i made a new song

[Sonoya]

http://www.truploader.com/view/527276

its not great but i made some progress D: i hope

[Scarecrow]

listening to it now, it's nice

i think it could use a nice bass line though, it seems kind of empty without one. but then again maybe that's what you were aiming fo

oh the bass just showed up 3 and a half minutes in

i think there should have been more bass earlier on, and a bit more variation in the actual song towards the end

but it's good

[Sonoya]

listening to it now, it's nice

i think it could use a nice bass line though, it seems kind of empty without one. but then again maybe that's what you were aiming fo

oh the bass just showed up 3 and a half minutes in

i think there should have been more bass earlier on, and a bit more variation in the actual song towards the end

but it's good

thanks, :) well yh i was trying to get a bit if the "empty" in to it for kind of a way to get an atmospheric feel i really couldnt think of a melody and all so variation is my weakness here

[Scarecrow]

i know what you mean, i suck at melodies

[Überschall]

The Pad in the beginning should have a longer release time, it sounds too chopped off and doesn't really fit in.
That kind of bleep thing you get in there, the first one, should lose the very last 5 or so notes. Those kind of sound... not good to me. I don't know, might just be me, but they kind of make the melody cheesy. :/
Also what's up with those bleeps getting louder for like two seconds every time the bassdrum drops out? That's kindof annoying. I'm thinking maybe the bleeps, especially the square one might wanna get leveled down a little bit. They're a bit too loud for the soundtrack character of the track. The bass is a little too prominent in the outro I'd say, but maybe that's what you're up for.
I actually really enjoyed this, kind of reminds me of these International Superstar Soccer games for the N64, those used to have music like this...

[Sonoya]

The Pad in the beginning should have a longer release time, it sounds too chopped off and doesn't really fit in.
That kind of bleep thing you get in there, the first one, should lose the very last 5 or so notes. Those kind of sound... not good to me. I don't know, might just be me, but they kind of make the melody cheesy. :/
Also what's up with those bleeps getting louder for like two seconds every time the bassdrum drops out? That's kindof annoying. I'm thinking maybe the bleeps, especially the square one might wanna get leveled down a little bit. They're a bit too loud for the soundtrack character of the track. The bass is a little too prominent in the outro I'd say, but maybe that's what you're up for.
I actually really enjoyed this, kind of reminds me of these International Superstar Soccer games for the N64, those used to have music like this...
yeah im getting you. i couldn't really get how to make the pads sound right towards me because if the release time was too late i think the notes would clash easily ruining the whole song so i made it short to make it go with it. the bleeps were to make it sorta cute in such a way but due to my uncreative spirit in melodys it hade to come out this way. and the bass.. you got me there. glad u enjoy the song

[Spooned]

Oh dude nice that is amazing and trippy.