized.

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 04:06 PM
And no, it does not make you look more civilized.
^^^ ^^^^lmao how the hell can u be civilized with text size

Kitsune
10-12-2006, 04:55 PM
im sure he knows what hes talking about. civilized people always have sucky sigs. were all barbarians!!!! not xquizit tho.

x~quiz~it
10-12-2006, 05:02 PM
Lmao thnk you for that kitsune guy.

i mean kid lol..............righhhhhttt

violent_creater
10-12-2006, 10:00 PM
does any 1 no how to get the madness guys and guns?

lappy74
10-13-2006, 12:56 AM
nope....but ave been sigged lol yehhhhhhhhhh thanks man

bluemail
10-13-2006, 08:56 AM
When this thread turned to talk about sigs...
Back to the animations!

x~quiz~it
10-13-2006, 01:47 PM
personnally i think only krinkels should anything madness related. but being as u can download and mod the game from madness.com i guess u can go there if u have flash that is and mode the game

violent_creater
10-13-2006, 04:14 PM
you can get them for pivot but i dont know how

lappy74
10-13-2006, 04:16 PM
When this thread turned to talk about sigs...
Back to the animations!

man calm the **** down i just said it....geeeesh....

FallenTaco
10-13-2006, 05:45 PM
i guess people get man whem you say geeeesh

ngriesedieck
10-14-2006, 09:03 AM
http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/8262/fightxn7.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Rate, C&C, etc.

Anarchey
10-14-2006, 09:11 AM
ok ng work on your kicks and punches and then you will have it

cloud wolf
10-14-2006, 01:55 PM
Nice ani SOS but bend the knees more and it will be better

violent_creater
10-14-2006, 02:03 PM
kewl bit slow but for a first thats really good

cloud wolf
10-14-2006, 02:16 PM
kewl bit slow but for a first thats really good

He made it in 10 min

ngriesedieck
10-14-2006, 02:40 PM
Wow, that's really good SOS, excepr for you need to make his knees bend when he ollies.

lappy74
10-14-2006, 02:50 PM
lol son of satan...speed it up and bend the knees

Anarchey
10-14-2006, 03:49 PM
SOS work on fiziks and knee bending and speed

power fuse0
10-14-2006, 04:05 PM
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/3175/runtesttw5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
what about mine:(

ngriesedieck
10-14-2006, 04:17 PM
You're inter, don't sink down to our level PF0.

anyway, that's pretty good.

How should I continue this animation?
It started off as a test.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7783/selftestlz7.gif (http://imageshack.us)

power fuse0
10-14-2006, 05:34 PM
well, start by making the legs tourch the guys aces for at least 2 frame on the kick, and then i reccon you should have him throwing sum 1 in the air and teleporting up hitting them down and then blasting them:)
wow i just gave away a cool idea, thats rare for me:eek:

ngriesedieck
10-14-2006, 06:13 PM
I'm finished.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2373/selftestqx2.gif (http://imageshack.us)
I think it turned out rather well.

What am I?

Low beg, med beg?

Anarchey
10-14-2006, 08:03 PM
i would say low begginer

ThatGuy
10-14-2006, 08:37 PM
yeah, low beginner, and also your sticks arent very good at all, the proportions are completely wrong looking, if you cant make them better just use one from someone else and give cred.

Anarchey
10-15-2006, 09:11 AM
don't use stks like that sos just use big sticks insted of ones people make and then you will have it.

lappy74
10-16-2006, 02:13 PM
its choppy plus the physics are off just work on it ok

molestargazer
10-17-2006, 08:31 AM
Wow.. it's been absolutely ages since I used Pivot - I had to re-download it.

Anyway, now I've made a tiny little toon about someone being pushed off a cliff. I think it's OK, but I'd like some hints and tips.
Oops - yes, I used the default stick :S

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7706/clifffallmy1.gif

Stick bob
10-17-2006, 11:23 AM
well here it is i suppose. I think its good (for me)

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k311/Stick_Bob/obstacle.gif

ngriesedieck
10-17-2006, 03:12 PM
Mole - Work on the blood. The fall is decent, it's a little choppy though. Nice work. What about gravity?

Stick Bob - Look at tutorials. I recommend Bahamut's tutorial on the darkdemon.org forums. Walking, choppyness, fighting, and stiffness all need work. Take more time to do your animations. Try moving all of the stickman's parts in every frame.

violent_creater
10-17-2006, 06:21 PM
Wow.. it's been absolutely ages since I used Pivot - I had to re-download it.

Anyway, now I've made a tiny little toon about someone being pushed off a cliff. I think it's OK, but I'd like some hints and tips.
Oops - yes, I used the default stick :S

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7706/clifffallmy1.gif

wow that blood sucks XD umm it is kinda choppy stick bob work on runing and the punch is off choppy and he folds up and flyes? anyway just work on those and it would look really good and make it more action

bluemail
10-18-2006, 10:07 AM
There are two of my animations, I think they are my best shorts yet.

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6923/stickavatargl8.gif
That was a particle and lighting test that was used to be my avatar, but animated aren't allowed.

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2961/airkicknp2.gif
That short was for testing an air kick, camera and tremor.

Rate these plz!

molestargazer
10-18-2006, 10:30 AM
Bluemail - those look brilliant, amazing to me - but then I'm a noob :D

Any hints on how to improve the blood? I'm going to try and make it again.

molestargazer
10-18-2006, 10:52 AM
OK.. here's the second one, minus the blood. I've still used the default stick but I've tried to make it less choppy.

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/4263/clifffall2go5.gif

EDIT: OK, this looks really awful hosted. Ah well.

bluemail
10-18-2006, 01:11 PM
OK.. here's the second one, minus the blood. I've still used the default stick but I've tried to make it less choppy.

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/4263/clifffall2go5.gif

EDIT: OK, this looks really awful hosted. Ah well.

Looks better than your first one, fall is good, but the punch looks wrong. Use some time working on it. Try getting your stickman pull the hand back first and then punch straight. Go on, try it. Then you may get some ideas to improve it more.
And the cliff changes place a little!

Überschall
10-18-2006, 01:26 PM
i agree with stickdominator 2 hours thats good! anyway check this out it has a sucky self showdow and thats what it's called anyway take a look http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3291549 o check this out two http://www.putfile.com/pic.php?img=3286687 <--------------- my friend made this one but it has the default stick :(

They are choppy, and the walking wasn't good, also you should work on speed modulation, it was way too slow sometimes especially the 2. one...
I could try tell you all the mistakes you made and how to make it right but you should just take a look at some tuts, coz it's easyer....

EDIT: Oh the 2. wasn't yours....but there are the same mistakes in it.Look at tuts they really do help.

molestargazer
10-18-2006, 01:45 PM
Looks better than your first one, fall is good, but the punch looks wrong. Use some time working on it. Try getting your stickman pull the hand back first and then punch straight. Go on, try it. Then you may get some ideas to improve it more.
And the cliff changes place a little!

Thanks :D

I'll spend a bit more time on the punches - although it was meant to be a push. It would look better with a punch though.

Aah.. the cliff.. I didn't notice that! It must have been from when I was fiddling about - I was trying to move the stickman around and I must've clicked the cliff by mistake. Version 3 coming up sometime soon! Although I might have to go.

Thank you :cool:

EDIT: Here's Version 3. To be honest, I really don't like thie version. I think the punch was OK, but the rest of it seems far too choppy and he flips too much.

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/2126/clifffall3ac1.gif

Paperclip
10-18-2006, 03:17 PM
I have to agree with you on that... also... i'm pretty sure no one in real life would fall like that. Try to imagine how you would fall if you did that. Your first impact off the wall would bounce you father away from the wall. If you hit the wall a second time you might just ride the wall all the way down.

violent_creater
10-18-2006, 04:16 PM
They are choppy, and the walking wasn't good, also you should work on speed modulation, it was way too slow sometimes especially the 2. one...
I could try tell you all the mistakes you made and how to make it right but you should just take a look at some tuts, coz it's easyer....

EDIT: Oh the 2. wasn't yours....but there are the same mistakes in it.Look at tuts they really do help.
dude thats like so long ago ive gottan better now i still need to work on stuff but ive gottan better

ngriesedieck
10-18-2006, 06:57 PM
Okay.
Mole- Gravity. He falls the same speed the whole time.

Violent- Choppy and movements are bad, unrealistic in terms of punching. Add a floor or something, and look at some more tuts.

violent_creater
10-18-2006, 09:16 PM
i did say it was old but whatever i dont plan on editing it i just make better new animations please dont comment on those ones agian and how do you get pivot 3?

x~quiz~it
10-18-2006, 10:14 PM
Ok here is a movie i am doing i plan on puttin it in flash when i get done with it to add music but newayz ive choosen a name for my stick which is Viral.
Newayz i know that the text is to fast and right now i dont have time to fix it but if neone can help me with the tv effect it'd be great as its supposed to be the flipping of a channel. And im sure most of u have seen my work like Rusender and kitsune kid and death wish and it's pretty crappy right now so if any of you guys have any more tips on smoothness, or recoil from gunshots please tell me know so i can practice it before i put it in my lil film cause i really wanna start practicing some nore advanced stuff like blood, and beams, Explosions. etc...
Edit: oh and credits to droidz for the stuff im utilizing for this lil project
>>
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9197/mynewmoviejw7.gif

bluemail
10-19-2006, 02:14 AM
Thanks :D

I'll spend a bit more time on the punches - although it was meant to be a push. It would look better with a punch though.

Aah.. the cliff.. I didn't notice that! It must have been from when I was fiddling about - I was trying to move the stickman around and I must've clicked the cliff by mistake. Version 3 coming up sometime soon! Although I might have to go.

Thank you :cool:

EDIT: Here's Version 3. To be honest, I really don't like thie version. I think the punch was OK, but the rest of it seems far too choppy and he flips too much.

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/2126/clifffall3ac1.gif
I think the fall in your last version was better, is that the same animation? Next try to get your punching stickman crouch with his feet a little. And if you wanted the blood, put some on the cliff at the same place where the falling stickman hits the wall. You should know that, but I said it.

And to the animations on top of the page, they are choppy, and the second one is way too slow.

ngriesedieck
10-19-2006, 05:26 AM
XQZ, I reccomend you make it faster in terms of the flicking off. Text needs to go slower.

Überschall
10-19-2006, 05:28 AM
EDIT: Here's Version 3. To be honest, I really don't like thie version. I think the punch was OK, but the rest of it seems far too choppy and he flips too much.

http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/2126/clifffall3ac1.gif
It's way better than the other tryes but the fall still lookes odd. The punch became realistic, but i think it lookes kinda slow to me.

molestargazer
10-19-2006, 09:21 AM
Well.. here we go.. Version 4!!

I've tried to:
- Make the puncher fade in and fade out after watching the '1337' tutorial recently posted :p
- Improve the punch by making it a bit quicker
- Put gravity in
- Make the fall more realistic.

I think it may still be a bit too jerky on the fall, though :(

I've not put blood in, as I'm not sure how. Would it be just as I did it before, with more blood coming out and with a smear being left on the cliff?

Comments please.

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/1457/clifffall4zo9.gif

Thanks!
Mole

Gongiar
10-19-2006, 09:34 AM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/1536/birdbu8.gifso you kno i made the bird myself

power fuse0
10-19-2006, 09:43 AM
lol, thats taken my breath away, i love it man
for the idea

Gongiar
10-19-2006, 09:44 AM
is that sarcasm or am i getting better

molestargazer
10-19-2006, 11:53 AM
So I was just playing around, and I came up with this. Yes, the blood's awful. Yes, it's jerky. Yes, the 'owned' text doesn't come up for long enough.

But, meh, I don't care :P
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7951/ownedrr4.gif

bluemail
10-19-2006, 01:07 PM
Looks bad, really. And the blood is jerky. The version 4 of falling animation is better than this.
And for the falling, the fall looks better, but its too slow. Try getting it faster. And the punch was very quick. There is something odd in the landing of the punching stickman... I think slowing it down, and getting him crouch more would help it.

molestargazer
10-19-2006, 01:54 PM
Bah!
To be honest, I don't think I have the heart to make Version 5. I'm going to have to come up with a new idea that will test my skills in another way..

Thanks tons for the comments though - they really help.

power fuse0
10-19-2006, 04:20 PM
is that sarcasm or am i getting better
getting a little better

bladefps
10-19-2006, 07:52 PM
dang i suck at piv me newb :)

x~quiz~it
10-19-2006, 08:08 PM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/116/mynewmoviekg7.gif

A new piv i made from a tut and yes i know its a loop,

bladefps
10-19-2006, 08:14 PM
good good good way better then i could do

x~quiz~it
10-19-2006, 08:47 PM
I have a question guys, when your mking the floor move to signify impact should the sticks move with the floor or just stay in the same place like my anim up there

led zep
10-19-2006, 09:43 PM
They should stay with the floor, it looks weird if they don't.

LN3uq
10-19-2006, 09:49 PM
Yeah, otherwise they would kind of float around in the air. Which doesn't generally happen, as far as I know.

Gongiar
10-19-2006, 11:54 PM
and otherwise it dosn't look like he is putting much impact on the punch

x~quiz~it
10-20-2006, 12:28 AM
i know for god sake's lol just tell me how i can mk it look like hes getting hit harder

bluemail
10-20-2006, 12:43 AM
As said, when the stickman is punched, move the floor down and the stickmen with it. Then it looks better.

Überschall
10-20-2006, 05:14 AM
Well.. here we go.. Version 4!!

I've tried to:
- Make the puncher fade in and fade out after watching the '1337' tutorial recently posted :p
- Improve the punch by making it a bit quicker
- Put gravity in
- Make the fall more realistic.

I think it may still be a bit too jerky on the fall, though :(

I've not put blood in, as I'm not sure how. Would it be just as I did it before, with more blood coming out and with a smear being left on the cliff?

Comments please.



Thanks!
Mole



You really messed the gravity up. It's way too week. And the way that puncher comes falling in looks...weird.The punch was better in version 3 and as I said the fall looks unrealistic.The longer he falls,the more speed he has to gain.

cloud wolf
10-20-2006, 07:18 AM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6197/rocketshiptm9.gif (http://imageshack.us)

yo heres a simple ani i made is it any good?:rolleyes:

Bullit
10-20-2006, 08:05 AM
^ You need to make your animations a lot smoother, and not so choppy. You'll soon improve if you keep looking at tutorials and such.

cloud wolf
10-20-2006, 08:08 AM
OK thanx ill do that now

lappy74
10-20-2006, 08:31 AM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1548/eviles2.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Gongiar
10-20-2006, 08:37 AM
wow lappy that just made me gasp i have just never seen anything so smoot , so thrilling , so so vet like , its simply amazing

Deathwish
10-20-2006, 08:52 AM
lappy ftw

post count +1

molestargazer
10-20-2006, 09:12 AM
Here's one I made it school.. I don't think it looks that bad. I've tried to put lots of punches in (uppercuts) - so it doesn't look too bad.

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/9583/powertothelittlepeoplevz3.gif

@Lappy - OMGZORZ thats awesome!!!!111 hehee.

Gongiar
10-20-2006, 09:27 AM
dam choppy and well werid it looks very unrealisit but keep trying like i am cos im like the worst animatior in . . . the world

molestargazer
10-20-2006, 09:38 AM
Mine always seem choppy when I put them into .gif.. in Pivot it was fine, albeit a bit fast.

Gongiar
10-20-2006, 09:40 AM
Mine always seem choppy when I put them into .gif.. in Pivot it was fine, albeit a bit fast.great excuse but don blame the gif

molestargazer
10-20-2006, 10:20 AM
It wasn't an excuse. It was an explanation.

ngriesedieck
10-20-2006, 01:20 PM
What settings do you have for the gif?

molestargazer
10-20-2006, 01:44 PM
The default ones.

ngriesedieck
10-20-2006, 03:07 PM
Wrong. You need to uncheck merge, shrink frames by 1/2, and Framedelay by 6

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 03:36 AM
I was wondering which sword was the best and i made that last one, Creds to sebasabi.com for the fist two swords i think it was actually azam who made them. and rate my sig stick

Dragonkof
10-21-2006, 04:05 AM
did you make that person stk?

is cool, i like my jay stk.....

molestargazer
10-21-2006, 04:19 AM
I'm not sure if it looks right with the shrinking frames by 1/2.

I made 2 - one with 1/2, and one without. Tell me which you think is better. And of course, comments on the animation itself'd be awesome :D

LARGE:
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4369/thewallsqy3.gif

SMALL:
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6544/thewallssmallbt9.gif

bluemail
10-21-2006, 07:08 AM
The smaller is better, because its quicker and that makes it look smoother.
And comments for the animation itself, it is funny and mostly goodlooking, but the walk to the wall looks wrong.

And for X~Quiz~it, I think the last one looks the best. That what you did yourself. Good work!

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 07:29 AM
me and ma bro like the last sword x~quiz~it so good Stk making

ngriesedieck
10-21-2006, 07:46 AM
Here's a couple of my latest ones.

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6346/kicklooophc5.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Kickloop.

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9282/punchthangdf9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Punch thing.
(yes, the camera scrolls back.)

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 08:42 AM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8663/headcrusher2ut7.gif (http://imageshack.us)

well Moles Animation Inspired me to try a style like his so here it is

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 08:45 AM
thanks guys and who's your brother cloud??

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 08:49 AM
he's not on here he doesnt animate but he says your a legend

lappy74
10-21-2006, 09:57 AM
sorry yous guys about that some little ****er hackedinto ma acccount and put there ani on and my pc is ****ed just now so it couldn't have been me anyway.

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 10:00 AM
no its kl Lappy so Get on Windows Live Messenger

ka@$
10-21-2006, 10:01 AM
omfg I suck, way rusty
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4056/bloodskateoa4.gif
(and no, it's not running, it's an attempt at skippin :P)

violent_creater
10-21-2006, 10:23 AM
ya thats not to good smooth and that blood rocks but there wouldnt be that much blood

ka@$
10-21-2006, 11:57 AM
ya thats not to good smooth and that blood rocks but there wouldnt be that much blood
hell there whould, he sliding over the ground 0_o

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 12:42 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/1734/run1gifvs3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Can someone plz rate my running style and does any1 no where to get a girl stk??:o :confused:

Anarchey
10-21-2006, 02:11 PM
no cloud just look at running tuts.

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 02:14 PM
ok :(
Stupid 15 charecter rules

Anarchey
10-21-2006, 02:15 PM
if you need help I will be happy to show you an easy running style

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 02:35 PM
OK that would be helpful

Anarchey
10-21-2006, 02:42 PM
ok give me a minute or two this shouldn't be to hard.

Anarchey
10-21-2006, 02:53 PM
ok here you go its not my best but it should help.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n320/flair2006/Run.gif

molestargazer
10-21-2006, 03:00 PM
I decided to base my next animation on the fabulous one I say on stickpage - Animator VS Animation.

I got it quite smooth - comments would be appreciated, as always :D

http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/5995/animatorvsanimationos5.gif

lappy74
10-21-2006, 03:00 PM
shhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee e

cloud wolf
10-21-2006, 03:00 PM
ok thank you very much

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 03:01 PM
shhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee e
Are you on pot?
I thought I WAS watching animatore vs animation. Your better than bahamut. Teach me your skills.

molestargazer
10-21-2006, 03:03 PM
shhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee e

You mean my latest one?

Maybe something slightly more constructive would be good :cool:

ngriesedieck
10-21-2006, 03:12 PM
Lappy, that's called spam.
Grubber, that's called not funny.
How about something more constructive?
The movements need to be more realistic. You need another stick. Go to Droidz.org and download one.

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2902/kicklooopfv6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Decent?

molestargazer
10-21-2006, 03:22 PM
Go to Droidz.org and download one.

That's amazing!

I'm definitely going to use some of those sticks tomorrow. The guns are neat too :D

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 05:28 PM
.
Grubber, that's called not funny.

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2902/kicklooopfv6.gif[/IMG][/URL]
Decent?

Your saying I was joking? Ur an Ass. I was serious. He's awsome your not.

*RUNS AWAY CRYING*

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 05:35 PM
here's my newest movie and some stks i did, If you want one ill be glad to hand some of them over, but a lil credit would be nice:

Movie> http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9286/mynewestmovievj6.gif

Sticks> http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4622/carppysticksqr1.gif

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 06:00 PM
The guy falls weird and he doesn't land straight, nor does he fall fast.

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 06:11 PM
yea when the blade hits the other guy he does a flip in the air and kicks the sword back up, But i mean i havent got physics down so give me a break

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 06:15 PM
It also was choppy, try particles for the blood, that will be a good effect and you would learn some particles= better blood.

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 06:47 PM
i dont know how to do particles

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 06:48 PM
Tiny sticks, watch justins tut or bahamats tut.

x~quiz~it
10-21-2006, 06:56 PM
Gimmie the link to justins please

Dragonkof
10-21-2006, 06:58 PM
ok, get a small stk, and make it move and shrink......

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 07:07 PM
Gimmie the link to justins please
Take a look at these.
http://forums.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=10350
http://www.forums.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=886

Dragonkof
10-21-2006, 07:27 PM
hey, can i have a stk?

its the one on the bottom row, second from the left

Sunder Forge
10-21-2006, 07:53 PM
hey, can i have a stk?

its the one on the bottom row, second from the left
Why not make a stick like it but different colours and weapons and hair and size so it's your custom.

Dragonkof
10-21-2006, 08:00 PM
hmmmm... good idea! hehehe........

*runs away to get a notepad for stk ideas*
*hits head*
*goes to hospital*
*dies*

ngriesedieck
10-22-2006, 11:04 AM
YEEEEY.
I like this one.

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6599/greenvsallpk6.gif (http://imageshack.us)

FallenTaco
10-22-2006, 01:37 PM
woulnt the arms go besides some where eles besides between the legs....

doomfan1
10-22-2006, 02:02 PM
ta da! hope you like it!

FallenTaco
10-22-2006, 03:26 PM
1.Need a bulit

2.need to make the blood go out no just stay in one place

3.hi

ngriesedieck
10-22-2006, 03:42 PM
I suppose they could. Anything else you'd like to point out?

x~quiz~it
10-22-2006, 03:51 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6881/runninguz0.gif

My first try at running

and my first try at a punching combo

http://img321.imageshack.us/img321/2458/punchingtuthi8.gif

FallenTaco
10-22-2006, 06:53 PM
Its jerky..but I LOVE IT

Überschall
10-22-2006, 07:21 PM
ta da! hope you like it!


Lol that was nothing...sry to say that but it wasnt even a second long and the blood looked weird.Make it waaaaaaayyyyyyyyy longer

Gongiar
10-23-2006, 01:14 AM
the top one because he moves the bottom one im guessing is not moving because of constipation

x~quiz~it
10-23-2006, 02:36 AM
?? wtf i didnt have the first one in a still animation that's why he's moving the second one i havent animated with yet

Gongiar
10-23-2006, 03:26 AM
ohhhhhhhh lol still like top one

ka@$
10-23-2006, 03:28 AM
2nd one has a striking resemblance of justin's stick...

x~quiz~it
10-23-2006, 04:06 AM
yea i know u told me bro lol

lappy74
10-23-2006, 06:43 AM
Lappy, that's called spam.
Grubber, that's called not funny.
How about something more constructive?
The movements need to be more realistic. You need another stick. Go to Droidz.org and download one.

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2902/kicklooopfv6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
Decent?
man i didnt write that shit it was this ****er who keeeps on hackin into ma account....****....sorry yous guys

x~quiz~it
10-23-2006, 06:58 AM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6109/anothergoodonekf1.gif

My best one yet, tell me what level i am ( low begginer still :o )

ngriesedieck
10-23-2006, 01:02 PM
That is. The first part was good, the beam could use work and particles and the punches need to take longer than 2 frames and the feet need to STEP, not just wiggle.

FallenTaco
10-23-2006, 01:09 PM
with the beam make it get smaller and smaller by each frame by 25 to it would look better....

ngriesedieck
10-23-2006, 02:23 PM
Parkour is okay. Needs physics and running/walking skills.

SOSvWhatever is Smooth, but needs physics.

ThatGuy
10-23-2006, 02:43 PM
Your physics are bad and walking/running is also, move upped body along with lower body when doin those to movements, also some movements look akward and dont have enough of a preload with them.
find some good walking tuts, theyll help a lot

Mephisto
10-23-2006, 03:04 PM
Yo Satan give that stick a backbone and start posting in the normal section for more critisism.

ka@$
10-23-2006, 03:10 PM
whats the normal section?????
outside the beginners thread... making your own thread for ppl to rate you :P

Mephisto
10-23-2006, 03:18 PM
go to the pivot section and make a thread... click new thread...and post your animations.

ngriesedieck
10-24-2006, 02:57 PM
I KNEW I should have started doing that.

hobobill235
10-24-2006, 06:45 PM
dude, the file saver made it choppy...

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7393/funnyzc2.gif

ngriesedieck
10-25-2006, 01:04 PM
That's decent to say the least. The boobs suck.
And the knockback position is strange.

Überschall
10-25-2006, 02:19 PM
Yeah the knockback is weird.
@ Son of Satan: Change your avatar you sick bastard

x~quiz~it
10-25-2006, 07:31 PM
okay here's my latest, it's basically a sorta test to get my running and walking stlye down, btw im not gonna do that style running as i said it's a test. and there's also a punch thing in there to try to get a quick punch combo. i fail lol. well i personally am seeing small improvments in my anims but it's up to you guy's to decide so here ya go.

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/839/areallygoodonezj8.gif

Überschall
10-25-2006, 07:49 PM
lol that made me laugh a little....
The walking was already odd, but the running really hit the fan! He has to get the leg straight to really push him off the ground so the steps that guy took are waaaaaaaayy too small. Always ask yourself the question:
Would I run like that?
Try it and you'll look really weird.

The punches didnt have enough power.
Thats it.
And it was choppy.

Work on the running first.Thats a basic move,you'll need it.

x~quiz~it
10-25-2006, 07:55 PM
LMAO!! i know the running sucks but i thoughtthe punching was pretty good for a begginer but neway ill work on my walkin first then running then when all that's down ill do combo's

Überschall
10-26-2006, 05:41 AM
Yeah for a beginner not bad but it just didn't have enough power.
And the reactions of the blue guy when he gets punched are wrong.
But just keep on working and you'll get better.

x~quiz~it
10-26-2006, 09:20 AM
here any one want these sticks for a war anim or sumthing??

i mked them, yay

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/1262/base2to2.gif

faded
10-26-2006, 10:45 PM
this is my first or secong. i put time into it for a competition... i didnt win but hey its pretty good. BTW im not total noobie (im Toxik on SP some have seen me)


http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9609/trampolineaccidentam7.th.gif (http://img85.imageshack.us/my.php?image=trampolineaccidentam7.gif)

lappy74
10-27-2006, 12:51 AM
the blood wasnt really that good plus work on physics....

goreysticks
10-27-2006, 05:33 AM
were is pivot??

Dragonkof
10-27-2006, 05:37 AM
what do you mean, where is pivot?

your in the pivot section!!

if you want to download.... google it

x~quiz~it
10-27-2006, 12:07 PM
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/3257/beamandparticlesov1.gif
And yes i know about the first punch

My try at beams and particles

ngriesedieck
10-27-2006, 01:05 PM
Particles are okay. The beam isn't that good, but it's okay. The feet movements are strange, and it's stiff.

x~quiz~it
10-27-2006, 01:31 PM
Anyone else wanna comment cause i need advice so i can fix this

FallenTaco
10-27-2006, 01:32 PM
there pause in the feet they some times stay at one stop for a while and the flip look kinda low...i am not for sure on the flip

x~quiz~it
10-27-2006, 01:34 PM
ok thanks ill try and fix it then repost it see if its any better

Doomdooer
10-27-2006, 01:38 PM
add more... mass. to the charge. you need some sort of ball for the enrgy to flow into before it is released in the beam.

cloud wolf
10-27-2006, 02:35 PM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/2/sigsticktestec2.gif (http://imageshack.us) How r these Stk's r they ok?

I DONT CARE ABOUT THE ANI just to let you know :)

Überschall
10-27-2006, 02:50 PM
Sticks are okay, not that kinda sticks I like, cuz I like that simple Xiao Xiao style but the're ok.Looks good

FallenTaco
10-27-2006, 03:25 PM
ok..but one thing bout ani you need a ground

cloud wolf
10-28-2006, 03:44 AM
i no i just want the sticks rated

fataljoe
10-28-2006, 10:24 AM
my first decent one http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8386/hackerssuckql0.gif im only 11 by the way :) ohj ye and go here after http://www.mindistortion.net/iwantyoursoul/?i_am=FATALJoe

Überschall
10-28-2006, 12:01 PM
Damn you mindcathcer.
The anim was waaaaaaaayyyyyyy too fast and choppy. The pistol looked weird.
And it was stiff.
Just look at tuts and keep on trying ;)

FallenTaco
10-31-2006, 08:01 AM
Damn you mindcathcer.
The anim was waaaaaaaayyyyyyy too fast and choppy. The pistol looked weird.
And it was stiff.
Just look at tuts and keep on trying ;)

like desert eagle to fast....and to chopy with each anim i would take my time but some of my i dont...maybe i should learn form me

suicidal
11-02-2006, 12:52 PM
ehm... these are my first animations i ever made...
Can any1 plz tell me what to make better, what is good blablabla.. stuff like that. ty

http://www.myuploadsite.com/image/7570.jpeg
http://www.myuploadsite.com/image/7571.jpeg

that's it :-)

cloud wolf
11-02-2006, 01:47 PM
WAY too choppy, add more frames look at tuts and welcome to spp

FallenTaco
11-02-2006, 02:50 PM
umm welcome to spp

Dragonkof
11-03-2006, 12:45 AM
ok, nice try on effects..... add more frames.... small movements.... then a big movemtn then lots of little movements......

lappy74
11-03-2006, 12:53 AM
WAY too choppy, add more frames look at tuts and welcome to spp
dont mean to be mean but that guys anis were better than yours....but they are very choppy but ok....keeep at it.

stickboy96
11-03-2006, 01:49 PM
heres my animation http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1248/battlegiftb3.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Anarchey
11-03-2006, 02:49 PM
yes very choppeh you have potential just look at tuts

semistick123
11-03-2006, 07:43 PM
heres my animation http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/1248/battlegiftb3.gif (http://imageshack.us)
If I May Say,WHAT IN GODS NAME IS THAT!

goreysticks
11-03-2006, 07:46 PM
that was...ehh...okay for a new person(im new myself but ive made much more than 1 and im a little better)

just read tuts and practice

Überschall
11-04-2006, 02:48 AM
Yeah.
It Kinda reminds me of Super Smash Brothers

stickboy96
11-04-2006, 11:03 AM
I think i should learn more before i post another pivot animation

ngriesedieck
11-04-2006, 11:18 AM
Indeed. Have you looked at any tuts?

matt g
11-04-2006, 09:25 PM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/6550/halfomon2yt4.th.gif (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halfomon2yt4.gif)
what level animator am I

matt g
11-04-2006, 09:27 PM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/4858/coolgravityzn0.th.gif (http://img146.imageshack.us/my.php?image=coolgravityzn0.gif) another smoothe cartoon

Anarchey
11-04-2006, 09:49 PM
ok if you think thats smooth your mistakin your not even low low beginner and you need to look at tuts.

Überschall
11-05-2006, 02:00 AM
Thats the truth. You're miles away from low beginner. It's not smooth, and the 1. one is waaayy too slow.
And don't use Defaults.

matt g
11-05-2006, 08:28 AM
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/7604/coolstufmi3.th.gif (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=coolstufmi3.gif) what about this one made it in 10 mins too

Überschall
11-05-2006, 08:33 AM
Sucks.
The Walking was bad, his legs cross too fast (Did they even cross?)
And the jumps were off.
Look at tuts

salty
11-05-2006, 09:18 PM
here is mine guys it is my first

http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=54353cc5.gif

cantdoright
11-05-2006, 09:43 PM
this is not my frist but it is my frist one on piviot. frist was on a new grounds game. Quote plz

http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=thefallvw9.gif

Dragonkof
11-06-2006, 12:47 AM
Salty: Poor Falling Position, Blood to slow.... ok for a first.. YES!! YOU DIDN"T USE DEFAULT!!! which makes me doubt that thats your first

Cantdoright: choppy, bad movements, and why does that line duddenly appear?
hmmmmmmm..... needs lots of practice

Both: Read Tuts, Study piv.s.... the usual

power fuse0
11-06-2006, 09:33 AM
actually he did use defualt, it was the piv 3 defeault

FallenTaco
11-06-2006, 03:52 PM
to meh both of them the falls look bad

ar-jv
11-06-2006, 08:45 PM
I was trying out frame spacing but failed lol. i put the frame rate to low but i think its pretty good

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/4102/doublepuchflyawayve3.gif
^^Creds to baha for the Green stickeh

cantdoright
11-06-2006, 09:26 PM
Salty: Poor Falling Position, Blood to slow.... ok for a first.. YES!! YOU DIDN"T USE DEFAULT!!! which makes me doubt that thats your first

Cantdoright: choppy, bad movements, and why does that line duddenly appear?
hmmmmmmm..... needs lots of practice

Both: Read Tuts, Study piv.s.... the usual


Ha now its better oh and the reason the line apears is caz its scrolling down.
Now there is walking!!!! =D walking is a frist for me.

http://img462.imageshack.us/my.php?image=thefallri6.gif

ar-jv
11-06-2006, 10:00 PM
It's okay but the guy should move more when he's falling and the stick is to small so the walking looks shitty. Add some more stuff maybe make him land on his feet then own another stick

ngriesedieck
11-07-2006, 04:19 AM
X-Quiz-It, that was not very good. The punch was okay, but the legs didn't go anywhere and the flying back SUCKED.
There's a little thing called gravity in this magical world of ours.

ar-jv
11-07-2006, 05:54 AM
Yea i know the flying back sucked but ill try to improve it. and the legs?? on who the green guy

Überschall
11-07-2006, 06:42 AM
x-quiz it, you suck balls. Once cuz your animating skills are looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow beginenr
and 2. cuz you steal pics and give em to people who dont know it.

You sick nazi bastard.

ngriesedieck
11-07-2006, 01:00 PM
That was a dumb post.
And yeah, the guy who's punching is like waddling.

Forbes
11-07-2006, 01:10 PM
Hi. I dont normally do pivot but i thought id give it a try.

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e59/forbesbeedie/walkandjumptest.gif


sorry its so slow but the speed wont boost when i export it as a gif.

FallenTaco
11-07-2006, 01:36 PM
thats is pretty cool why does he fall down he arms is to heavy or some thing?

Forbes
11-07-2006, 01:38 PM
Nah. He puched himself in the thy. lol and the he jumped on him

FallenTaco
11-07-2006, 01:42 PM
lol that nice when he jump on him that look bad....

Überschall
11-07-2006, 01:52 PM
That was a dumb post.


I just needed to say that

ngriesedieck
11-07-2006, 02:51 PM
Actually, fatboy, that was okay for a first. But the part in the beginning was weird and hard to folow.

cantdoright
11-09-2006, 04:38 PM
It's okay but the guy should move more when he's falling and the stick is to small so the walking looks shitty. Add some more stuff maybe make him land on his feet then own another stick

Only one quote you guys suck = [

but mr.moo rocks(mr.moo is still in animation progress.)

ang3lofwar
11-09-2006, 09:05 PM
my first lolololol


http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/610/dannysfirsted7.gif

cantdoright
11-09-2006, 09:42 PM
my first lolololol


http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/610/dannysfirsted7.gif

nice man for a biginer

although i am to

Anarchey
11-10-2006, 05:03 AM
very stiff and I don't think that was your first because you didn't use the default but ok anyways fiziks where way off and so was the gun attacks have it have a ground next time and welcome to SPP!

ang3lofwar
11-10-2006, 05:58 AM
lol its because goreysticks is my best friend and he taught me sort of kind of

power fuse0
11-10-2006, 06:41 AM
^^ your ame is danny?

fog35
11-11-2006, 02:33 PM
hi everone i havent posted anything for like months because im working on ...... a movie called the dumb and dumber it might be short or it might be long i dont know but stay tuned

FallenTaco
11-11-2006, 02:51 PM
umm ok you can posted it when done and we dont need to know about it....but ok

Anarchey
11-11-2006, 02:58 PM
yea seriously we don't need to know unless you are posting an animation.

sexybeast
11-11-2006, 05:44 PM
here is my 1st one..

http://pivothost.org/upload/xz5/1163306389.gif

Sawc
11-11-2006, 07:24 PM
everything was way too slow and choppy........ and u need to make him walk better.......... but keep trying

cantdoright
11-11-2006, 11:11 PM
my frist blood animation yeah

Quote Plz

http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=killwithaswordky5.gif

Dragonkof
11-12-2006, 12:23 AM
blood was......

strange.... read tuts, study pivs..... what most people do.....

Anarchey
11-12-2006, 07:10 AM
ok....that was a strange way to do a stab but anyways yea just do what ^^he said

cantdoright
11-12-2006, 12:22 PM
blood was......

strange.... read tuts, study pivs..... what most people do.....

can you give me a link to the tuts plz

Überschall
11-12-2006, 12:33 PM
just look at the Tutorials section.
You'll find loads of tuts there ;)

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=115

stick man c
11-13-2006, 03:34 PM
Here is my first one.

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/4029/stick2gw2.gif

and there is this:

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/4964/stick4lr6.gif

and this: http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9923/billystick1vs0.gif

FallenTaco
11-13-2006, 04:28 PM
1st one:what where those thing?
2nd:need to bend his legs on the jump
3rd:to fast and make him slowly dresspear
overall:you might want to use a ground it would be eaeiser to do things

stick man c
11-13-2006, 05:45 PM
1st one:what where those thing?
2nd:need to bend his legs on the jump
3rd:to fast and make him slowly dresspear
overall:you might want to use a ground it would be eaeiser to do things

Thanks for the help I have only used stick pivot animator for 3 days now. Also those sticks where ... sticks. Also I dont really know how too do slow dissapear :(.